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Old 01-07-07, 02:07 AM   #1
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17. Comedian (10-3) vs. 18. Cocaine (3-1)

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Old 01-07-07, 11:26 AM   #2
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Old 01-07-07, 06:09 PM   #3
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Old 01-09-07, 02:25 AM   #4
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ur a different type of comedian, && i dont see this as real fair..
cuz when im done, you'll be the only one doing standup from a wheel chair
we're both ranked in the middle but unlike you i dont give a fuck..
cause while your the 'median, cocaine will just continue to move up..
i mean really, half your wins are from the cypher and i wonder why??
how do you keep winning that shit?? thats right.. we all have lives..
your girl's been talking to me, said she's looking for some fun..
she said you wanna be like larry the cable guy.
........but you still cant get'er done..
you mimic other comedians and we can all see your a hoe..
against me, make like dave chapelle move to africa,&& no show
even if shady signed u, your rhymes would never get off the shelf..
cuz i'll make ur blood flow thru more creekwater then bobby himself
i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions..

14 match it
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Old 01-09-07, 12:17 PM   #5
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i'll serve you with tactics that'll have you murdered in caskets
yeah, you will leave me in the dust... right after i burn you to ashes
let's banishment battle! cause i'm never sparing this geek
and i'd hand him the pink slip... but he'd fucking wear it to sleep
i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
this fag is wild, you're wack at this text shit, just stop it dawg
hang your style up in the closet... beside your stilletos & halter tops
this guy is choking, you decided to post shit but i will roast it
your time has shown that your death is served, and i'm a violent host, bitch
Your sign-in's hopeless, killing nerds, your lines are just wack
Coke has been out of it for awhile so it's no surprise his vitals are flat
you saw Brokeback & want to spend life in bed with some queers
and you're coming in las'so just grab the fucking rest of your gear

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Old 01-09-07, 10:27 PM   #6
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i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions
only good punch in your verse co...nothing else hit hard enough or even had any real effort. IMO

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i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
this fag is wild, you're wack at this text shit, just stop it dawg
hang your style up in the closet... beside your stilletos & halter tops


wasn't feeling much from this battle..I liked comedians closer becAuse of the obviouse wordplay but I didn't think he connected it with a punch and focused too much on the word play itself rather then the punch. wasn't feeling most of the wording used in his verse though I think he wrote a better verse but didn't have too many quotables.

V/Comedian


PS. please dont think this was a hate vote n I apologize if I came off as a bit harsh. 1
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Old 01-09-07, 10:29 PM   #7
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lmao... iight uppin for some more votes...
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Old 01-11-07, 07:07 PM   #8
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we're both ranked in the middle but unlike you i dont give a fuck..
cause while your the 'median, cocaine will just continue to move up..
i mean really, half your wins are from the cypher and i wonder why??
how do you keep winning that shit?? thats right.. we all have lives..
i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions..


com
let's banishment battle! cause i'm never sparing this geek
and i'd hand him the pink slip... but he'd fucking wear it to sleep
i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners

coke got this due to quotes, had the best bar in the match for
me the good personal, the cypher line, no hate com, and i found
cokes median line descent for self glory, which was surprising
and was the deciding factor for me in this battle.

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Old 01-11-07, 08:40 PM   #9
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ur a different type of comedian, && i dont see this as real fair..
cuz when im done, you'll be the only one doing standup from a wheel chair
even if shady signed u, your rhymes would never get off the shelf..
cuz i'll make ur blood flow thru more creekwater then bobby himself
i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions..

vs.

i'll serve you with tactics that'll have you murdered in caskets
yeah, you will leave me in the dust... right after i burn you to ashes


.. coke had a solid verse. the creekwater line was fresh, and well set up. i was close to quoting his median line, but i didn't feel the wording.
comedian came a lot weaker than i've seen him drop in past battles. he had too many cliche based punches, and he had stuff like the 'violent host' ish that jus came across as filler. wordplay in his closer could've been used muchbetter, wasn't harsh enough. i've got coke taking this one pretty easy suprisingly.


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Old 01-12-07, 04:30 PM   #10
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Cocaine
i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions..

vs.

Comedian
i'll serve you with tactics that'll have you murdered in caskets
yeah, you will leave me in the dust... right after i burn you to ashes
let's banishment battle! cause i'm never sparing this geek
and i'd hand him the pink slip... but he'd fucking wear it to sleep
i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
this fag is wild, you're wack at this text shit, just stop it dawg
hang your style up in the closet... beside your stilletos & halter tops


Comedian put more effort in his verse, like he wanted to win. He down right came alot harder than Cocaine.

V/ Comedian
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Old 01-12-07, 07:00 PM   #11
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i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
this fag is wild, you're wack at this text shit, just stop it dawg
hang your style up in the closet... beside your stilletos & halter tops

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ur a different type of comedian, && i dont see this as real fair..
cuz when im done, you'll be the only one doing standup from a wheel chair

I thought the opener in coke's drop was the shit, and it was, but i wasnt feelin much of anything else. I think Comedian came harder..better flow....better punches....better drop

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Old 01-12-07, 07:32 PM   #12
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ur a different type of comedian, && i dont see this as real fair..
cuz when im done, you'll be the only one doing standup from a wheel chair
^ PLAYED CONCEPT BUT NICE FLIP CAUSE OF HIS NAME I GUESS
i mean really, half your wins are from the cypher and i wonder why??
how do you keep winning that shit?? thats right.. we all have lives..
^LMAO NICE

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i'll serve you with tactics that'll have you murdered in caskets
yeah, you will leave me in the dust... right after i burn you to ashes
^THIS WAS COOL, I LIKE THE MULTI


V/ Coke

He had 1 more qoute but really neither guy was that aggresive to me. Coke kinda stayed on the Comedian Nameplay and beat it into the grond while I thought the Pinkslip Line and the Lasso thing by Comedian was played, I said both those a year and some change ago. I’ve seen Com drop way more heat in his verses than he brought in this one so I know he’s better than this. I woulda quoted Coke’s Inner-com line had it rhymed better with the second line but it didn’t. He still take it based on 1 more quote but I think it shoulda been a Way better battle personally
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Old 01-12-07, 07:36 PM   #13
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i'll serve you with tactics that'll have you murdered in caskets
yeah, you will leave me in the dust... right after i burn you to ashes
you saw Brokeback & want to spend life in bed with some queers
and you're coming in las'so just grab the fucking rest of your gear

vs..

i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no onger announce detentions..

Overall/-plenty of plaayy'd stuff here an bad wording,Coke had sum good concepts but used'em wrong IMO..didnt make effective enough..while Comedian edged him out jus a bit..

V/-Comedian
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Old 01-13-07, 01:36 PM   #14
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we're both ranked in the middle but unlike you i dont give a fuck..
cause while your the 'median, cocaine will just continue to move up..
i mean really, half your wins are from the cypher and i wonder why??
how do you keep winning that shit?? thats right.. we all have lives..

vs

i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
Your sign-in's hopeless, killing nerds, your lines are just wack
Coke has been out of it for awhile so it's no surprise his vitals are flat
you saw Brokeback & want to spend life in bed with some queers
and you're coming in las'so just grab the fucking rest of your gear

coc also had a few more decent punches. wasnt really feelin much of anything from comedian

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Old 01-13-07, 01:46 PM   #15
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lol... you just quoted more of my lines and voted for the other dude? That makes no sense.


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