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Old 01-26-05, 03:06 AM   #1
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"Excuse Me Miss" - DOPE NEW TRACK.. CHECK IT OUT!!

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Thats right, so everyone check this shit out n show some love.. I even sing the hook on this track.. BTW.. Much thanks to socrates for hookin me up with the sound file at the end from his biggie cd.. Made it that much better.

SO EVERYONE CHECK OUT "Excuse me Miss" on my soundclick.

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Old 01-26-05, 03:11 AM   #2
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Word@me

Anyways the track is nice. I already told you everything but i'll say it again.

I think at the begining of the first verse your voice was too hype for the beat. The chorus was low, and the doubles you threw in near the end were ill.
Other than that, all categories get a "pretty good"

liiiiiiiiike 8.5/10
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Old 01-26-05, 03:26 AM   #3
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i like this song lol.....flow is there ....doubles r gud quality gud.....on topic overall gud song..but like soc sed in the begging its to hype....overall i wuld agree wit soc nice trak bruh....hit up my collab called Whats death?
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Old 01-26-05, 03:53 AM   #4
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HEHEHEHE!!

SINGIN IS DOPE MAN!!

nice track all that... good flow blah blah... hella nice lyrics... word...

word @ the outro.
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Old 01-26-05, 04:39 AM   #5
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Outro...word

Verses...Word

Beat...Word

Singing...Word


Flow...word

Nos & this track...word

You know what i think of this track...was some pimpin shit good track keep droppin and be on the lookout for his collab wit a dead guy
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Old 01-26-05, 05:52 AM   #6
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qaulity is average...

lyrics are good.....bitch bitch bitch...

you could have raised the chorus a lil more....

this is knowlidge........

beat is perfect for your voice....

outro is nice...lol

good track........
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Old 01-26-05, 09:25 AM   #7
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i like the beat...and I like it when u mask ur accent some...jus a personal preferrence...but do you dawg...

flow is good


lyrics seemed honest = good thing


not bad dawg


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Old 01-26-05, 11:38 PM   #8
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good shit bro. lol. to hear u singing makes me smerk. dope track overall
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Old 01-26-05, 11:58 PM   #9
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ya i agree voice seems just a lil hype for the beat, quality is ok, chorus isnt bad.. u tryed lol, accent sounds wierd on certain words, but whatcha gonna do lol, lyrics are good and flow is good as well as delevery was on point. good looks
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Old 01-27-05, 10:02 PM   #10
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Old 01-28-05, 12:22 AM   #11
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this shit is riiiiiiight... maaan this shit so oldschool, mad 80's activist type hip hop roots style delivery goin on... im feelin the lo-fi so i gotta click the d/l- good shit here, rofl @ the ending... good touch. I like the way you voiced your opinion in this shit... good shit. could use polishing like anyone else here but definately worth the listen... keep droppin em 1 1.
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Old 01-28-05, 05:56 AM   #12
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Thanks man, preciate the feed.
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Old 01-28-05, 02:25 PM   #13
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This Was Dope Here Nice Shit Fo Real I Like The Topic Your Singing Is Actually Pretty Good Sun Lol Made The Song Even More Dope Real Nice Here My Boy
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Old 01-29-05, 01:30 AM   #14
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Uppin like how Phenom-Is-All up male asses..
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Old 01-29-05, 02:53 AM   #15
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IIte..Quality Can Be Upped..Foirst Verse Was Good..Flow was Good..Coo Lyrics...Hook..Feelin It..But shoudl have been raised a bit..Second Verse Was Good Too..i liked the drops in da beat....Damn..Got the slow track at the end..woaaah!!!..tearin dat ass up..Lil kim is a bad bitch man..lol..nice shit..
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