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Big Tom - Saddam Diss
Formula MC and Masta C - World Situations
Crackabox187 - Had To Burn One First

Imran was on my wing in Strangeways Prison (Cheetham Hill, Manchester, UK). We had some beef, which ended in the death of his brother. 2 months ago, i spit these lyrics in front of 150 people in Havana Nightclub.

SHYNE MC - Freestyle over ‘Dizzie Rascal’s - Fix Up Look Sharp Instrumental”. Don’t read it…emcee it…

Intro

Punjabi Shurabi Productions, DJ Rza, Shyne Emcee, blu, blu, blu...blow me/

Verse 1

Imran, ya sister sucks dick like a Dyson/
Python give her blows to her ribs like Tyson/
U lied son, that’s why Shahid had to die son/
Punjabi’s don't chat shit to get people frightened/
Tash from da streetz representin Manchester/
Ya bwoy got locked down coz he a molester...
...tryin scare lil kids like Casper/
I enjoyed breakin his neck like Busta/
Musta have to reveal the statistics and stats/
Fuck baseball bats (ha ha), that night we pulled out gats/
Now ya bitches addicted to ma raps...
like heroin to hood rats/
U want the facts? Im lyrically brown like Jaffa's/
Rip MC's to shreds like crisp rappers…
and if Dappers try to act too slick...
U know Tash like Giggs…too quick/
Too sick…like a Pamela Flick/
'Snap' goes ya spine like a Camera Click/
Are u David Blaine related? Coz ya family full of trick's/
Fart's don't have lumps, that’s why ur runnin with the shitz/

Verse 2

Verse Two…If lyrics be kosher, this tight like a Jew/
True…like Budweiser brew/
I’ll stamp on you, wipe the shit of my shoe/
Feed u anestic, seal ya lips with glue/
Punjabi Shurabi Crew…Nas u knew we was gonna come for u too/
Rza on bail…now what the fuck u gonna do?
I think u just followed thru…coz the stench be like ya Mercedes tyres (ha ha)/
We set fags like u on fire/
Call Stacy Messiah…or keep payin Rza for ya protection/
My affection...infects you brain cells like Anthrax/
I make ya gal watch as the blood drips like her used tampax/
Clamp 'n' tax…ya ride and die attitude while ma ice freeze ya...
...like Captain Planet on Amiga/
Son, u was too eager...but a Right Little Fony'/
Think ya old skool, go play…My Little Pony'/
Im genuine 'u owe me'...u was never ma homie/
Tash Shyne...now u fuckin know me/

Outro

Punjabi Shurabi Crew, DJ Rza, kill it....we out (music ends)

..Hmmm...????....Hmmm???...

I aint like it, yo ..

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Last Poet: - WTF? Reply with comments (good or bad, explain why?)

Camarac - Explain?/ Don't Reply...nuff said!

nice to see another asian on the net, but its a bad idea to big yaself up just because of your race, thats not cool.

Sorry about ya bruvva, but as your lyrics go, there pretty weak and didnt seem constructed enough. Flow lacked and everything was kinda poor really.

keep elevating bruv aight

Ayura: Thankz for ya comments.

About the race thing: Im extremely proud to be Punjabi. Its 'ok' to big up ya race, as long as u don't hate others. Remember this is a bhangra remix (u can't hear the extra beats i produced on the net).

Please do not tell me to explain in my reply again, ever. I reply when a piece is worth replying to, when it's complete utter bullshit with one syllable rhyming and zero flow, you get a bullshit response for wasting my time and effort to read it.


Now fuck off and go write something worth my time, newbie.

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Sup?

I said explain or don't reply. "complete utter bullshit with one syllable rhyming and zero flow" - That wasn't so hard was it, son! Thank you for replying.

..."newbie" - not at battle raps, not at MC'ing on audio and not at producing beats. On this site maybe, but explain properly before u tell me to "fuck off" - childish, lol!

Ok mr. outlaw records battle rap champion of 2 years ago

battle ME.

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Camarac (or should i say cataracs...coz u can't see shit)

Ive challanged over 300 people and have only lost 2 battle's (one against somebody called 'The Realnezz' and the other against somebody called 'Trapped'. What makes u think ur on my level to compete?

If u can't take criticism don't talk shit!

^LOL

Ooooooh gooooooo Tash

Yeah, like the catarac's line hasn't been used by 489753498759345 person on the fucking board already you un-original fuck. You beat 300 people? DO I LOOK AS IF I CARE? No. If i added up every win ive had i'd say 800+ easily and secondly .. look at the guys fucking name you lost to, he still has Z's at the end of his name for fucks sakes! Lololol .. who have you been beating?! MC_LyriKilLL_SpiTTaH89787 and WhYteNiggA_13's over at some E Z board ?!

It's whatever kid. Put up or shut up. Battle me.

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cam is always funny as hell when i'm high......haha....yeah you guys should definitely battle..............peace........

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nice to see another manc on this site...What???????
I didn't think so!!!!!!!!Aiight piece this mate but obviously
This was meant to be said not read cos as a read it
looks kinda bland but MC'd it sometimes,as in this
case don't have to be complex to be affective.....

VERDICT???....Nice stuff...keep reppin manc....

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