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Old 01-07-07, 02:09 AM   #1
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9. DaTrusHurtz (21-3) vs. 10. Sonny Dimebags (18-9)

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Old 01-07-07, 01:16 PM   #2
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checkin' in, how many?
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Old 01-11-07, 11:39 PM   #3
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Old 01-12-07, 02:03 PM   #4
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230177

^ LOL, ur first match, leavin' this bitch in the ashes
But you've evolved a lot...
... ur still wack, but at least u got rid of the slashes
U've sucked for awhile, gettin' a new beginnin' is vital
Ur the league's John Stockton...
... u've been around FOREVER without winnin' a title
Ur 0-3 in champ matches, I'll be hurtin' this dude
The title Haunts u so much, Disney's mansion would be PERFECT for u
Lift up, hit the gym, there's no way ur winnin' this slim
Newbs only need to read part of ur name to see ur future is Dim
Friends with Roger, NO ONE else, when i'm runnin' its true
Ur so close wit Glocks, I'm shocked no one is gunnin' for u
I'm a TV man, the number of shows I watch is many n' yo
I love watchin' 20-20...
... but in ur past 3 champ matches, ur down in votes 20 to 0
Now, I really shouldn't diss u or be real hard on this fuck
Cuz ur a stud...
... player, when ur holdin' some cards n' some luck
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Old 01-12-07, 03:52 PM   #5
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Ighhhtttttt Let's Go
Yo,thanks for digging up that dirt ,now I got less to do
Juss toss ur corpse in the hole, and put that dirt on you
No styles scrub,all your damn clothes juss reak of doom
and you pants like Cinderella stayin home, no ballroom
Plus Sonny a real mac,that's why yo bird ain't be callin back
last time she asked you to kick it,she pulled out a hacky sack
That's why I be rollin to his girls crib with an ounce of the sticky
then be bouncin the next day wit a half left and a brand new hicky
And juss quit rappin dogg,say goodbye to your dream
cuz the only time u spit crack,
is when one of your rocks goes through the pipe screen
This false shit you spit givin me anger,so lemme show wat real skill do
if DaTrusHurtz dogg, then what lies in my chamber will fucking kill you
If I spare this herb Im'a break both his legs and kick in his smile
so he better have a whig for each crotch,
because thats gonna be the only things under his arm for awhile
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Old 01-12-07, 04:22 PM   #6
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Sonny Dimebags
Plus Sonny a real mac,that's why yo bird ain't be callin back
last time she asked you to kick it,she pulled out a hacky sack
This false shit you spit givin me anger,so lemme show wat real skill do
if DaTrusHurtz dogg, then what lies in my chamber will fucking kill you

vs.

DaTrusHurtz
U've sucked for awhile, gettin' a new beginnin' is vital
Ur the league's John Stockton...
... u've been around FOREVER without winnin' a title
Lift up, hit the gym, there's no way ur winnin' this slim
Newbs only need to read part of ur name to see ur future is Dim


Most of DaTrus lines didn't stand out alot. He was inconsistent with nice punches, and some weren't even punches in my eyes. Sonny came more consistent, with better quotables. Seem's like he came with more creativity.

V/ Sonny Dimebags
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Old 01-12-07, 07:43 PM   #7
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No styles scrub,all your damn clothes juss reak of doom
and you pants like Cinderella stayin home, no ballroom
Plus Sonny a real mac,that's why yo bird ain't be callin back
last time she asked you to kick it,she pulled out a hacky sack


vs...


Ur 0-3 in champ matches, I'll be hurtin' this dude
The title Haunts u so much, Disney's mansion would be PERFECT for u


Overall/-pretty weak battle,i expect'd alot more out of both of u... really.i got Sonny win'n this by one quote..wow.

V/-Sonny
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Old 01-13-07, 10:48 AM   #8
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Uppin for votes
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Old 01-13-07, 04:08 PM   #9
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^ LOL, ur first match, leavin' this bitch in the ashes
But you've evolved a lot...
... ur still wack, but at least u got rid of the slashes


Plus Sonny a real mac,that's why yo bird ain't be callin back
last time she asked you to kick it,she pulled out a hacky sack
This false shit you spit givin me anger,so lemme show wat real skill do
if DaTrusHurtz dogg, then what lies in my chamber will fucking kill you

v.sonny, kind of a weak battle expected more fire from both, but sonny came a little bit better, if datrus woulda had one more nice punch he woulda took it..
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Old 01-13-07, 04:24 PM   #10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by DaTrusHurtz
Ur 0-3 in champ matches, I'll be hurtin' this dude
The title Haunts u so much, Disney's mansion would be PERFECT for u



Lmao, that is funny because you are like 1-3 in champ matches which ain't that much better. But anyway, I'm out now so I can't vote right now. I'll try later. But wow at how everyone is just following suit from Faime's vote.

