deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.

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checkin in nice..lets do this..

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j-poll is that a no-show..or what?..or does he have till tonight..?

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nah way i'm here gimme a break its thursday morning,.

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Livexyourxwords: son..please calm down its okay dont cry..take it easy little man
soopermoose9999: ur a fucking bitch..its gonna take you all day to spit a 10 line verse...ur just a bitch
Livexyourxwords: :-)
soopermoose9999: fuck you pussy

sounds like hes a little mad..




Shadow why you in RB you aint a man, you supposed to be up in Wendy Darlings drawer waitin for Peter Pan...Like Peters Home Ya Punch''ll Never Land, While U Just Cant Handle My Spits Like U Got A Fear Of Glands!!..
C'mon son youre 14 years old ya mom dont want you cursin...J-poll put the battles up sunday and thats when you started rehearsin'...
512 POSTS? Somebody must get NO PUSSY, He on Rapbattles from NIGHT TO MORN//
Oh, I forgot, Mark is just a 14 YEARD OLD FAG JACKING OFF to POKEMON PORN(say it: PEE-ka-CHEEEWW!)lol
if you Winning that would be ODD, so im going to Beat you and make everything EVEN
make you ..26-3.. an PROVE you only ..HALF DECENT.. i may be givin you TO MUCH credit cause LOOKS can be decievin'
Don't front me son, I'm Gods son giving you grace..I'm just a time bomb ticking and I'll be like your punches and blow-up in your face
I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen..


there shadow happy?

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hott battle lets go and vote up..y'all we need votes..

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yea fa'sho
c'mon lets get some votes

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my vote


opener=gods son-he used a nice punchline 4 tha opener

flow-tie=both had good timin and equal bars

personals-gods son=C'mon son youre 14 years old ya mom dont want you cursin...J-poll put the battles up sunday and thats when you started rehearsin'...
512 POSTS? Somebody must get NO PUSSY, He on Rapbattles from NIGHT TO MORN//
Oh, I forgot, Mark is just a 14 YEARD OLD FAG JACKING OFF to POKEMON PORN(say it: PEE-ka-CHEEEWW!)lol
^damn!

vocab-niether simple werds

closer-godsson=I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen..

overall gods son ripped it

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people my dream is the thing that brings mcs ta death//
choke em revoke um put them test and make it they last breath//

roses closes the attitude of the acutaul number//
well tonight is the time ta rhyme and cuts these emcees lik tree lumber//

-quick key^^

uppin 0-0..his vote dont count gotta be in the league fuckin newbs..

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my vote goes to gods son because he he came harder
and he clowned on him for his age and had funny shit in there my fvorite line was
I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen..

shadow you didnt come as hard and you flow was ok but you had some good shit in there you had a lot of personals which were allright but overall gods son won

v/ gods son

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

no you dont have to be from the league...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116916

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newbs newbs newbs is that the only people you can beat?...
havnt logged in since sunday he runnin from a defeat.....
this was ight...personal was there
im not a newb so he must know that he shouldnt show...
if complaining to mods was good he'd finnaly be a pro!....
haha decent...personal was there decent punch
he shouldnt step up..ill smack him back to the ground...
he if he sits in all the shit he spits he would drown....
blah...it was ight i guess
i wish i had ten cents for evry time this kid looses....
its wendsay.. he scared now but b4 he was like...........
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Originally Posted by Gods son
checkin in nice..lets do this..
solid closer...set up was awkward tho but decent

ya flow was on point...had some decent punches and personals in there...overall it was ight....7/10

Shadow why you in RB you aint a man, you supposed to be up in Wendy Darlings drawer waitin for Peter Pan...Like Peters Home Ya Punch''ll Never Land, While U Just Cant Handle My Spits Like U Got A Fear Of Glands!!
Peter pan-neverland concept is very played...2nd line was ight..still played tho
C'mon son youre 14 years old ya mom dont want you cursin...J-poll put the battles up sunday and thats when you started rehearsin'...
punch and personal were ight..decent
512 POSTS? Somebody must get NO PUSSY, He on Rapbattles from NIGHT TO MORN//
Oh, I forgot, Mark is just a 14 YEARD OLD FAG JACKING OFF to POKEMON PORN(say it: PEE-ka-CHEEEWW!)lol
blah...punch was ight...personal was there
if you Winning that would be ODD, so im going to Beat you and make everything EVEN
make you ..26-3.. an PROVE you only ..HALF DECENT.. i may be givin you TO MUCH credit cause LOOKS can be decievin'
bar way too stretched...punch was pretty good tho nice and creative
Don't front me son, I'm Gods son giving you grace..I'm just a time bomb ticking and I'll be like your punches and blow-up in your face
blah...1st line set-up was ight...2nd line played and rather weak
I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen..
pretty decent closer...personal there but again just on his age

God u had some good punches...but ur structure and flow was whack (but i dont really care its text)...u had a lot of played lines tho and every personal u had was about his age...it really started to get repetitive...but some good creativity....6.2/10

Punches-Tie
Personals-Shadow...god focused on his age too much shadow at least had varying personals
Flow & Structure- Shadow
Creativity & Wordplay- God's Son
Originality-Shadow
Enjoyment- Shadow...cuz a lot of god's shit was played and got repetitive...

Overall- Shadow...hence the breakdown and categories....