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D-ICED 1 16.67%
*Troop* 5 83.33%
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Old 10-13-04, 01:17 AM   #1
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
D-ICED vs *Troop*

IP: D135 D6AF

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 =K.o

Tired of ya Bullshit Statements

Minimum posts to vote: 400

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Old 10-14-04, 03:59 PM   #2
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*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 03:59 PM.
 
Old 10-14-04, 04:12 PM   #3
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
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*Grabs Mic*
Ya ready 4 sumone 2 Ko this Bitch
Feel Me on this U Bitch
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Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps

No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff

Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines

You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's
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*Drops Mic*

And thats all u gone get outta me u Fuckin Pussy
Lets see u Ko that shit muthafucka
U jus got exposed u fuckin Chump
And i keyed this shit in bout 10 Minz u fuckin Clown
....Nuff Said....
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Old 10-14-04, 04:14 PM   #4
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
IP: D135 D6AF

*Grabs Mic*
Ya ready 4 sumone 2 Ko this Bitch
Feel Me on this U Bitch

Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps

No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff

Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines

You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's


*Drops Mic*

And thats all u gone get outta me u Fuckin Pussy
Lets see u Ko that shit muthafucka
U jus got exposed u fuckin Chump
And i keyed this shit in bout 10 Minz u fuckin Clown
....Nuff Said....
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Old 10-14-04, 11:36 PM   #5
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D-ICED has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 11:36 PM.
 
Old 10-14-04, 11:38 PM   #6
D-ICED
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From: NEW YORK
IP: 5671 DBDD

*Smacks the shit outta Troop*
*Picks mic back up and smacks this bitch again*



Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink



*Smacks the shit outta the little boy a thrid time and tells him DONT EVER BE IN GROWN MEN BUSSINESS AGAIN*
*Leaves the stage in digust at this lame*
 
Old 10-14-04, 11:38 PM   #7
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jus incase if ya didnt get the closer

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153438
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Old 10-14-04, 11:48 PM   #8
BkBrawla
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*

IP: 0825 899A

Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps

No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff

Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines

You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PUNCHES NICE PERSONALS NICE FLOW



Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD FLOW GOOD PUNCHES GOOD PERSONALS NICE WORDPLAYS


V-TROOP HE CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

D-ICED- NICE VERSE U HAD GOOD PERSONALS NICE PUNCHES BUT TROOP CAME ALOT HARDER MAYNE


I THINK TROOP SHOULD GET DA WIN CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

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Old 10-15-04, 12:44 AM   #9
In-Vision
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From: memphis
IP: AF76 A123

Voted For: *Troop*

pretty good battle...lines i liked...everything from troop.cept i wasn't feelin the ray charles line...it sounded forced...


and same with empire...accept for i wasn't feelin the jerri kurls line..........so this is a close one....g'luck

In-vision requested vote was a feedback instead
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Old 10-15-04, 01:17 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for D-ICED

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lmao.... this was some good shyt, y'all... i laughed thru both verses...lol... tight shyt... but I ain't gon say who won... the truth will come out if kats vote the same way i saw it...lol
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Old 10-15-04, 02:14 PM   #11
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IP: AC79 CE51

Voted For: *Troop*

both of you actually did good.. im suprised at emp for actually posts a below average verse.....
EMp: ya shit was iight.. nothing special...... nice overall but you had some flaws.. ya structre was noty that good which i thought you needed to improve very mucvh on...but ya flow was iight but at some partds ya flow didnt go to good.. ya personals were a bit better than i usually expect from you..... actually a lil harder.. ya punches did very good... decently strong..... didnt feel the closer very much though.. but the middle was iight..... good job.. im shocked.. LOL

Troop: ya shit was very good nice overall... nice lines...... but i though that ya structre was messed up like a mofo and its streched up so much too.... so emp got you with the flow and stucutre.. which he normally doesnt ghet... but troop came in with way harder punches that was good.. peronals ehh.. i wasnt feelin those shit much.. but it was iight...

both of yuo gotta stop using explinaation cos i deduct points from that..
Vote troop.. for a slighly better verse
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Old 10-15-04, 02:31 PM   #12
Yvonne
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*

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fuckin hell this battle was HOT!!!...

TROOP had some tight ass punches...his vocab was way wider...he had some gd personals too...on empires side..he had tight ass punches...vocab wasnt as rich as troop's tho...he had some personals..but troop gets this too...both were tight..and both verses were fluent..props to both..but i aint voting tho....


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Old 10-15-04, 02:45 PM   #13
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damn...if i COULD vote i would give this to Troop...Empire yes u may say that im d/rin cuz he in my crew...no...if u check his battles i have voted against him...

Troop i liked ya punches they hit harder in this one...ya opener was stretched...so u can work on that...ya wordplay was good too..punches were origional as well...

Empire..i didnt understand ya opener...i see where it was goin but you shoulda worded it betta..it woulda hit harder..i really didnt understand ya punches...so u need to work on ya wordplay and how u word ya punchs...cuz the p.c. line......closer was a personal...but u coula made that a personal and a punch too..

so if i could vote i would give it to Troop...but A.I stand up
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Old 10-15-04, 04:55 PM   #14
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This was feedback posted for D-ICED

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Old 10-15-04, 05:04 PM   #15
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