Startin' a crew, drop a verse for evaluation

Crew consistes of:
Stabbolical
Nephew J

Crew name:
Lyrical Crooks

Oh damn, me in a crew, yall done fucked up. NIggaz, this goin'a be tha shit so drop that verse or link for eval.

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

yo look aat his battle record, who did u win against? it must suck to be them.

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how r u gonna evaluate peeps when ur 1-7 roflmfao wow thats funny
anyways good luck with ur crew i guess

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shit thats b4 I was really in this rap shit not givin a fuck, look at my verses on LGB an' Lil Nae2 then say I can't spit

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

ill drop some shit ok check it here it goes im new so tell me what u think.
::::: see u shouldnt of f@ck#d with me,they call me streetsweepa-mb from the city limits of l-p-. see your like a snake u bit of more u can chew you try to be a pimp but u paid for more than u can screw u better go home and have ur mommy make u some beef stew cause ill win when this whole thing is through.

aight mayne, check this

cuss words no %$#@ shit, straight word

ya need structure an elavate on ya vocab then drop another verse

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

lol im signin my release papers

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Blue Print

B.P.

dont try out 4 them u could do way better they r the wackest on this site lol

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lol....nah will i aint trying out for them

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Blue Print

B.P.

aight yo, crew grew by one mayne, now its:
Nephew J
Stabbolical
streetsweepa

so moe yall drop verses, then I'll let ya know whats up

Tha Lyrical Crooks

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

Imma newbie so dont expect much

The crooks 'massacre' anybody, we'll eat you in a battle for calling us 'trash you turd'/
Our rhymes get 'heard' around the 'world', and then we'd embarass and 'unfurl' your 'homosexuality'/
In a battle we'd make you 'frown and flee', watch as we make these 'cowards bleed'/
'Assasinate' these fools, and 'asphyxiate' in a cruel manner/
Our styles are 'standard' and unbeatable, kill these 'bastard', our rhymes leave you 'stunned and eatable'!!/
Rhymes are so distinctive its 'repeatable' for 10 'years'/
Leave vets with 'fear in tears' after kicking your 'rears', rhymes so good it breaks off your 'ears'/
The crooks are 'incomparable', y'all would astonish me to 'dare to say we're dull'!!/
The most phenomenal in the 'planet', they only call me Concrete cause my rhymes are as hard as 'granite'/

My bad if it sucked....uppin

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Battle Record
0-1
Wins-
Losses-Kingz
KOs-

~What goes around, comes around~

Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.

yo when i get some battles cleared up i'll battle everybody in ur crew, just one condition if i win drop this crew idea, if you win.. we will negotiate that

Just an idea though Im not in the crew, if they lose, they stop the crew, if you lose, you quit this site

just an idea, cause thats how It went down on a couple other sites ive been to

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Battle Record
0-1
Wins-
Losses-Kingz
KOs-

~What goes around, comes around~

Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.