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SPuL aka Reckless 5 83.33%
.Murdz. 1 16.67%
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Old 06-27-05, 07:25 AM   #1
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SPuL aka Reckless vs .Murdz.

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10 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-28-05 at 07:25 AM

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Old 06-27-05, 07:26 AM   #2
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.Murdz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 07:26 AM.
 
Old 06-27-05, 11:55 AM   #3
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SPuL aka Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 11:55 AM.
 
Old 06-27-05, 11:54 PM   #4
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I'm known as the mc killer; u wouldn't have a shot staying on Pace with me being Reggie Miller
Each line will kill ya; my rhymes r like 'un-stuffed turkey' the way you aint getting any filler
Ur bout as real as cartoons so wise up n don't battle a guy that's known to rhyme tough
Cause I'll have u walk in 'rooms with ceiling clocks' just to prove that ur 'times up'
Let the fighting erupt; kid must be 'delivering testicles', cause he's 'driving' me 'nuts'
I'll 'carve out your insides' just to prove that when battling me ur 'deprived of guts'
You can't survive the cuts; this battles like 'illiterate' 'jail mates'; there's no 'con-test'
Your scripts read like they were revived from the recycling bin; they aren't fresh
I'm the best; and you beating me is like paraplegics claiming to need an arms rest
I'm handing u this L; listen; in votes u'll be down like being in the giving head position
I'll 'beat you with a stick' and I don't mean 'racing' you with 'manual transmission'
bitch i Dissed you on RapVerse while u just stayed silent in the room and mumbled *
Let me see u try n stand to me when the hammer has ur knees crushed n crumbled
This illiterate shit, eliminates any signs of intellect with that stupid name
Tough to figure out like a rubrics' claim, you couldn’t be on point with cupid's aim **

* .i diss the fuck outta this bitch.
** .rubrics cube, hard to work figure out.
 
Old 06-28-05, 12:20 AM   #5
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aiight, if you don't peep the links, which are critical to get the punches. ONLY 2. don't fuckin' vote. OR I swear I will hunt you down and chop your sausages off nah mean?

Your vision must be fucked, cuz, man, you ain't the best, see?
You kno there's somethin' wrong wit you, when you think DQ's sexy
We had beef, I don't want peace, I wanna lay you dead on the lawn
Don't want bygones to be bygones, man, I jus want YOU to be gone
In MM you didn't post your pic, instead you posted up a lass
But then again, I guess you did, cuz we all kno that you're an ass
You think you gon kill me? Nah, man, you'll hit the burner
Jus look at his name, he catches "z's" before he finish "murd"er
The only time you on a decent line, is on the phone
You a ladies man, but "tweety's" the only "chick" you'll ever own
Like I got 3 legs, man, I got a leg-up on this race
You type in the smallest font, but your lines don't even fit in the whole space
"don't fuck wit the best or fam," I'm killin' melons
You don't want crew beef, so don't touch me, I'ma "Livin' Legend"
You're tryin' to make a run at me, but like your mom, you "loose"
Your run, we "nose" is short... like Pinnochio saying truth
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Old 06-28-05, 12:33 AM   #6
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

Ok Ok Ok

Murdz:

Ok bro, pretty decent verse here. You had some decent punches thrown around in there, personals were there, but were weak, and wordplay was scattered about, but visible. However, I do not like the way that you tend to focus more on your multies than your punches, seeing that punches are what win battles, not multies. You had some played lines and concepts, and some stretched lines in there that kinda fucked up the flow of things in places. Overall, just focus more on consistency and creativity and less on your lulties. Remember, this is a battle, not an Open Mic.


Spulster:

One of the better verses I've seen from you. Punches were there, and were creative and all connected, which is a major plus. Had a couple of played concepts, but most of your punches were nice yo. You killed it with personals too. Had me pissin myself laughing in the first bar at that Drama Queen shit. Funny shit yo. Anyways, punches and personals were fine, structure was fine, but in some spots the flow was a little iffy. However, it was relatively easy to get back on track.

In conclusion, Spul gets my vote for his consistency with hard-hitting punches and personals.
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Old 06-28-05, 12:35 AM   #7
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iight werd..... thanks for votin........ good verse Spul
 
Old 06-28-05, 12:37 AM   #8
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^yea props to you too. nice verse........ upppppin' this.....................
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Old 06-28-05, 12:40 AM   #9
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not nice enough! damnit! lol ahh well.. uppin this
 
Old 06-28-05, 01:02 AM   #10
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless


Punches: Tie...neither one of yall had any
Personals: spul had one
Metas: Tie neither one yall had any
FLow: spul
Structre: Spul
Creativity: tie both of you was forcing it

Both yall dropped very wack...murdz u had nothing at all..all your attempts at wordplay was forced...ya punches was jus weak..alot of them was jus statements u didn't really have a flip in the line to make it a punch..you had no personals...ya lines was seriously stretched..it was jus terrible son...no hate whatsoever jus realness..I hope u take my words an use them to elevate.

SPul...u wasn't much better...your opener was a lil forced but decent..an really the only barely decent line in the battle..in a real battle ya opener woulda been some filler shit but here it was the highlight...real sad battle by both....you had a few other personals but they was weak as hell son..u ain't have n punches whatsoever but ya flow an structure was nice..so i voted for you cuz of 1 line an ya flow an structure.

Both yall was disappointing no hate jus realness...1
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Old 06-28-05, 12:15 PM   #11
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^aiight coooooooo.... uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp.
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Old 06-28-05, 02:51 PM   #12
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppp
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Old 06-28-05, 02:55 PM   #13
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This was feedback posted for .Murdz.

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