word up. real shit here sonnnnn.


Intro: SPuL
First verse: SPuL
Hook: SPuL
Second verse: SPuL
Third verse: SPuL
Beat: Ansane Productions

www.soundclick.com/spul

LINKS:
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233886
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233868



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1st Verse - man i'm feelin wut u sayin bout people tellin ya to stop......ya lyrics are nice on this.....flow is fine........yea ya delivery helps out da verse
Hook - good hook.....sums up da message of ya track
2nd Verse - ya lyrics again are nice......ya vocals nice too.....ya flow kinda started soundin like Eminem, the 4th bar to like da 6th........
Hook - Same as above
3rd Verse - flow on this verse is da best........i'm feelin this verse the most.......nice drop homie

overall - i would mos definitely bump this..........keep droppen SPuL.....

pz

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^word appreciate the feed man.

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blah @ people not RTF ~_~

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^yo man appreciate the feed f'real. drop a link and I RTF whenever you got one man. thanks up

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Yo this beat is a hot ansane cut...

I like how you kept yo style throughout these typa tracks..im feeling the story line in this track..its intelligently woven which is good..i like how u was tellin the story of you nah mean..hook is mad catchy..lyrically this is tight..
and Im feelin the way u doin original joints now nah mean..flow is hot..and i can hear u perfect quality is hot..i like how u mixed the hook fam...
...dont see any prolems in this..
9.8/10

hot

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Listening:

Beat is nice.....flow comes out good on this! nice verses! Lyrics are sweeet bro! good story typa ish. The hook is like that Em song Lose Yourself lol! but this makes the track hella better SPuL!

keep it up bro! uno.

ansane is decent sometimes monotonous but the vibe of the hook definately matched where u were going with the song its funny sometimes when u hear a song with a hook and has zero to do with the song...flow is decent sometimes alil monotone but its cool definately droppin the carson jet sound haha...........holla back at my track ....................................

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^word appreciate all the feed. all favors returned

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this is the best beat I've heard from ansane...its very dre mimicish but still ill...ok spul wit a little storyline...thats new, flow opens good...but really gets in stride midway thru...hook is good...some addlibs would heightened it but its cool...flow on second verse is a better executed version of first verse but u switch it at 8th bar to a new rhythm good shit...storyline I'm feeling cuz its you, the most of you I've heard in a track....ok 3rd verse starts wit a new flow good shit...in this verse a trailing echo on the words u really dragged out woulda been ill...this is solid track...beat choice is a huge plus...song is laidback but has a energy...however I noticed you in that brag/ hip hop phase...where majority ya tracks is either bragging or about hip hop...u still in that phase where u don't know jus yet how to put more of yourself in your music...we all go thru it but this is def a step in the right direction...keep experimenting man....good shit....1

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^word thanks for feed man

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