deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.

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these.....are....
...gonna...count....
...on...records....now...
...i...see...well....
...check....in.....dog....

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Check..

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hows this dude contending with me,his records responding negative-ly..
havin money clips attached to his feet,only time he walking with g's..
you son no-one,no gleamings from light,you couldn't shine with time..
him falling into electric blenders is the only time he on the grind..
you prolly think i need wit,or some type of bitten verse or script..
but really all i need are these punchlines,Post-Reply and a *click*..
like ya avatar,most everything you spit is so kiddie with rhymes..
herb by far,the only guns you hold are the ones with caution signs..
he has more than 10 ways to lose, so by far hes the most eclectic..
stompin in Feces is the only way shabba has good shit to step with..
tell me how it feels to be spinless, as im rippin on your Torso..
i came to my Conclusion.........:I Got A Ass Whoopin For You..

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wow 2nd no show.............I am tired of spittin for nothing yo... its 1:20 here man.. and in NY its like 2 or 3 am... so hes DQ'd..

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Cal can hit me with uzis, he still cant move me....
happy to be part of a crew, even tho hes capitols groupie...
rhyme word, bizzare could, so wut makes u think u all good...
1 punch and i already got this kid hittin the hardwood...
claims his hair is curly, that shit is jus naps...
Africans called they said they want they hairstyle back....
i dont blame u, its poll for makin me battle this herb...
sendin punches to ya head, so i can get on ya nerves...
no need to whore em, hes the king of boredom....
and the reason for his crew elevation forum....
This kid is a known lame, and "hoops" shouldve stuck to his own game...
embarrassed of himself, tried to smear out his own name...
wish i was dqed, tried to pull it off, give him a hand....
sike, this will be the second time hes merked by a one-man-band.

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wtf....i jus had to write that, i thought verses were due by next thursday.....plz dont dq me....sorry....
wtf, wut happened to the name smear, u jus fucked up my rhyme.

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lol... you hate rules dont you... your a day late, and you go over the line limit.. an dyea i change dmy name cause i knew you would spit some shit like that... Blurred names are played playa .. iight.. so are we getting votes or do i win by DQ..

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Cal was sorta played, he has changed his style but his lines were really predictable & have been done before...i prefer this new style you have but I mean start to think more complex........

eg....

hows this dude contending with me,his records responding negative-ly..
havin money clips attached to his feet,only time he walking with g's..


he has more than 10 ways to lose, so by far hes the most eclectic..
stompin in Feces is the only way shabba has good shit to step with..

^played...

but i did like.....

like ya avatar,most everything you spit is so kiddie with rhymes..
herb by far,the only guns you hold are the ones with caution signs..

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tell me how it feels to be spinless, as im rippin on your Torso..
i came to my Conclusion.........:I Got A Ass Whoopin For You..

o shit........& gott ahah at every thing u said...u had some great wit & hard hittin personals here.....

Cal can hit me with uzis, he still cant move me....
happy to be part of a crew, even tho hes capitols groupie...
^LOOOOOOOOOL

no need to whore em, hes the king of boredom....
and the reason for his crew elevation forum....
^best line here.

personals I liked......

This kid is a known lame, and "hoops" shouldve stuck to his own game...
embarrassed of himself, tried to smear out his own name...

wish i was dqed, tried to pull it off, give him a hand....
sike, this will be the second time hes merked by a one-man-band.

great verse...good wit & personal vote gotta. props for a good battle tho.

Nice drop, i admit.. but kid is DQ'd.... Why would you have 2 weeks to write 12 lines ? thats rediculiously long.. He had a full day to look at my verse and Match it.. Not cool...... But i aint one to whine, so keep the Votes comming..

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damn....i had battles at original, that site battle, then this league...i aint kno wtf i was doin son....but yea lets get some votes in...good drop too.

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uppin 4 votes............apo, u forgot to poll doggy......

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Come on ya'll... drop some votes.. i'll return the favors... i have voted on one one fore two battles.. and neither battles have dropped shit here.. stop sitting on ya asses.....

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cal-ehh,ur punches were okay they didnt hit hard tho,really wasn't any metaphors at all either,u flowed all right,,structure okay,overall i really wasn't feelin ur verse,but it was decent..

SR-ur punches were okay they hit harder then calamity's did,ur structure was good,ur flow it was decent,u did have a few personals,,and i seen some meta's thrown in,,overall i think u win for havin a better verse and harder hittin punches..

v/SHABBA RANKS

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