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10-31-05, 01:07 AM
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The Rulers Back
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Put Your Hands Up (Im Back)
IP: 2E43 6BFE
Word been out for a min switched up my delivery a lil quick lil track ike was pose to be on 2nd verse but couldnt make it...showed it to couple of peeps already said it was hot so enjoy... http://www.soundclick.com/decreeus http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2517816 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ous+Subliminals |
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10-31-05, 01:13 AM
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Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
umm who mixed the HOOK? it sounds good lol...haah...
Nah hook is pretty catchy though.... Delivery is nice on this.... flow...theres a couple lil spots that could be touched up...nothing big though.... lyrically its aright...... only thing i can tell u...is get a new mic foo!...that computer shit aint workin for you lol....you need to invest in something decent
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10-31-05, 01:15 AM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
^Lmao i know my headset 10$ mic be all i got rite now though..apreciate tha feed son...
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10-31-05, 05:13 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C11A 6193
Hook is definitely catchy like Ike said, no doubt about it.
I'm not really feeling the beat but you manage to flow on it pretty good. Some spots were bit off maybe but it happened only rarely so no big deal whatsoever. Nice delivery as well, you got that hyped up vibe going on and it's working for you. Lyrics are good for this type of track, nothing spectacular but just solid shit you know. Overall solid track (feedback to learn rankings for RG btw)
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10-31-05, 04:36 PM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
beat is kinda busy for my tastes...
kinda fast hook seems like u did it out of necessity... ur flow seems pretty decent...not bad... vocals a touch loudish rhyming adequate u had a nice structure but didn't deliver it smoothly on this beat in some spots...think JAY Z the next time u try that OOCHIE WALLY flow scheme not a bad track...jus needs polish 1 |
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10-31-05, 06:20 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: A7EA 3021
ok hook catchy i liked it
beat iono i actually liked it i like faster beats props on the emotion i think that was your strong poing so props on that lyrics so so nothing special but it wasnt horrible by any means so pretty good here like everyone else my biggest complaint is ur quality but its all good id like to hear thsi re recorded if you get a new mic props for stats
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10-31-05, 07:49 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 7E94 8EBB
listening: beat is iight, i like the cymbals at the begining, hook could be better you know, i could do it
 lol, nice presence man seriously this is your best emotion ive seen, you know what i think of the flow man, dopeness damn, quality is soso, i liek that part where you say poutchy naughty something like that lol, something to download seriously, dope track 8.5/10return the favor on my beat in the rythmic convergence please, the halloween one |
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10-31-05, 08:17 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 7D90 C302
listenin'....... damn feelin' this beat.......
damn, nice hook dude. really sound different. feelin' it. quality wack as fuck tho. lmao but wow, you comin' nice yo. real good emotion. wow, dude. lol really good. hate your damn quality tho. that's what holdin' you back. but this beat dope yo....... lmao this flow ill dude........ lmao @ fuck a hindu. lmao dope dude........ hook volume so dif from verse vol tho. that shit was weird. lol damn dude overall I really liked this man. real dope shoit. M.A.S. represent son..... 8.5/10 (This is feed to see RG ranking)
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10-31-05, 09:20 PM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
Apreciate Tha Feed Everyone....
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10-31-05, 09:28 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 413F 9EC8
im feelin dis....deff..stay up fam...uno
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11-01-05, 12:01 AM
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IP: D792 1390
I'm feelin the chorus, but your flow is improvin each track, i like how you switch it up.. it got choppy at a few parts but for the majority it was pretty good, lyrically I'm feelin a lot of what you spit.. your delivery is def an elevation, the monotone form is gone, keep at it... Good to see you gettin better each track, that's what's up..
Stay up, 1
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11-02-05, 09:14 PM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
Word apreciate tha feed yall......
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11-03-05, 07:21 PM
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Herb
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IP: 5773 B703
aiight beats ok but the synthy style beat is kinda played out...chorus is dope very catchy production is lacking IMO flow could be better content could be better punches r a tad on the cheesy side add libs r aiight work on ya content and get a better mic man
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11-06-05, 12:42 AM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: D4CB 508F
ok..opened wit hook good idea...mixing wasn't bad..had flow to it..........your delivery starts strong..but it falls off a lil at u thru verse...same wit flow opened good but stumbles a bit towards end....ok next verse....opens wit a good....like how u toned deliveyr down when beat dropped...awwwwwwww when it came back u shoulda got hype again.....now it gets repetitve u held it way too long...lyrically u came generic but good..some creativity in there...had sum decent punches.....overall ya improvement really shows......keep it up son........1
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11-06-05, 02:10 AM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: BA87 A0AC
word this is nice..
my favorite part your delivery its good to hear something different from you, most of the time your delivery around the same...and im definetly feeling it on here. the lyrics is crazy on it, and im def liking the flow in the first verse.. i dont find the hook all that amazing though its kinda coo, but i think it could be catchier overall track pretty damn nice though good shit MAS on em!
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