AIGHT.............here's the deal........16 bars.............due tommorow.........



NO crew votes, and begging for votes

WTF?????16 bars no way ppl will get bored of reading.........10-15 lines

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Fuk u man imma start keyin now cant b waitin on a fake ass emccee 2 finish pre writin

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This nigga thinks he's is a pro emcee but he can't retaliate...
You got less balls than a man wit cancer, eatin through his pro-state....
On RB.com, all these disses pushin in, with very little effort....
Battlin Cashvillin your bound to feel some dis-com-fort...
Its me you should be focusing on, but its ma rhymes you analyze...
Its now to late to turn back, now your gettin viciously paralyzed...
Ima kill you in this battle, literally,my flow bow has been drawn.....
Hit you wit ONE punch and leave you absourbing blood like a tampon....
My punches are hitting you every time and damaging your health.....
You Can't see me, cause like "Metal Gear Solid", I move in stealth...
Your still a virgin,only person you "fucked" was yourself when you accepted this battle....
Im an intimadator,rappin originater you just bout 2 be shook like i do to a babys rattle...
^^whole verse shook, You cudnt rap n e faster............
You dont even make up your own lines, thats a big factor....
You steel lines and rap them, man u just an actor.....

Im Done now hurry and drop ya pre written Shit you 24 year old wanabee emcee

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cum on bitch wheres ur wack verse at????step up and drop ya pre written shit

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uppin this so this herb can c it and drop

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Fuck you you chump.......I have a job that i work at ..............Got to pay the bills first before i merk bitchez like you.........

MC AINES, cant you see this mc is taking aim?
you couldnt light a mic even if you spit propane,
your so vane, you probably, think this raps about you,
your the only cat in england that gives a crap about you,
I doubt you can handle, dont come fool with me bitch,
if you was a stool sample, you still wouldnt be shit,
so beat it Michael jackson, or like Pee wee, go yank it,
throw your ass in the mix, 3 fags wrapped up in a blanket,
im thankin ya for the chance,and im gettin my first win,
fuck your wack verse bitch, Ill just spit my shit again,
I burst wind, specifically in your general direction,
your girlfriend keeps beggin to lick my genitals and erection,
your second guessin yourself, well, theres always tommorow,
your styles so played, you dont even bite, you borrow,
your hollow plus narrow, chirping like a fucking sparrow,
son, I aint on your nerves, Im on your fucking bone marrow,



fuck you you little smart ass chump.......... VILLIN

now lets get some votes people............show this smart ass whats up

hmm...decent battle...

Mc Aines...u started off pretty good...but as the verse went u got weaker...the metal gear solid line had no thought behind it really...no wordplay or anything...rhymes were just decent....vocab was the best thing in ur verse...

Cashvilln...ok work on some small things....put more wordplay into ur shit...rhyme a little better...and maybe use some more vocab..and u'll be pretty fuckin good...u got a nice flow...a few good lines..I like ur closer "not gettin on ur nerves, I'm gettin on ur bone marrow"...use more lines like that...

vote-Cashvilln...u took this but not by a whole lot...decent verse tho..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1148442

^ needs votes...would be appreciated

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this battle was bad but cash vilian took this
he had hella good punches but mc aines
had me lafin wit that tampon line that
was about it on the utha side but villian
tooks this my vote vilian

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Uppin # 1 lets get some more votes you cats...........we all know the mc aines man is a faggot........lets merk him

i would give this battle to MC AINES, his bars were more thoughtful and custom,cashvillin yo shit was mostly old wack and poorly structured

VOTE = MC AINES

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE IM IN I NEED IT QUICK CUZ DIS NIGGS BOUT TO CLOSE IT DOWN HERES THE LINK
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111506

Uppin for votes.... # 2
Lets get some positive feedback guys, not some wack ass views like from a dumbass
Puertoricanelly........by the way, what kinda fucking wack ass name is that