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04-30-06, 09:08 PM | #1 | ||||
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"Crackalackin'" Feat. Vibe...Another Hott Banger...Leave Links...I'll RTF ASAP
IP: 5163 532A
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
"Crackalackin'" This is for Vibe's mixtape...but he said to post it here. 1st Verse- Vibe Hook- Vibe and Ennui 2nd Verse- Ennui Leave links and I'll return the favor ASAP. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226913 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227066 |
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04-30-06, 10:12 PM | #2 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1FC2 E3E4
Listening...
Beat is hard...First dude needs to work on his flow...stumbling a bit...Hook is dope, LE comes in real nice on the hook...Quality is dope...2nd verse, comes in nice, precence is hot.."Until you've heard me, you haven't heard dipshit" dope line...Flow is hot, lyrics are dope...You pretty much owned this track man Overall, hot shit. |
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04-30-06, 11:42 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 2372 BC06
hmm Vibes...he has a nice voice. flow was good, coulda went more fast and more off beat cause this beats way to slow. The hook you did was pretty good too.
LE, you need to stop reppin your name man, it's gettin played. Your flow was a lot better and the lyrics were pretty good to. overall good drop.
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04-30-06, 11:52 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: FFF8 F801
i thought i did a dope job on my verse
oh well, keep the feed comin ya'll |
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05-01-06, 11:37 AM | #5 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 5163 532A
Thanks for the feed...
Uppin'. |
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05-01-06, 12:19 PM | #6 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
the first guy needs better presence, it sounds weird with all of le's reverb, and the other dude having minimal....your verese was ight...you sound alot better on meaningful stuff. not really your style i thought...work on the canadian line, you stumbled into it, but on the real its a pretty good track....if that reverb situation got fixed id put it on a playlist.....
rtf on "last night w/ enygma"
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05-01-06, 02:32 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: E8B4 945F
listening....beat sounds pretty dope as it starts off....the synths are kinda annoying... i like the way the first guy raps...on some lines....some lines he really fell off...like they were either rushed or ended to early... try countin sylables....the hook is fuckin dope 9/10 on the hook... its dope as hell....
l.e.... your verse is alot better than vibes... couple dope quotables... flow is right on point....hahahaha..i'm canadaian... thats cool.... overall vibes verse needs a lil work hook bodys the fuck out this beat l.e.s verse was illy for sure good ass track rtf...i'll leave link in a min
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05-01-06, 04:00 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: FFF8 F801
word, hook is my fav too
keep the feed comin
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05-01-06, 06:24 PM | #9 | ||||
Champion
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IP: 3998 7F87
Listenin;...this is a mainstream joint?...def wrong beat choice I think, Vibe, dont like his voice, flow is good tho and delivery is real nice and i like the hook, its quite catchy...ennui, dont like ure mixin technique and how tis in the right ear, whats up with that, and in the left ear its jus a lil it really turns me off, youre pronouciation is gettin better, flow is real tight from u which is good but the panning thing u did fucked it up...made me not wanna hear this...but i dont knw i think this cud of been cos of my speakers so i dont but if it was then hot joint 8/10....good job, vibe is decent, LE u becomin real dope
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05-01-06, 11:15 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: FFF8 F801
chyea chyea chyea chyea
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05-02-06, 02:29 PM | #11 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 5163 532A
Thanks for the feed...
Up up and away... |
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05-02-06, 06:25 PM | #12 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1FC2 E3E4
Go RTF on my new shit with Q, or I will be forced to bring your life to an end.
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05-02-06, 06:31 PM | #13 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3842 F0D2
k...typign as listen...verse 1...kats flow aint really stinking wit the rhythm of beat...not feeling that at all...lyrically he aint hitting on much of nothing understand its a banger but he could at least track...his delivery wasn't much...he had energy but it lacked variety he was jus yelling for sack of yelling...verse 2 ok...limited ya delivery is better flow...is simple....lyrically on same level as dude...you too was lacking variety but went wit the beat well....hook is ah'ight...really lacked a catch phrase got a good meldoy but jus aint got that "HOOK!" this song left so much to ponder...I can see what this track coulda been yall was really close to having something really serious here yall jus came up short in sum key areas, if yall polished this up an gave a catchy ring of some sort it'd be a wrap....cuz beat was solid.........1
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05-03-06, 10:02 AM | #14 | |||
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IP: 64CA 6C26
What's hot:
Who is that at the start?...very intense energy Beat is slick Rhyming in the first verse...held my interest Hook is cool LE...ur lyrics and delivery fit the tone of the track...pretty good What's not: Flow at the start a tad jerky Lyrics too bland and not very intricate Overall: fairly solid...just lacked that extra umph to make it ill 1 |
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05-03-06, 03:43 PM | #15 | |||||||
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IP: FFF8 F801
word @ my delivery
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