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05-09-04, 10:03 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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enygma vs. kryogenix(topical match)
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 16 bar min. 32 bar max. topic:You wake up in an animated world but you are real......
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05-10-04, 08:28 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 20B5 2D66
Never did a topical......this should be fun.......Checkin in
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05-10-04, 11:37 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 4C29 B692
omfg
Dirtboy 2 topical battles in a row I swear you're fuckin gay checkin in I hope engyma dont get dick rode although I do see that coming BTW This topic sucks ass
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05-10-04, 01:52 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 1772 B262
Why do you think I would get dick rode? I mean, I just lost the Championship match and almost lost the one against JPoll.........I never get dick rode. I actually think people vote against me no matter what I put up.......so stop your bitchin and just write some shit up so we can get this over with......Oh, don't worry...I'm not gonna treat this like a regular battle like DirtBoy did last week.....LOL!!!!!
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05-10-04, 02:14 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 4C29 B692
thank god
you know what egyma you're kind of cool to be racist lets be friends
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05-10-04, 02:30 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 1772 B262
I guess I could hang the hood up for a while.....LOL.
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05-11-04, 07:38 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 4A8B 854D
First topical........
I sit up and stretch....rubbing my eyes with closed fists When i finally opened 'em, it's like they couldn't get focused I must be dreaming....none of this shit could be real Waking up with cartoons? someone must have slipped me a pill I went to bed alone....no one else on the mattress So why the fuck am I waking up next to Jessica Rabbit? And why the fuck is my alarm clock running away? Lysol can looking at me like it's got something to spray Slid out of the bed...ran to the bathroom to take a piss The toilet smiled at me and started moving to make me miss I couldn't believe it....the shower turned on all by itself Hopped in and was fully lathered by the soap on the shelf Jumped out the shower and watched the towel fly off the rack Started drying me off....even was nice on the sack Fuck it, I like this world...in the other one I wasn't happy I used to spit loony tunes, now I'm chilling with bugs and daffy Yeah, nothing but happiness...laughter around every bend Imagination's for suckers...I don't even have to pretend My old self starts to show...I do some shit out of habit Like hanging with Yogi Bear stealing pic-a-nic baskets I even keep a Grimace by chilling with the Hamburglar Clowning bitches like Ronald...turn 'em into masked murderers They'll always remember...mad thoughts in a solemn mind I took the Punisher to school...so he reinacted Columbine I snuck out the back unscaved...what an insidious plan Rollin over laughing...'til I saw Yosimitie Sam There he stood...two smoking barrels, one eye peeled As I saw the bullets coming I finally remembered....... ......I'M REAL!!!!!
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05-11-04, 07:42 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 59C1 BD9C
argh
Im gonna have to give the win to Engyma this weak ass topical was hard to work with... here's my verse anyway though When you was kid, you always wanted to be in a cartoon right? Well these are my old dreams of me being inside a real cartoon. Being a cartoon character, every kid's dream. Here in this place you know everything's funny Staring directly in the face of your friend Bugs Bunny Road Runner and Speedy Gonzalous racing to see who'll win Hearing Wile E. Coyote. being blown up once again Calling Marvin the Martian gay for wearing that green dress Seeing Superman save a Damsel that's in distress You walk around to explore this whacky toony town Your frown turns upside down cause you're getting looney now You wave at the Ninja Turtle as they fight Shredder with Swords Then glance at Curious George, dance past the 7 Dworves This whole world you adore, too bad it's not true dude EWWWW WHATS THATS SMELL? Wait, it's Pepe La PuPu Ha!, If only I really did live in this outrageous space and time But,I don't, that doesnt mean I still cant dream of it in my mind
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05-12-04, 03:23 AM | #9 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Kryo got outdone in this battle in every aspect except for flow... nice drop enygma for a first topical... kryo your could have been done but you kind of just started in the middle.. then left off in the middle... if you had a transition in and out it would have been better. Anyway, yes the topic is kinda fucked up, but
v/ enygma.
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05-12-04, 09:05 AM | #10 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for enygma:
flow:good threw the whole peice no off spots 7/10 volcab:nice use for the topic it worked well 7/10 story:not too good here i don't think you painted a good picture of cartoon life used lots of imagery and shit but the story didn't really go anyway there was no real twists or anything 6/10 overall:20/30 good verse espeicially for your first topical breakdown for kryogenix: flow:it was working i thought 7/10 volcab:kinda basic nothing great here 6/10 story:same problems as enygma i didn't see the story going anyway you did an alright job describing the world around you though not quite as well as enygma did 6/10 overall:19/30 vote--close battle i thought in the end enygma gets my vote though
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05-12-04, 01:01 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: 3600 9E98
no shit engyma won
this was the dumbest topical match in the history of topical matches I swear if this league continues to be ran by a complete idiot Im dropping out of it becauses there's no way in hell that a topic like "You wake up in an animated world but you are real." would have ever seen the light of day on old rb real rappers dont rap about being in a fuckin cartoon
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05-13-04, 08:59 AM | #12 | |||||||
The New King Of New York
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Well, Ima give this to Enygma, just because his was very complex, Thought after, even threw in something about Kryo's crew in the McDonald line, that was clever. The whole verse flowed and was very creative. Kryo, your's wasn't that bad, It was just a lot shorter, not that that's important, but it would have been good on it's on, but in comparison to Enygma's he just had a very interesting story-telling style, and that's why Ima give my vote to Enygma.
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05-13-04, 01:41 PM | #13 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
vote - enygma
side note: vote- no more topical... you suck at topics
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05-13-04, 06:49 PM | #14 | |||||
...i'm da nicest...
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IP: 322E 3373
this wasnt even worth the read
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05-13-04, 07:22 PM | #15 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
^^ You Always Dissing On Everyones Shit^^^
Newayz...Go Up To Both Of You... Enygma Gets My Vote Though Due To The Fact That His Wordplay and His Emotion Was Better. Kryo..I Know You Coulda Did Sum Hot Shit With This....But You Were Just Lazy. Topicals Are Always Fun...Love Them Myself... Good Drop To Both Of You...Just Diffrent Concepts and I Liked Enygmas Better ~R~ |
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