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my diss to the assholes of rv:

why you looking at how handsom i am?....silly faggot dicks r 4 chicks....n im the dumb ass!?!? 2 answer your las question....yes my pops was an abuser n and wife beater.......my mom chose her sex life over me n left me on the streets.......and well while livin wit my father this las time he left me in juvi in n.j. n moved wit my step-mom and siblings 2 virginia.
and also my mother let her b/f's beat me 2...........but y am i telling u this...shit i aint got shit else 2 do but 2 humor and taunt poor excuse 4 tryin 2 b a bully...n for the las fuckin time where does it say anything about anything 2 do wit me supposedly tryin 2 act hard?.......obviously you guys are written a book......so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u kissin my ass//you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//ima be who i am til im murdered or die,why pervert's checkin out a guy?//i switch my flow,with every twist of the dro,truth is a lot of u niggaz soundin like a hoe,quit ridin my nuts n stick yo mind on yo dough,yea im fuckin white the world already know,shove it or love it im headin str8 4 da pro's,so niggaz drop me 2 links or ur thread will b closed,wit my money on my mind and my eyes on my foes//"boost ya vocabulary,so im written u a dictionary,ya niggaz aint thugs those guns are imaginary,im a hip-hop missionary,shittin on my advosaries,niggaz love it when i log another journal in my diary,they be like allik war can u post anotha essay for me,let me say it more clearly,since u herbs cant hear me,ima stay sayin nigga,til sum1 pull the trigger an bury me//orcastrate a mastepiece to deminstrate,i hate all bitches i dont discriminate,inconsiderate's,insubordinate's y u gotta playa hate?//i see wut u wanna be when i look in the mirror,im finna make dis a career 4 da new era,n my diabloical existence gonna reign terror,by the time im done u gonna b da 1 callin da sheriff,terrific wit the flow when the image is horogliphic,2 b specific u gotta admit it,when i hit the mic i rip it,my skills are so in tune...2 even download it,2 the computer onto rapverse i gotta zip it,its allik war but when i flip it im a raw killa nigga//i create dreamworks like spielberg,you think im spittin best nigga i aint even past the tip of the iceberg,i play words,in word play,got multi's comin in from every single way,niggaz take heed 2 wut i say,each and every single day,u can bitch and moan but im still gonna remain the same,i got married 2 da rap game,my feelings for music aint neva gonna change,i see your attempt's 2 bring me down,but no matter wut you say im still gonna b around,im pullin so many tricks you'd think i was a magical clown,im still laughing at u bitches i aint neva gonna frown,when ya got yo teeth filled the only time u had a crown//(intermission)you mutha fuckas think u kool? think u bad cuz u talkin shit on a rap site?like eminem says in his las battle on 8 mile...."i know everything you muthafuckas got 2 say against......tells these muthafuckas sumtin else they dont know about me"-rabbit.......back 2 rv diss........
so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u kissin my ass//you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//.......punk ass muthafuckas u say boost my vocabulary,structure my sentences properly,i see wut sayin but u aint stoppin me,nigga please,u call me handicap when in all truth ya'll the one's wit special needs!!!!!//

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216695

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217665

there's my 2 links....let the bitchin begin bitches......

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thank you for the real feedback defyned truth i aint sweatin it...its like i said in this post....they hate me cuz they wanna b me feel me?ha ha though i feel ya on aim it late as fuck n x-mas eve n x-mas drained me so im hit up the pillow n fight the blanket 4 the bed after my girl leave....lol

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you need to structure it cos its hard to read for me anyway still th u have nice flows in there

ez

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ty 4 your reply grmsly ill make sure 2 rtf on sumtin of urs when i wake up peace uppin this for these dick ridin hataz holla

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foreal.....i'll put something up once i enuff posts for that feed thingy...really confuses me..

ez and keep up those rhymes, its long but good foreal just structure them

ez

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good looks homie stay up n fuck those hataz out there......*taps defyned truth's shoulder and says* " i see hater's all over rv"......lol peace niggaz

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i'd love to come see you, thanks for the offer [/wtf?]

anyways, you really need a structure, and it was overall, extremely simple....but if you fix the structure up, pm me and i'll read the whole thing

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Word to need to work on your sturcutre but other then that it was pretty cool..alittle simple to me but it hit pretty decent at some points.

*Moved to Disstracks*

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thanx man........@ bonecollector.....drake u kno how many people on here structure are wprse than mine but still seem 2 b better than every1 else.........the reason i did this is cuz im sick of every1 sleepin on me talkin shit peace uppin 4 feedback

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Nobody wants to read paragraphs...
Don't type your verses in paragraphs..

that's how this shit was meant 2 b set up........starting after i quoted alpha assassin post 2 him asking me multiple questions.....if u actaully take the time outta ya busy scedule...ud see its well true in every aspect n sumtin none of u moron's can possibly top cuz ive already made it clear like eminem in 8 mile....i and the people of rv already know wut u stupid fucks got 2 say against me....kinda like da ultimate diss verse....uppin 4 real feedback not a waste of time

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so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u
kissin my ass//

you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz
i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//

ima be who i am til im murdered or die,why pervert's checkin out a guy?//

i switch my flow,with every twist of the dro,truth is a lot of u niggaz soundin like a hoe,quit ridin my nuts n stick yo mind on yo dough,yea im fuckin white the world already know,shove it or love it im headin str8 4 da pro's,so niggaz drop me 2 links or ur thread will b closed,wit my money on my mind and my eyes on my foes//

"boost ya vocabulary,so im written u a dictionary,ya niggaz aint thugs those guns are imaginary,im a hip-hop missionary,shittin on my advosaries,niggaz love it when i log another journal in my diary,they be like allik war can u post anotha essay for me,let me say it more clearly,since u herbs cant hear me,ima stay sayin nigga,til sum1 pull the trigger an bury me//

orcastrate a mastepiece to deminstrate,i hate all bitches i dont discriminate,inconsiderate's,insubordinate's y u gotta playa hate?//

i see wut u wanna be when i look in the mirror,im finna make dis a career 4 da new era,n my diabloical existence gonna reign terror,by the time im done u gonna b da 1 callin da sheriff,terrific wit the flow when the image is horogliphic,2 b specific u gotta admit it,when i hit the mic i rip it,my skills are so in tune...2 even download it,2 the computer onto rapverse i gotta zip it,its allik war but when i flip it im a raw killa nigga//

i create dreamworks like spielberg,you think im spittin best nigga i aint even past the tip of the iceberg,i play words,in word play,got multi's comin in from every single way,niggaz take heed 2 wut i say,each and every single day,u can bitch and moan but im still gonna remain the same,i got married 2 da rap game,my feelings for music aint neva gonna change,i see your attempt's 2 bring me down,but no matter wut you say im still gonna b around,im pullin so many tricks you'd think i was a magical clown,im still laughing at u bitches i aint neva gonna frown,when ya got yo teeth filled the only time u had a crown//

(intermission)you mutha fuckas think u kool? think u bad cuz u talkin shit on a rap site?like eminem says in his las battle on 8 mile...."i know everything you muthafuckas got 2 say against......tells these muthafuckas sumtin else they dont know about me"-rabbit.......back 2 rv diss........

so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u kissin my ass//

you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//

.......punk ass muthafuckas u say boost my vocabulary,structure my sentences properly,i see wut sayin but u aint stoppin me,nigga please,u call me handicap when in all truth ya'll the one's wit special needs!!!!!//

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