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Old 06-11-06, 09:57 AM   #1
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10. So Rell (7-4) vs 11. Gopha (2-1)

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Old 06-11-06, 11:25 AM   #2
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chekk nasty....
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Old 06-11-06, 01:33 PM   #3
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Old 06-14-06, 11:31 PM   #4
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I'll re-post when you get ready to post yours...
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Old 06-15-06, 09:54 PM   #5
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aite, ill be droppin soon
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Old 06-15-06, 10:27 PM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by So.Rell
So screw you you had your time...No Extension


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lol @ wanting a win in a title match by a no-show. pussy shit


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Originally Posted by So.Rell
but you know what I'ma be nice about it...I'ma give him until 9 PM Eastern Tonight if he doesn't post he loses...


LMAO

what a bitch, seems guts suttin you aint got inside
cuz ppl tool on you so much...
...Lowes is lookin to add you to their new summer product line
once I read a Rell verse, and man the laughs were endless...
i was fightin back the tears so hard that my eyes started diggin trenches
see ive never seen you drop nice since you started to rhyme...
so btwn your skill or the holy grail? experts still debate which is harder to find
so fuck wit me nucca if you in tha mood to die tonight
and i'll pilaf ya wig till you could serve it wit a side a rice
N it aint over yet, G'll beat em till hes sensless...
while I give his face a floor-ride you cant find at ya dentist
face it - youve got no skills plus ya all ya texts lame...
so take the loss like a man...
wait nvm, I dun want my tax dollars goin towards payin for a sex change
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Old 06-15-06, 10:34 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by Gopha
yeah i didnt get any votes agianst hens, i think my rep will live
Lol, No it won't homie.

I'm Here Now...

Go cry you little bitch, you can't beat the Odds, or Me.
You'd fill up Public Libraries alone off your Sob Stories.
Stay on first base - he sees girls when he's Surfin a Page
Difference between him and Red Sox...
Gopha still hasn't successfully broken the Curse of the Babe.
Jerk isn't paid...Fist full of punches time to choke.
He bites so much, his Dental Records hold every rhyme I wrote.
Ever heard his audios a High pitch would've been a blessin man.
Voice so Weezy, he could have Affairs with George Jefferson.
Lesson Man - Verse wasn't the only Wreck...Man it's great.
Being conceived was an Accident, that Backed-up Interstates.
Gopha came from PRBA to the LBL - truly a scary story.
Witnessed gettin his ass whooped by a GroundHog over Territory.

You Old News...
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Old 06-15-06, 11:39 PM   #8
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Gohpa :

what a bitch, seems guts suttin you aint got inside
cuz ppl tool on you so much...
...Lowes is lookin to add you to their new summer product line
once I read a Rell verse, and man the laughs were endless...
i was fightin back the tears so hard that my eyes started diggin trenches

vs

Go cry you little bitch, you can't beat the Odds, or Me.
You'd fill up Public Libraries alone off your Sob Stories.
Stay on first base - he sees girls when he's Surfin a Page
Difference between him and Red Sox...
Gopha still hasn't successfully broken the Curse of the Babe.

Ok I can't call this off the quotables cause the lines I feel the most are even between both battlers sooo I'mma break it down.

Gophas Other Lines :

see ive never seen you drop nice since you started to rhyme...
so btwn your skill or the holy grail? experts still debate which is harder to find
Meh I see where your going but, nah.

so fuck wit me nucca if you in tha mood to die tonight
and i'll pilaf ya wig till you could serve it wit a side a rice
Not feelin it

N it aint over yet, G'll beat em till hes sensless...
while I give his face a floor-ride you cant find at ya dentist
Not this either

face it - youve got no skills plus ya all ya texts lame...
so take the loss like a man...
wait nvm, I dun want my tax dollars goin towards payin for a sex change
Old type of concept, but I like the flip.. good shit

Rell's other lines

erk isn't paid...Fist full of punches time to choke.
He bites so much, his Dental Records hold every rhyme I wrote.
Meh decent...

Ever heard his audios a High pitch would've been a blessin man.
Voice so Weezy, he could have Affairs with George Jefferson.
Haha I ain't heard his audios but this is pretty funny

Lesson Man - Verse wasn't the only Wreck...Man it's great.
Being conceived was an Accident, that Backed-up Interstates.
Nah...

Gopha came from PRBA to the LBL - truly a scary story.
Witnessed gettin his ass whooped by a GroundHog over Territory.
Nah son...

Overall I like both verses, 2 solid quotes from each, a couple nah/iight lines. But after breakin it down line rell takes it with a more polished verse.

Vote - Rell
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Old 06-16-06, 12:03 AM   #9
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Nice battle here.

I was feeling every line from gopha except the opener. So Rell had a few good lines too. The end of the verse was weak tho. I'm going with gopha on this one...peace.

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Old 06-16-06, 09:21 PM   #10
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1-1 Tie........
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Old 06-17-06, 09:09 AM   #11
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what a bitch, seems guts suttin you aint got inside
cuz ppl tool on you so much...
...Lowes is lookin to add you to their new summer product line
so fuck wit me nucca if you in tha mood to die tonight
and i'll pilaf ya wig till you could serve it wit a side a rice
N it aint over yet, G'll beat em till hes sensless...
while I give his face a floor-ride you cant find at ya dentist

VS

Stay on first base - he sees girls when he's Surfin a Page
Difference between him and Red Sox...
Gopha still hasn't successfully broken the Curse of the Babe.
Jerk isn't paid...Fist full of punches time to choke.
He bites so much, his Dental Records hold every rhyme I wrote.
Ever heard his audios a High pitch would've been a blessin man.
Voice so Weezy, he could have Affairs with George Jefferson.


Pretty even so it came down to the next best:

face it - youve got no skills plus ya all ya texts lame...
so take the loss like a man...
wait nvm, I dun want my tax dollars goin towards payin for a sex change

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Go cry you little bitch, you can't beat the Odds, or Me.
You'd fill up Public Libraries alone off your Sob Stories

Close as fuck but i think Go just took it.

V./ gopha
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Old 06-17-06, 11:23 AM   #12
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Respectable...2-1 Gopha
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Old 06-17-06, 11:36 AM   #13
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Old 06-17-06, 04:33 PM   #14
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once I read a Rell verse, and man the laughs were endless...
i was fightin back the tears so hard that my eyes started diggin trenches
so fuck wit me nucca if you in tha mood to die tonight
and i'll pilaf ya wig till you could serve it wit a side a rice

vs.

Stay on first base - he sees girls when he's Surfin a Page
Difference between him and Red Sox...
Gopha still hasn't successfully broken the Curse of the Babe.

v/Gopha

iunno, some other lines in both verses were decent but I didn't enjoy them enough to quote.
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Old 06-17-06, 05:21 PM   #15
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once I read a Rell verse, and man the laughs were endless...
i was fightin back the tears so hard that my eyes started diggin trenches
so fuck wit me nucca if you in tha mood to die tonight
and i'll pilaf ya wig till you could serve it wit a side a rice
what a bitch, seems guts suttin you aint got inside
cuz ppl tool on you so much...
...Lowes is lookin to add you to their new summer product line

vs

Stay on first base - he sees girls when he's Surfin a Page
Difference between him and Red Sox...
Gopha still hasn't successfully broken the Curse of the Babe.
Jerk isn't paid...Fist full of punches time to choke.
He bites so much, his Dental Records hold every rhyme I wrote.
Go cry you little bitch, you can't beat the Odds, or Me.
You'd fill up Public Libraries alone off your Sob Stories

vote: gopha real close
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