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check...

this sould be fun

in....

no.... no it won't.......




seriously..

unless you're someone I know under an alias


http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...724#post1426724

roop is dq'ed...

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I went a quick 10 lines... match me

I'm ahead of your type.. you've failed.. and whats worse?
You couldn't deliver a punch if you emailed my verse...
So go rehearse coz you need it... your whole verse is a shame
We're gonna find out who's best... when I tell you my name...
Your tens years behind me... so stand back and let me better you
Gonna be right in your face.. and still miles ahead of you
So just face it I'm better dude... I'll embarrass your folks then...
.... leave this fag scared to post... like agrophobic Postmen..
I'll end this shit now even though I write first
Your lines are more stretched... than fat kids in striped shirts

i'm late, cuz i was at the shore..... but uh... i unno if i can still post, but im gonna drop ne way...

iight...

Im'a take this battle with ease, rip this bitch in full
postin & merkin on relaunched...cuz u cant win on original
u can grin but ya miserable, dont hide ya true of feelings
my punches'll help you elevate.......right thru your ceiling
but the roof is more appealing, let ya mouth hide in shock,
cuz I'll put u in ya place, to help u think outside the box
round find ya spot..... i dont like ya so i'll snipe ya yup
and ur not good man.... so dont let this site hype you up!
You write to much... I'm postin late cuz...... I jes got home
but even a quick key can beat Com................Yes I Know

blah, w.ever.

COM.....

good..

Your tens years behind me... so stand back and let me better you
Gonna be right in your face.. and still miles ahead of you

bad.....

I'm ahead of your type.. you've failed.. and whats worse?
You couldn't deliver a punch if you emailed my verse...

also whats bad is u used alot of played concepts & stuff thats wasnt eve directly good on him like...

I'll end this shit now even though I write first
Your lines are more stretched... than fat kids in striped shirts

his lines arent stretched & again that ^ is played.

I guess u had the fuck it its only relaunched attitude but it wasnt a great drop.

Wash..

good...

Im'a take this battle with ease, rip this bitch in full
postin & merkin on relaunched...cuz u cant win on original

some sort of personal.

bad..

u can grin but ya miserable, dont hide ya true of feelings
my punches'll help you elevate.......right thru your ceiling
played^^

but the roof is more appealing, let ya mouth hide in shock,
cuz I'll put u in ya place, to help u think outside the box
u shudda added something to this 2 make it better.....seen this concept used in a much better way.

round find ya spot..... i dont like ya so i'll snipe ya yup
and ur not good man.... so dont let this site hype you up!
just basic

You write to much... I'm postin late cuz...... I jes got home
but even a quick key can beat Com................Yes I Know
^wack as fuck.

COM gets this because he was slightly better.

wack as fuck closer? ... when i played his custom title?
i gues.. but thanks for good feedback...

upp

Im'a take this battle with ease, rip this bitch in full
postin & merkin on relaunched...cuz u cant win on original
7/10
u can grin but ya miserable, dont hide ya true of feelings
my punches'll help you elevate.......right thru your ceiling
8/10
but the roof is more appealing, let ya mouth hide in shock,
cuz I'll put u in ya place, to help u think outside the box
6/10
round find ya spot..... i dont like ya so i'll snipe ya yup
and ur not good man.... so dont let this site hype you up!
6/10
You write to much... I'm postin late cuz...... I jes got home
but even a quick key can beat Com................Yes I Know
5/10

36/50

I'm ahead of your type.. you've failed.. and whats worse?
You couldn't deliver a punch if you emailed my verse...
8/10
So go rehearse coz you need it... your whole verse is a shame
We're gonna find out who's best... when I tell you my name...
7/10
Your tens years behind me... so stand back and let me better you
Gonna be right in your face.. and still miles ahead of you
8/10
So just face it I'm better dude... I'll embarrass your folks then...
.... leave this fag scared to post... like agrophobic Postmen..
8/10
I'll end this shit now even though I write first
Your lines are more stretched... than fat kids in striped shirts
haha 8/10

42/50

v/com for humorous hard hitting lines

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good battle com

oh and.......
.............. it was fun
lol

Openor: Tie
Structure: Tie
Flow: tie
Punches; com
personasl: Both
ennjoyed: Both
clolser; com
vote: com

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A crip just like Bonecollector

Openor: Tie
Structure: Tie
Flow: tie
Punches: both
personasl: Both
enjoyed: Both
closer: com
vote: com

Openor: Tie
Structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Punches: Com....Wash had too many basic and played lines
Personals: Wash
enjoyed: Com
closer: Com....Wash dont have a closer like that again
vote: Com....better all around verse

Flow - Both: Both had nice flow and structure..

Punches - Com: Both had some nice punches, and were pretty consistant with em.. This was a tough call, but I think Com's hit a bit harder..

Personals - Wash: Neither were strong in this category, but Wash had his opener..

Multis - Wash: Both had some decent multis, but Wash edged it by a little bit..

Complexity - Com: Again, both were decent in this category, but after re-reading for a third time, I'm gonna say Com's was more complex.. which helped his punches hit a bit harder..

Overall, this was a damn close battle.. Categories are all tied up.. but since the main element of a battle is punches, and Com hit a bit harder, my vote goes to him.. Definately a hot battle though.. much respect to both of you..


VOTE - Com