5 barz

.iLL. spits first

G/L

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

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checkity, check check, checkitty, check check...look at frosty goooo00!

checkins are so boring...why not be creative..

just some quick shit..

-\Opener/-
Ima Make This Nigga 'unknown', It'd Be Best If Ya Just Postpone//
Voters Mistake Me For A 'pituatary gland', I'll 'make this whore-moan'(hormone)// (1)

-\Sorry To Be So Mean..But../-
Beat My Style? Kid Your Like 'Egypt' In 'a-state-of-de-nile'//
Reaching My Potential Is Like A Fat Kid Running 5 Miles// (2)

Like 'Auntie Kaths' Cookies, Yur Gonna Get Rolled, Roasted, Then Off To Dispatch//
This Battle's Like Women's Sumo Wrestlin, The Way Its A Huge 'Miss-Match'// (3)

I Could Give A Fuck About Intoxicated Cause Hes Fake Like A Silicone Titty//
Only Time Yur Flow Is Dope Is When U Do "coke lines" Like Whitney// (4)

-\Dat, Dat..Dat's All Folks!/-
My fist to ya face will 'connect' Faster Than DSL//
Have Ya 'ringin' More Times Than The Alexander Graham Bell// (5)

aLL you dawG..goooood luuuuuck...

Son...
I've seen that wordplay before... is ya brain in two spots??
Tox blazin ya drop ... i'm so .iLL. it can't be .contained in two dots. (Think on this 1)
rhymes haunt you ... echo in ya head like base in a box
ya punches?? ya, they're all forced ... like fakin a cough
leave you traced in the chalk ... another case for the cops
splattered ya head on cement n cleaned ya brains wit a mop
im sick of wack ass bitches who keep claimin they nice
But really couldn't think under pressure wit their brain in a vice
got you duct taped n tied ... got razors n knives that takin ya life
you couldnt escape if you were a dragon in a cage made of ice

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

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hmm...aight battle...
but v/ intox
He had better punches and tha only one with personals
liked tha 2 dots one.. and tha dragon punch
...iLL.. get rid of all that shit you put in it
like tha \I'm gay so I'll Label my opener/
you had punches but they were horribly played
And they were not directed to intox at all

.ill. change ya style dawg...we get what the opener and closer is dawg...jus fucks with the flow...your lines are stretched...came with too many played lines and/or concepts..try and be more creative and original with ya verse man....ANd shorten ya lines
Intox- you got this battle cause of ya personals...and punches..both were harder and more original than ills...Still a few played lines in there....but otherwise a ok verse...Vote=Intox

PLease drop an honest vote ehre guys...thanks... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786

Dis goes to Intoxicated hands down

.ILL. - you need to change ur style cause it didnt flow as well as toxics.You had a few good punches but overall u had no theme or style to it your stucture was all over da place.

Intoxicated - Good rymes and flow you attacked well but couldove done better dont get me wrong it was a good spit. ya punches?? ya,
Overall good match but my Unofficial vote goes to : Intoxicated

P.S Need votes and opinions on 1 of my battles
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Knightmare VS DemonHunter ROUND 2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113159

Aiight I peeped ya's, could you return the favor

^^ Fuck you

Uppin for some votes..........................................

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

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this battle was aight

ill you had some decent lines,

the miss-match line was funny but alot of them where played

the first two i have seen b4 with almost the same wording

intox was just a little better with nicer structure

i also didnt like the labels throughout the verse

vote intox

Uppin For Votes #3...........................................

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

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Drop a link, I'll return the favor

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

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AIGHT..

.iLL. ...your flow was aight..the punches seemed ok, but some were played like the Whitney Houston line..other then that your punches were ok..you could have used personals to help you in this one tho..

Intoxicated, your ryme scheme was better..and the first line was Nice..mad nice..LoL
you had personals that iLL didnt, so i give this One to you easily..It's about the Prersonals Kids..Honestly..in my opinion...

vote Intoxicated..


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