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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Wus good...checkin in...

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Apo is considered sick, well Im the elixir...
Ill take this bitch down faster than he did to his picture...
Thinkin he gully..man Im ashamed of this wack bitch...
Watchin them new pornos is the only time he pack clips...
Talks about ghostin for ppl...wut was he thinkin...
When in every war, US was the ones helpin weak ass England...
Pop the top off ya temple..and leave ya brains on the floor...
Man you suck so bad, i think its you that made it illegal to whore...
You the champ...thats why they say RV is sad...
I mean, your name now is the best wordplay youve ever had...
If he calls me wack, Im supposed to expose him right...?
Well he said id be champ...look at all the mags he writes...
Kid your not goin nowhere...your standin still...
Ill leave ya lights out like forgettin to pay ya electric bill...
You take my title, ill take ya life...
You didnt end my text career, but my soulclaps will make me lift a mike...

Mike is his name...I got writers block...fuck off.

Edit: Its in bold.

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why is there 52 views and no votes....

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I’ma leave the scene .. using ur face to hit the road ..
Coz ur a bow to be killed .. like death by the samurai code!
--okay punch, okay wordplay, could do better...6/10
Flow is never on point .. its blunt like a rusted shank ..
& Kryo’s dick unlike ur clique .. is always uppin ranks!
--nice personal, good punch..8/10
Even though u try .. you really are not funny ..
& we both get a dime a week .. but ures R from pocket money!
--kinda weak punch with good setup...7/10
I would swear u are the wackest .. but I don’t wanna mislead ..
A kid who is so dam soft .. he couldn’t even tame a pet peeve!
--okay punch, could be delivered better...6/10
I’ll leave this bitch green .. make him realise he is shit ..
But I’ll give him some props .. to match his fake gangster tip!
--nah not feelin this one...4/10
& its known all around .. that this bout u will lose it ..
coz Shabba is a bitch on the rag .. & I don’t mean Jamaican music!
--like the punch and wordplay..8/10
Quotin a fool in ur sig .. probably just another lover ..
Ur desperate 2 stay true 2 white powder .. like ur crackwhore mother!
--nother nice punch, good personal...8/10
Your only 13 for fucks sake .. u wont evolve or get hot ..
& ur face wud have more crosses than Christians .. if X marks the spot!
--cool punch i just wasnt quite feelin the delivery...6/10

Apo is considered sick, well Im the elixir...
Ill take this bitch down faster than he did to his picture...
--nice personal/punch and good delivery...9/10
Thinkin he gully..man Im ashamed of this wack bitch...
Watchin them new pornos is the only time he pack clips...
--nah wasnt feelin this but the wordplay was decent...5/10
Talks about ghostin for ppl...wut was he thinkin...
When in every war, US was the ones helpin weak ass England...
--nice punch and personal really feelin it...8/10
Pop the top off ya temple..and leave ya brains on the floor...
Man you suck so bad, i think its you that made it illegal to whore...
--nope not good enuff but okay....6/10
You the champ...thats why they say RV is sad...
I mean, your name now is the best wordplay youve ever had...
--good good job, perfect personal...8/10
If he calls me wack, Im supposed to expose him right...?
Well he said id be champ...look at all the mags he writes...
--nope bad punch, bad delivery...5/10
Kid your not goin nowhere...your standin still...
Ill leave ya lights out like forgettin to pay ya electric bill...
--okay punch decent delivery...7/10
You take my title, ill take ya life...
You didnt end my text career, but my soulclaps will make me lift a mike
--nope not that good of a closer...6/10

--poppa kap.....53/80
--shabba....54/80
closer than i thought when i first read it... good battle guys..

v//Shabba Ranks

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if u win. Congrats.ppppppppzzzzzzzzzzzzz

im putting yalls best bars and judgeing like that

apo- not the best..but pretty good

you had some nice punches and some meh...no blahs really

Flow is never on point .. its blunt like a rusted shank ..
& Kryo’s dick unlike ur clique .. is always uppin ranks!
^^ha ha ha
Quotin a fool in ur sig .. probably just another lover ..
Ur desperate 2 stay true 2 white powder .. like ur crackwhore mother!
^^ha ha
its known all around .. that this bout u will lose it ..
coz Shabba is a bitch on the rag .. & I don’t mean Jamaican music!
umm...ah ha ha

