http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98055
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96664
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96675

Listen...Plz..to ya'll who feel Down..Read this pz


not to crack the wipp on peeps who Strive for Exposure
all i wanna do here w/ this verse is deal a little Closure
please!...for all the peeps who Hunger for RB's Respect
stop worrying about it..Spark some Bud..N get Wrecked
see i Detect..that you become Hostile and make Threads
to let people know that you're damn near at the Edge
of being drawn into Refuge coz you recieve no Praise
so wot..ya names not Mentioned..we all see better Days
its jus a Stupid Craze..that some Paranoid members Engage
feeling Dim in the Dark..not gettin enuf Limelight on Stage
this is b/coz..there is over 20,000 young, fit Potentials
each w/ a mission to out do each others Credentials
this site is just the Net..remember that wen you go to Sleep
if you follow this rule then your Sanity is in Safe Keep
I'm not stepping Moral Highground or trying to Mock you
Paranoid moments are Natural..Boy i've had A Few
at the end of the day, you got (i hope) a Normal Life to Lead
coz if you worry too much..your Fuckin hair Will Receed..lmao
last of my comment----If any of youz Ever Feel Like Shit
keep it to yourself and don't Tell the Whole World about It

RB awards dont mean shit lol...get over it pz

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im feeling you twin this is hot and a good rep and us in to your sig and be active.

yo this was a good Piece.....i Felt the Structure was great....Flow Kicked Ass In it Ya Have Done Necular Concepts Proud this is a hela Good Piece Ya Vocab was good.....WorrdPlay worked well....Wasn't too Long wasn't too short so it was Good....I Liked it All and all a Tight Open Mic.....Peace..(v)..

Yeah i agree this was a good piece here....enjoyed the read overall....everything in this seemed pretty well i thought...structure was good....flow in this was real nice, i liked that...Vocab also was nice in here....overall a good piece...keep at it.

yo good reppin nigga, this piece was fire. i was realy feelin ya on this.
your flow was great. you neva went off topic in this, vocab, multis also great.
overall a 9.5/10.

yo hit up this link and drop some feedback on the piece.
THX, PEACE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4171#post984171

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Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

i gotta agree this was good shit...the way you structured it was specially nice, it kept the flow going good.....good job man.....pZ...

Nice piece here like everyone said the structure was nice
Good flow here
Peace.

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I've seen this topic like 19832654657 TIMES... but each time

cats still be rippin it... an son... ya ripped ... kill em son

just be like... fuck all who apose my nuts in ya nose (some shyt like dat)

caesar on3

^^^^wtf?????
uppin

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dope dope dope up in here, I like that verse, really good flow, the words pop off pretty good, it all matches ya know. As killa said, 1 million peeps wrote about it, but everybody has kind of a authentic touch in it ya know, whatever, I really like what u doin

___________uppin

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uppin___

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nice wordplay...

i remember u from another site..

hmmm recalls name..
doesnt come to mind..

did u spit on a previous site...

wuts da name cuz i no u did..

good shit....

pretty good.. it could of been better though.. good wordplay, nice peice.. i give it a 7/10

RTM, Rm etc
hit me up on aim= PsDetained

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