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Reckless 4 44.44%
DV8 5 55.56%
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Old 08-26-04, 05:26 AM   #1
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Reckless vs DV8

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Battle Rules:

Reckless (class sic) VS DV8 (L.R.I)
6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r...blah..blah....ect

Minimum posts to vote: 300

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Old 08-26-04, 06:41 AM   #2
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DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 06:41 AM.
 
Old 08-26-04, 06:42 AM   #3
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ya confused? this is text thought you quit ya got alias’s (a-L.I-ass)U’ll jus get them 2 settle the score,
you really “wreck-less” n “wack-more” ya punches won’t sting even if you fucked a beehive whore,

quick call spuls mom cause hes in ”class-sic” hard fakin n aint fly rock’n a feather sweater
it’s the “class-sic” excuse, reck’s only ever “feeling ill” when he’s “under the weather”,

like female sparks this battles a ‘miss match’ you’re the bitch n im causing the fire,
set flames ta this ”clas-sic” queer, this gardener should’ve remained a herb suplyer,

My hits swell ya punches don’t hit well,’ya don’t hit hard’ spul jus’buntswhen he bats’
ya like a ”fly-lumber-jack” da way ya keep frontin wack with“plane-herbish-ax”(acts)

In dis battle im “cancerous” got spul gasp’ in for breath like I jus cut n removed his lung
spul a vet?Hell no”bounce” outta site like‘tigga” get launderd tumbled pressed n hung

I snap limbs n break ‘trees’, make gee’s “leave” swing with ease ta were reckless pee’s,
Honestly! Bring’n ya dads pecker hair ta emerge is da only way ya get’n ta pub-E.R-t

Dropping bombs.? nope ya all wrong kid, ya jus another wack emcee wannabe clone
Its “reckless” get’n pissed on n neva see’n pussy like “toilet seats” in gay foster homes

dis battles like “trashin new watches” cause its a waste of good time,no need-ta-taunt
like elite ghost offspring, I “pro-ceed-ta-haunt” congrats homo ya jus got killed with font,

alias's:spul aka reckless aka LI LI
 
Old 08-26-04, 07:05 PM   #4
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Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 07:05 PM.
 
Old 08-26-04, 07:21 PM   #5
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Pray to god at night, and he'll tell you that stretched lines won't get you far
I mean, yo fuckin' lines are more stretched than yo momma's bra
I fuck yo girl, but when you walk in, I don't even try to hide her
Cuz suckin' dudes dick.... is the only time you a Low Rider
I mean, you're such a fag, prolly like it up the butt
Cuz jus like Lance Armstrong... you cannot fuck
You couldn't be hot, if you spat next to the sun
Man, you suck... and yes, that is a pun
Fuckin' wit me, herb, that ain't the way to go
Like a guy after sex, bitch, you cannot flow
If you try frontin', I'll beat you agin and agin
Jus like Gunit101... you'll never get the win
You'll never make it far, you'll always live in tents
Yo verses, jus like yo name, don't make any sense
You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy



Yea, haven't done this in a while, so quick keystyle. pc Uppin' for votes.
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Old 08-26-04, 07:29 PM   #6
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Voted For: DV8

OMG i underestimated SPuL omfg he didnt try omg i thought he was gonna win but damn you suck ROFL
i gotta give this to DV8 for a better verse with strong punches and personals with good structure and ya flow was great too

vote is DV8

SPuL: shud have tried harder... i know you could have... y did you half ass???

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Old 08-26-04, 07:30 PM   #7
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please vote in my battles: Black Plague vs. Paramik
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Old 08-26-04, 07:40 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for DV8

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blah just want to see
whats going on aight
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Old 08-26-04, 07:42 PM   #9
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ya confused? this is text thought you quit ya got alias’s (a-L.I-ass)U’ll jus get them 2 settle the score,
you really “wreck-less” n “wack-more” ya punches won’t sting even if you fucked a beehive whore,
3/10 stretched to fuck
quick call spuls mom cause hes in ”class-sic” hard fakin n aint fly rock’n a feather sweater
it’s the “class-sic” excuse, reck’s only ever “feeling ill” when he’s “under the weather”,
2/10 stretched and no need to use quotes cos that undermines my intellegence!
like female sparks this battles a ‘miss match’ you’re the bitch n im causing the fire,
set flames ta this ”clas-sic” queer, this gardener should’ve remained a herb suplyer,
wack 3/10
My hits swell ya punches don’t hit well,’ya don’t hit hard’ spul jus’buntswhen he bats’
ya like a ”fly-lumber-jack” da way ya keep frontin wack with“plane-herbish-ax”(acts)
shit 3/10
In dis battle im “cancerous” got spul gasp’ in for breath like I jus cut n removed his lung
spul a vet?Hell no”bounce” outta site like‘tigga” get launderd tumbled pressed n hung
1/10 stop using fucking quotes u faggot
I snap limbs n break ‘trees’, make gee’s “leave” swing with ease ta were reckless pee’s,
Honestly! Bring’n ya dads pecker hair ta emerge is da only way ya get’n ta pub-E.R-t
1/10 fuckin quotes
Dropping bombs.? nope ya all wrong kid, ya jus another wack emcee wannabe clone
Its “reckless” get’n pissed on n neva see’n pussy like “toilet seats” in gay foster homes
shit 2/10
dis battles like “trashin new watches” cause its a waste of good time,no need-ta-taunt
like elite ghost offspring, I “pro-ceed-ta-haunt” congrats homo ya jus got killed with font,
lol 4/10
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Old 08-26-04, 07:47 PM   #10
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Pray to god at night, and he'll tell you that stretched lines won't get you far
I mean, yo fuckin' lines are more stretched than yo momma's bra
I fuck yo girl, but when you walk in, I don't even try to hide her
Cuz suckin' dudes dick.... is the only time you a Low Rider
I mean, you're such a fag, prolly like it up the butt
Cuz jus like Lance Armstrong... you cannot fuck
You couldn't be hot, if you spat next to the sun
Man, you suck... and yes, that is a pun
Fuckin' wit me, herb, that ain't the way to go
Like a guy after sex, bitch, you cannot flow
If you try frontin', I'll beat you agin and agin
Jus like Gunit101... you'll never get the win
You'll never make it far, you'll always live in tents
Yo verses, jus like yo name, don't make any sense
You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy

consistantly structured verse, neither where any good
i hate text but my vote goes to spul
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Old 08-26-04, 08:00 PM   #11
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Voted For: DV8

punches~reckless
structure~reckless
vocab~neither
complexity~neither
humor~reckless
enjoyed~reckless

you both diud good but reckless took this with betta punches

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Old 08-26-04, 08:01 PM   #12
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damn, people don't kno how to vote in this. but whatever, should be 2-1, or 1-1. [COLOR=Indigo]
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Old 08-26-04, 08:05 PM   #13
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wtf someone fix this i voted for reckless i dont got time for this fuckin shit

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Old 08-26-04, 08:42 PM   #14
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Voted For: Reckless

Wow....this was pretty horrible from both sides. SPuL/Reckless/El El.....what ever.....he was less wack. At least his lines weren't shrunk as small as possible and still didn't all fit on one line.....lol.

Vote - Reckless......for less played punches and better structure...

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Old 08-26-04, 09:57 PM   #15
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hahahaha,goood verse
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