Battle Rules:

10 bars max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 06:46 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

is it 10 bars as in 20 lines?

and anyways, good luck!

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yea 10 bars= 20 lines ------------------------------

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 06:57 PM.

Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 07:00 PM.

You're done,

Like the weather...the chance of you winning is vain
like if you sold Strepsils...noone would choke in pain
your game...giving the word "failure" embarressment
claim you off da wack...when theres no comparisons
don't be arrogant...your ego's the size of a elephant
he even think showin' his 26-19 record is triumphant
I destroy you for enjoyment, so kid please don't fight
"Da Bury's Finest", that's why his corpse remains ripe
kid's not abstract...but you can't class him as object
kid's wack...no wonder Fashion's OPTIONAL SUBJECT!
fact is this kid sucks, I'll destroy him with just a fork
who's using strings...a sewing machine does the work
kid's a jerk...I'll rip him up and fucking sew him again
the only highlight of his verse is when he just began
the string's gonna snap...it don't matter how I say it
got numbers in his name...it's his wackness calculated
to ranking 9487...that's more than RV's inactive heads
name's string...no wonder he's hanging on by a thread
he can't go far in his career...even if it's his big dream...
CAUSE NOONE KNOWS HOW LONGS A PIECE OF STRING!!!

check check 1,2, 1,2...STRING IS IN THE BUILDING

this nigga just a Mule, cuz all u do is pack shit
neva heard ya single, guess u aint "radio"active
eh yo when them rifle's click
they have yo ass scramblin for safety like Michael Vick
I'll snipe this prick, got a vest thats twice as thick
but them things gon hit u, cuz lifes a bitch
im aimin at ya "bean", but nigga this aint Goya
u a ""gifted" rapper cuz i wouldnta paid for ya
Dis g wanna bitch, u can recieve a hunnid clips
those rhymes so bad, they make Stevie wonda flinch(ooouch)
dog u trippin, u need to get u some AK right
i spit Acid bars, make Plutonium, decay to Half-Life*
there aint nothin to u, u aint gon pop that
drop that, u just a pussey in a jock strap askin for is cock back(ooooh)
rap verse allowin hoes n sluts, wit no flows n such
wit crippled ass flows like they hold a crutch
unlike Jay, and Kells u the Less Of Both Worlds
n nebody that reads ya text, is gon hurl
u can exit now... , but u wont b right back
cuz u like that, in the room gettin spanked by Mike Jack..HAAAAAAAAA


*just in case yall didnt do well in chemistry, decaying is what is meant by a radioactive element becoming inactive, and half-life is how long it takes

uppin for votes, hot battle peeps, dont sleep on this one

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

uppin for some votes people, word, don't sleep on any of my battles cause you know I never fail to entertain yall...

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Voted For: Plutonium



Like the weather...the chance of you winning is vain
like if you sold Strepsils...noone would choke in pain
7/10
your game...giving the word "failure" embarressment
claim you off da wack...when theres no comparisons
5/10
don't be arrogant...your ego's the size of a elephant
he even think showin' his 26-19 record is triumphant
4/10...2 forced here
I destroy you for enjoyment, so kid please don't fight
"Da Bury's Finest", that's why his corpse remains ripe
6/10
kid's not abstract...but you can't class him as object
kid's wack...no wonder Fashion's OPTIONAL SUBJECT!
5/10...Another forcedone
fact is this kid sucks, I'll destroy him with just a fork
who's using strings...a sewing machine does the work
6/10
kid's a jerk...I'll rip him up and fucking sew him again
the only highlight of his verse is when he just began
5/10
the string's gonna snap...it don't matter how I say it
got numbers in his name...it's his wackness calculated
6/10
to ranking 9487...that's more than RV's inactive heads
name's string...no wonder he's hanging on by a thread
6/10
he can't go far in his career...even if it's his big dream...
CAUSE NOONE KNOWS HOW LONGS A PIECE OF STRING!!!
5/10

Punches were a lil simple and plain
ya personals were good
ya wordplay and structure is wha won u this





this nigga just a Mule, cuz all u do is pack shit
neva heard ya single, guess u aint "radio"active
6/10
eh yo when them rifle's click
they have yo ass scramblin for safety like Michael Vick
2/10,,Played and stretched
I'll snipe this prick, got a vest thats twice as thick
but them things gon hit u, cuz lifes a bitch
2/10
im aimin at ya "bean", but nigga this aint Goya
u a ""gifted" rapper cuz i wouldnta paid for ya
4/10
Dis g wanna bitch, u can recieve a hunnid clips
those rhymes so bad, they make Stevie wonda flinch(ooouch)
4/10
dog u trippin, u need to get u some AK right
i spit Acid bars, make Plutonium, decay to Half-Life*
6/10
there aint nothin to u, u aint gon pop that
drop that, u just a pussey in a jock strap askin for is cock back(ooooh)
5/10
rap verse allowin hoes n sluts, wit no flows n such
wit crippled ass flows like they hold a crutch
2/10
unlike Jay, and Kells u the Less Of Both Worlds
n nebody that reads ya text, is gon hurl
2/10
u can exit now... , but u wont b right back
cuz u like that, in the room gettin spanked by Mike Jack..HAAAAAAAAA
4/10..Mike jackson lines played

Ya punches were tryin 2 hit but didnt deliver
ya wordplay was non existent
ya meta;s were ok
ya personals werent there
kinda like it was jus a freestlye

Plu 4 better punches and wordplay

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uppin for votes holla at ya boy

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

uppin for votes holla at ya boy

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

upping for votes............................................. ....

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Voted For: Plutonium

plutonium - u had a nice verse..you had a lot of personals in it and you had some good punches..your structure was definitely on point seeing as though all ur lines are even..you had a good flow..your opener was kinda weak but you built up and finished it with a good closer..

fav. line -I destroy you for enjoyment, so kid please don't fight
"Da Bury's Finest", that's why his corpse remains ripe

overall - 8/10




String9487 - i've seen other battle where you came harder than this..you didnt really have any hard hitting punches that caught my eye..all of your (ooooh)'s and (oouch)'s messed it up because i really dont wanna know what you think sounds good..you had some good wordplay with the radio line..and your personal wasnt too great...

fav line- this nigga just a Mule, cuz all u do is pack shit
neva heard ya single, guess u aint "radio"active

overall 6/10




vote - Plutonium