Shabba- you had some nice punches too and also some meh
Apo is considered sick, well Im the elixir...
Ill take this bitch down faster than he did to his picture...
^^first line is gay......played 2nd good personal
Talks about ghostin for ppl...wut was he thinkin...
When in every war, US was the ones helpin weak ass England...
^^ha ha
You the champ...thats why they say RV is sad...
I mean, your name now is the best wordplay youve ever had...
^^^ha ha nice...
...apo-edged punches....

shabba-first line would of been good...but exlier sick...so played....






v/poppa kap

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I’ma leave the scene .. using ur face to hit the road ..
Coz ur a bow to be killed .. like death by the samurai code!
lol pretty nice...7/10
Flow is never on point .. its blunt like a rusted shank ..
& Kryo’s dick unlike ur clique .. is always uppin ranks!
mehh alright...7/10
Even though u try .. you really are not funny ..
& we both get a dime a week .. but ures R from pocket money!
decent...7/10
I would swear u are the wackest .. but I don’t wanna mislead ..
A kid who is so dam soft .. he couldn’t even tame a pet peeve!
haha funny bar...7.5/10
I’ll leave this bitch green .. make him realise he is shit ..
But I’ll give him some props .. to match his fake gangster tip!
blahhh...6/10
& its known all around .. that this bout u will lose it ..
coz Shabba is a bitch on the rag .. & I don’t mean Jamaican music!
wordplay was ight..nice punch..7.5/10
Quotin a fool in ur sig .. probably just another lover ..
Ur desperate 2 stay true 2 white powder .. like ur crackwhore mother!
nice personal and wordplay...8/10
Your only 13 for fucks sake .. u wont evolve or get hot ..
& ur face wud have more crosses than Christians .. if X marks the spot!
blahh finisher...decent 7/10

Overall...57/80

Apo is considered sick, well Im the elixir...
Ill take this bitch down faster than he did to his picture...
lol nice punch/personal....8/10
Thinkin he gully..man Im ashamed of this wack bitch...
Watchin them new pornos is the only time he pack clips...
blahhh...6/10
Talks about ghostin for ppl...wut was he thinkin...
When in every war, US was the ones helpin weak ass England...
ight i guess...7/10
Pop the top off ya temple..and leave ya brains on the floor...
Man you suck so bad, i think its you that made it illegal to whore...
lol funny but not that great..7/10
You the champ...thats why they say RV is sad...
I mean, your name now is the best wordplay youve ever had...
blahh...coulda been good but weak personal...6.5/10
If he calls me wack, Im supposed to expose him right...?
Well he said id be champ...look at all the mags he writes...
meh...6.5/10
Kid your not goin nowhere...your standin still...
Ill leave ya lights out like forgettin to pay ya electric bill...
played played played...and weak wit the meta...5/10
You take my title, ill take ya life...
You didnt end my text career, but my soulclaps will make me lift a mike
creative..but punch lacking...6.5/10

Shabbe Overall: 52.5/80


Vote/Poppa Kap

I’ma leave the scene .. using ur face to hit the road ..
Coz ur a bow to be killed .. like death by the samurai code!

^^nice...abit played but gud...

Flow is never on point .. its blunt like a rusted shank ..
& Kryo’s dick unlike ur clique .. is always uppin ranks!

^^^very gud punch and personal...liked alot

Even though u try .. you really are not funny ..
& we both get a dime a week .. but ures R from pocket money!

^^^ha ha ha...

I would swear u are the wackest .. but I don’t wanna mislead ..
A kid who is so dam soft .. he couldn’t even tame a pet peeve!

^^^not feelin this as much...but o.k

I’ll leave this bitch green .. make him realise he is shit ..
But I’ll give him some props .. to match his fake gangster tip!

