u can spit first cause u cant make a thread, other than that, ur same rules, ill spit 30 minutes after you

Arite dats strate, i'll spit in a few mins......

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Im da type dat'll murk ya wit spit an no motive...
Test me for my skills which one u want im so loaded//
Im on point in dis battle wit neva a dull moment...
My rhymes hot I'll feed ya wit em leavin ya so bloated//
Got bars to spit let u candy coat my lyrics...
So it dont hurt as bad when ya big ears gotta hear it//
U ready to play a game kid im the leader u can follow...
Next Hide-an-seek in ya head, cuz im leavin ya skull hollow//
Dont know why u wanna battle u obviously dont spit u swallow...
Ur rhymes crash harder than the crew of da apollo//
Not hard to beat a kid dats so soft and tender...
Im talkin a lame ass bitch dat woulda been better off to surrender//
How u pronounce ya name bitch, spell it out in phonetics...
Ya sweet ho ass, a trap to gay diabetics//
Ya I said it, dis battle done, ova its finished...
Ya little school boy bitch take ya down to da clinic//

Blah... MALICE

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yo, maybe this mothafucka just cant read time
unless he really need 2.5 minutes for each line
i couldnt get a grip on ur lyrics, so here, sieze mine
i battle u for free, but it costs me, its like a free fine
a flyweight that cant make a fuckin battle here
thats rare, like a cowboy, who cant use sattle gear
for takin forty minutes dawg, u sure didnt say shit
and ull have some wack excuse, like ur computer delayed it
he should have submitted a blank post, now its easy to make fun of him
and if a mod reads this, theyll either ban or punish him
dawg, if a cop read this shit, they be give u jail time
so why go the full twenty, ill rip u in twelve lines

I CAN'T VOTE less than 100 posts

I can ONLY give me -personal- input

Malice
The first punch was a nice opener,
nice multis, throughout the verse,
coulda use a lil mo vocab, wordplay etc
But overall a RESPECTABLE verse

Kuniva
I read the time and made a lil sense of your dis
(Nice)
decent multis, (might want to FORTIFY them)
Decent punchs (can ALWAYS be upped)
Overall STRONG verse

Close battle

Again I can not vote but if I could ....
(my personal vote goes to Malice)
Based on STRONGER multis, a few good punchlines, and overall flow


I felt each perspective

Keep it real

Keep doing your thing

JamesJr.

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112397
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111729

2nd Battle NEEDS 4
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111647
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110858

My Vote Goes to Malice
Punches were harderm, flow i give to both of you..bu structure and vocab I give too malice..ne wayz it was a good battle..peace

p.s...can u guyz vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111608

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress

votez...... uppin..........

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Malice took vocab strucutre and punches for sho but it was a tie in flow...
poor multies...( i dont think there was any)
metas poor

Over all Malice punches win battles

vote on this.......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111683

opener-Malice, i feel that a personal is good to start with during an opener
opener-kuniva, nice, makes since, reaserched the math, good opener
2-4-Malice, doesnt make sence to me, does hot stuff make u bloated?
2-4-kuniva, i like how u stay with the same rhyme scheme, but weak punch
5-6-Malice, really in need of a good personal right here, and u have none
5-6-kuniva, funny, good personal and punch
7-8-Malice, ok punch, but U NEED A PERSONAL
7-8-kuniva, kinda weak, but just as good as Malice's 7-8
8-10-Malice, the gay shit is getting really played, hey, try a personal
8-10-kuniva, mediocre punch, but funny
11-12-Malice, this is the last one im doing for malice, he need personals

ok still uppin, thanx for advice tho

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uppin 4 votes plz (1)

yo come on yall, no sleepin on dis battle, we both need this win...

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Kuniva definetly took this... his punches hit harder and the feeding worked in this situation... flow was better and less stretched also...

my vote - Kuniva


Teturn the favor and hit up one of my battles

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still workin on my posts, but i would vote for malice. the gay diabetics line was very clever and well worded, and malice's opponent tried to sound like he had an obvious disadvantage, even though malice went first.

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