Battle Rules:
No feeding


6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-26-05 at 05:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 05:38 PM.

Why ya give so much time?
Post ur verse now man.....I'ma post mine now.I

I'm just impatient when it somes to battles.

Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 05:41 PM.

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Pen&Paper So obssesed on stayin behind ,you'd ~write-it-late~
And you don't like the pen's function.....you just ~like-it's-shape~
It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~
And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~
You would neva get close to stars like a review on a bad movie
Pen can follow ethics made by kin,but ya verse still won't move me
Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~
Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~

1st bar
Think about the shape of a pen and wat else is like dat
2nd bar
u should know
3rd. bar
kinethic-movement
kin-relatives
ethic-a set a rules
4th. bar
you should know

sry for takin so long....had to do sumtin

uppin.............................................

1st bar
Think about the shape of a pen and wat else is like dat
2nd bar
u should know
3rd. bar
kinethic-movement
kin-relatives
ethic-a set a rules
4th. bar
you should know

^ i think you're tryin to say kinetic.... lol... and a pens shape?? what are u sayin like a penis? cuz a pen dont look like a penis to me...

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Voted For: K-Trini

K-Trini - iight spit, the flow was pretty good, and you had some iight punches in there.

Best Line - It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~
And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~

Worst Line - Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~
Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~

Pen N' Paper - Your spit was decent, flowed well, some punches were pointless, but others good.

Best Line - K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity
I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity

Worst Line - Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast
Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this

OVERALL - This battle was a close one, but I am givin' my vote to K-Trini. I liked his punches better, and it flowed well, with good multi's. Pen some of your punches were straight whack, you should have used solid ones threw out the whole verse.

Vote - K-Trini

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thx for the vote Gkillaz................uppin

uppin this aight gkilla thnx for votin' uppin this

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uppin.............................................

uppin this man votes plz pplz vote on this cmon....

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