iight yo i had to use Mad Dogs alias account cos mine for some stupid reason wunt upload the songs...

so yeah i'm nu to audioing on the pc...and i got 2 tracks up already

1) Sandra & Renda diss -Yvonne
2)Before You-Jonezy ft Yvonne from rb

well first one was a diss to these two girls in my crew 'il muretto'...long story behind us but i had to come at 'em somehow...

Second one was a collab...as y'all can c


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so hit any 1 of the 2 preferably both and lemme know what y'all think...thanx

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2459439

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209636

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2459515


ok...keep 'em coming peeps

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You know, this kinda thing isn't my style... but it wasn't half bad

I was alright with the beat and you're flo (assuming you were the girl at the end) was great to me. Emotion was cool for a love song and you was on some real feelable stuff i guess. Like i said, I don't know, it's really not my thing but good job

7/10 for this only cause it's not what i listen to on average

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before you:
damn you for usin this beat haha, i was gonna use it but i was like damn enough of these soft soft beats hahaha. jonezy has gotten a lil better, his quality aint to bad his flow is pretty good his vocals could be upped but overall not bad. Vvey Vvey haha i think you coulda came in a little bit sooner and your vocals could be upped a lot more so i could ehar you a bit better. overall nice track.

Saudra And renda diss:
lol @ this played ass beat. Vvey you had a nice volume this time. lyrics weren't to bad good be upped a bit, your flow is alright you could maybe switch it up a bit. emotion could use a bit of work, i'd say this beat isn't really for you ya know.

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listening to that diss:
nice beat choice, even if its comercial, flow is so-so i gotta say, i dont like how you flow to the song, but overall its dope, you fell off sometimes, lyrics are cool, quality is good ...even if it sounds like a cheap quality mic
overall good track

7/10

*listening to the diss *

emotion could be better, flow is alright but falls off at times
lyrics are ok - can always be better
you just needa work on your emotion and mic presence, then you could be real good
i dont like the beat much cuz i heard it so much haha

but yeah overall its pretty nice, just keep at it and dont stop


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lmao...

Paranoid : it fels good to be fast ah..:P ...lol but thanx for the feed..

Speats : how did u know my mic is cheap :s

Infinite :lol..iight thanx

iight keep 'em coming peeps

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Okay listening right now.

Eh. Well don't like the first guy. He alright not too bad. But now for you. Quality aint too good. Could be a lot better. Your flow is somewhat on. You need to ride the beat a little better. Lyrically, it's pretty good. Emotion was good too. If you just started then that's pretty good for your first.




RTF on my track in my siggy please.

^nice looking...thanx


common get at this peeps...

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aint too bad........like he said first ones a lil wack..but ya ur quality aint that great and dont blame on the mic i been rappin on a 8 dollar mic...you just gotta know how too mix..but yeah ur voice is cool and but ya flow fell off at time.....but yea not too shabby..... keep um coming 6.5/10


rtf

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beat is wack.... flow sounds very robotic, need more melody in ur voice get more harmonic with the beat, u wuite often speeded up to fit lines into the bar aswell, delivery is ok, lacks sum emotion n needs to be more cocky for this kinda track... lyrics are ok, but nuttin stood out, sum lines might have been better had u delivered them properly << thats for the diss track btw

before you: i like this sample, beats pretty cool.. is this guy british??? i was expectin an american lol, his flow is nice as is delivery, lyrics are pretty cool aswell, beats sick actually lol, feelin this guy quite alot actually, lyrics could be abit more complex but everything else is nice... where r you??? you come in mad late... vocals are too low, ur energy lacks next to his, delivery is better in this, flow sounds better aswell.... wow u finished mad early... decent track

^thanx

well jonezy was the one who mixed and engineered the 'before you' track. i thought as well that he stuffed my verse late but w/e...

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