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Old 12-17-06, 11:52 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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3. Red Bull (7-1) vs. 6. Spektikul (6-2)

IP: 6C02 AD00

Its the second week of playoffs! No more byes, even though as we found out last week, sometimes a bye isn't the most desirable position in the playoffs. Anyway, with money on the line, drop dope or drop a chance at the cash. Good Luck.

Battler #1: Red Bull
Battler #2: Spektikul

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

Voting isn't required in the playoffs and anyone who was in this league or the LBL may now vote. Every battle must get 7 votes for me to close it at the end of the week, so even if voting isn't required, please do or battles will never close.
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Old 12-18-06, 12:46 PM   #2
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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lol, good luck dude.......
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Old 12-20-06, 02:12 AM   #3
Diet Coke
 
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"The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.
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Old 12-20-06, 01:33 PM   #4
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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From: Canada
IP: 7C6D 1B8D

^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck

AJ=his initials/AJ Styles=wrestler in shitty 'TNA Impact'
...Tav will know what im talkin about, lol.
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Old 12-20-06, 06:29 PM   #5
Diet Coke
 
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Spektikul
Chrit cant get the ladies, cause hes big and wrestles men..
Last week avoided date rape, n'used the sleeper hold instead..



BK employee...?

You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..
Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars.
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Old 12-20-06, 07:15 PM   #6
King Solo
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"The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.
I thought this bar wasn't all that great. The concept was a nice idea, but I think the wording was too simple for it to have any real affect. If the wording was better it would've been a killer punch.
You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..
Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars.
This was a nice bar, a decent feed to. But the concept is actually pretty played even though it is a personal. So many people have dropped bars about ghosting for other dudes and it gets to a point where it isn't as amusing as it first was.

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^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
Lol, this was a decent feed also. But, the same thing applies to this I think. Feeding off a bar and flipping it to say a dude worked at some shitty place is getting played. Although, I don't actually think it is as played as the ghosting personal, but still... it could've been better.
Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck
Lol @ this.. I thought this was pretty clever. The Red Bull nameplays are played to fuck, but the Adam Johnston nameplays still have a little freshness left in them. This was a decent nameplay, a nice punch to... and no need for the explanations, at least for me. That dude sucks ass.

Overall, I thought this battle could've been better. Both had a played punch and both had one not so played. Although I felt that Bull's was more played than Spektikul and his none played punch was just poorly worded making it come across too simple. Spektikul had a pretty cool nameplay on Bull's real name and that is why I think he won this battle.

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Old 12-21-06, 07:25 PM   #7
Cola
Pushin it....
 
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"The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.
This bar was ill, def feeling it........just...sick...

You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..
Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars.
weak....and lame....seen this shit to many times....
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^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
I thought this was really not hard at all.....saying someone does what he just said you do...makes me feel ...not good...and that...is not good..
Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck
...i'm not sure ...how in the hell this rhymes...maybe cuz im American..and your British...i really tried to see it from your point of view...but i couldn't see how in the hell that worked....also i dont watch wrestlin....so....i was kidna of...blah...


I wasn't feeling Spek at all.....maybe i'm the only one on this one..who knows...but i just thought Bull's first punch ate your whole verus....like....that bar was sick...although you had something goin with his AJ punch...i just coulnd't see it

so...

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Old 12-21-06, 07:42 PM   #8
Diet Coke
 
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Word.

1-1

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Old 12-21-06, 11:15 PM   #9
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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From: Canada
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lol @ me being british, i love it.

...yo reddy, looks like we're both brits now, tea's on son.
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Old 12-22-06, 10:08 AM   #10
N.Tavarez
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You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..
Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars.
IN ORDER FOR THIS TO WORK YOU SHOULDVE POSTED PROOF THAT YOU ACTUALLY WROTE HIS LINES OR SOMETHING, AS IS RIGHT NOW THESE KINDA PUNCHES ARE GROWING TIRED SO YOU NEEDED TO FLIP IT NICER TO MAKE IT WORK

"The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.
THIS IS ALRIGHT, BUT I CANT REALLY SAY A WHOPPER LINE IS HARD CUZ ITS SOUNDS LIKE AN OLD JOKE OR SOMETHING

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^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
UNLESS THIS IS TRUE THIS IS ALSO AN OK PUNCH BUT WITH NO REAL LEG TO STAND ON, THIS AND BULLS WHOPPER PUNCH CANCEL EACH OTHER OUT

Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck
OK FIRST OF AL I LIKE THE CONCEPT OF THE PUNCH CUZ IM FAMILIAR WITH AJ STYLES SO THIS IS A BETTER PUNCH
BUT THE RHYMING WORDS MAN, YOU COULDVE FOUND A WORD TO RHYME WITH LOOK OR FUCK, STILL... DEPENDING ON YOUR ACCENT ILL ALLOW IT LOL


OK WEIRD BATTLE CUZ BOTH THESE DUDES MADE MISTAKES THEY DONT NORMALLY MAKE
IT COULDVE WENT TO EITHER BUT IT ALL DEPENDS ON WHAT YOUR WILLING TO ACCEPT AS THE WINNING PUNCH
TO ME, IT WAS THAT AJ STYLES SHIT ONLY BECAUSE IT WAS THE FRESHEST THING IN THE WHOLE BATTLE SO WITH THAT BEING SAID
V/ SPEK
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Old 12-22-06, 09:50 PM   #11
Diet Coke
 
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^ I did post proof that I wrote his lines?
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Old 12-22-06, 10:45 PM   #12
Germ
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The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.
^liked the wordplay, made me laugh

^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck
^eehhh, def seen better, since i know you both, these could've been funnier spek =/

You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..
Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars.
^didn't really like the approach, kinda seemed like you were going for that heart blow, but you came up with an ego scratcher.... meh, still made me laugh on the first line

/v red bull, for overall laughter and efficiency
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Old 12-22-06, 10:51 PM   #13
Germ
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ps wrestling punches suck tav
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Old 12-22-06, 11:09 PM   #14
Te Ora
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"The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.
i found this wordplay a little forced, but it may just be the way i'm pronouncing it. but yea, i see where you were going with it & this wasn't a bad attempt at all
You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..
Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars.
cool personal i guess. your use of it does come across as a bit bland to me tho.

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^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
i liked this flip
Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck
i didn't know wtf you were on about without the explanation, but after reading it - yea this was pretty cool. u must be saying fuck like "fook" or something tho haha


i felt this was pretty close. both first punches were about equal. both of your second punches were personals - and the difference for me is that spek attacked in a more creative way. red bull's was what you'd expect on to be wrote on that sort of personal. therefore i'm edging this to spek.

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Old 12-23-06, 03:49 PM   #15
Roger Glocks
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spek

^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school

^^ha lol

Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck

^^cool he does suck

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"The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.

^^alittle forced not feelin it too much

You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..

best line of the battle by spek...aight battle but spek got this

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Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars

^^nice person
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