^^^liked....gud punch

& its known all around .. that this bout u will lose it ..
coz Shabba is a bitch on the rag .. & I don’t mean Jamaican music!

^^^clever bar...original

Quotin a fool in ur sig .. probably just another lover ..
Ur desperate 2 stay true 2 white powder .. like ur crackwhore mother!

^^^good personal n funny punch...very gud bar

Your only 13 for fucks sake .. u wont evolve or get hot ..
& ur face wud have more crosses than Christians .. if X marks the spot!

^^^gud solid punch for finisher...

overall- tight verse not ya best but still gud...some funny shit and gud personals..


Apo is considered sick, well Im the elixir...
Ill take this bitch down faster than he did to his picture...

^^^ha ha ha

Thinkin he gully..man Im ashamed of this wack bitch...
Watchin them new pornos is the only time he pack clips...

^^^not feelin this....abit played.....came off o.k tho

Talks about ghostin for ppl...wut was he thinkin...
When in every war, US was the ones helpin weak ass England...

^^^personal but no real punch there

Pop the top off ya temple..and leave ya brains on the floor...
Man you suck so bad, i think its you that made it illegal to whore...

^^^clever....liked this

You the champ...thats why they say RV is sad...
I mean, your name now is the best wordplay youve ever had...

^^^gud personal...liked

If he calls me wack, Im supposed to expose him right...?
Well he said id be champ...look at all the mags he writes...

^^^quite gud personal but not much of a punch...but gud

Kid your not goin nowhere...your standin still...
Ill leave ya lights out like forgettin to pay ya electric bill...

^^^didnt really like this....

You take my title, ill take ya life...
You didnt end my text career, but my soulclaps will make me lift a mike...

^^^gud personal...clever bar....liked

Overall- tight verse, best i've seen off you for awhile but there was i thought a few to many filler bars in there which i wasn't really feelin...but gud shit...

vote - poppa kaps.....just had harder punches


peace

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thanks for the votes. Next week I'll try harder I just left it last minute & had a shiity week.

lol......i jinxed myself

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breakdown...

first up is apo...aka poppa...

I’ma leave the scene .. using ur face to hit the road ..
Coz ur a bow to be killed .. like death by the samurai code!7.5
Flow is never on point .. its blunt like a rusted shank ..
& Kryo’s dick unlike ur clique .. is always uppin ranks!8.5
Even though u try .. you really are not funny ..
& we both get a dime a week .. but ures R from pocket money!6.5
I would swear u are the wackest .. but I don’t wanna mislead ..
A kid who is so dam soft .. he couldn’t even tame a pet peeve!8.5
I’ll leave this bitch green .. make him realise he is shit ..
But I’ll give him some props .. to match his fake gangster tip!8.5
& its known all around .. that this bout u will lose it ..
coz Shabba is a bitch on the rag .. & I don’t mean Jamaican music!8
Quotin a fool in ur sig .. probably just another lover ..
Ur desperate 2 stay true 2 white powder .. like ur crackwhore mother!8
Your only 13 for fucks sake .. u wont evolve or get hot ..
& ur face wud have more crosses than Christians .. if X marks the spot!8.5

shabb
Apo is considered sick, well Im the elixir...
Ill take this bitch down faster than he did to his picture...9
Thinkin he gully..man Im ashamed of this wack bitch...
Watchin them new pornos is the only time he pack clips...8.5
Talks about ghostin for ppl...wut was he thinkin...
When in every war, US was the ones helpin weak ass England...10
Pop the top off ya temple..and leave ya brains on the floor...
Man you suck so bad, i think its you that made it illegal to whore...7.5
You the champ...thats why they say RV is sad...
I mean, your name now is the best wordplay youve ever had...8
If he calls me wack, Im supposed to expose him right...?
Well he said id be champ...look at all the mags he writes...9
Kid your not goin nowhere...your standin still...
Ill leave ya lights out like forgettin to pay ya electric bill...7
You take my title, ill take ya life...
You didnt end my text career, but my soulclaps will make me lift a mike8

good battle although i do think shabba edged it out...

v-shabba

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