Fuck it, here goes... basically this wasn't the best of battles. But overall Andy came with a more consistent verse and he had harder hitting punches. A lot of Sonny's shit was poorly worded and that is his main problem. He has the concepts but words them horridly and that makes the punch suck major ass. Some of Andy's punches were weak to but overall he had a better verse. The only thing that Sonny really had that was funny was the hacky sack line. Andy had the disney line going for him and the closer was nice. The 20-20 line could've been dope, as could the John Stockton line and the glocks line but poor wording let him down. Still, he had a better verse and therefore he wins this battle.

V/ - DaTrusHurtz
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Old 01-13-07, 05:59 PM   #11
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U've sucked for awhile, gettin' a new beginnin' is vital
Ur the league's John Stockton...
... u've been around FOREVER without winnin' a title
Ur 0-3 in champ matches, I'll be hurtin' this dude
The title Haunts u so much, Disney's mansion would be PERFECT for u


vs

This false shit you spit givin me anger,so lemme show wat real skill do
if DaTrusHurtz dogg, then what lies in my chamber will fucking kill you
No styles scrub,all your damn clothes juss reak of doom
and you pants like Cinderella stayin home, no ballroom

both you had decent verses, these i quoted from both i liked, and the ones i didnt were because they slightly missed like sonnys dirt bar wouldve been hot, the trus with the get rid of the slashes line was ok as well
overal i got it tied quotable wise so based on what style i like more and cuz he was a bit more crisp i got trus taking this slimly
v/ trus
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Old 01-13-07, 06:42 PM   #12
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U've sucked for awhile, gettin' a new beginnin' is vital
Ur the league's John Stockton...
... u've been around FOREVER without winnin' a title
Ur 0-3 in champ matches, I'll be hurtin' this dude
The title Haunts u so much, Disney's mansion would be PERFECT for u
Lift up, hit the gym, there's no way ur winnin' this slim
Newbs only need to read part of ur name to see ur future is Dim

vs.

Yo,thanks for digging up that dirt ,now I got less to do
Juss toss ur corpse in the hole, and put that dirt on you
No styles scrub,all your damn clothes juss reak of doom
and you pants like Cinderella stayin home, no ballroom


decent battle. dth was pretty consistent, had qoutables scattered throughout his verse pretty much. i wasn't feeling sonny's consistentsy. he opened strong, and then fell off imo. that's what decided my vote in this one, still a pretty close battle tho. both of you need to hit up the 1-2-1 final.

v/ dth.
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Old 01-13-07, 11:53 PM   #13
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U've sucked for awhile, gettin' a new beginnin' is vital
Ur the league's John Stockton...
... u've been around FOREVER without winnin' a title
Ur 0-3 in champ matches, I'll be hurtin' this dude
The title Haunts u so much, Disney's mansion would be PERFECT for u
Lift up, hit the gym, there's no way ur winnin' this slim
Newbs only need to read part of ur name to see ur future is Dim
I'm a TV man, the number of shows I watch is many n' yo
I love watchin' 20-20...
... but in ur past 3 champ matches, ur down in votes 20 to 0

vs.

Plus Sonny a real mac,that's why yo bird ain't be callin back
last time she asked you to kick it,she pulled out a hacky sack
Yo,thanks for digging up that dirt ,now I got less to do
Juss toss ur corpse in the hole, and put that dirt on you
No styles scrub,all your damn clothes juss reak of doom
and you pants like Cinderella stayin home, no ballroom

V// DTH
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Old 01-14-07, 03:03 AM   #14
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vote Trus for having a decent verse. half of sonnys lines barely even make sense. and none of them had decent rhyme.
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Old 01-14-07, 04:34 AM   #15
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^ LOL, ur first match, leavin' this bitch in the ashes
But you've evolved a lot...
... ur still wack, but at least u got rid of the slashes
U've sucked for awhile, gettin' a new beginnin' is vital
Ur the league's John Stockton...
... u've been around FOREVER without winnin' a title
Lift up, hit the gym, there's no way ur winnin' this slim
Newbs only need to read part of ur name to see ur future is Dim


vs
No styles scrub,all your damn clothes juss reak of doom
and you pants like Cinderella stayin home, no ballroom
LMFAO at this line
Plus Sonny a real mac,that's why yo bird ain't be callin back
last time she asked you to kick it,she pulled out a hacky sack

damn it...In all honesty I wanted to vote for Dimebags on this one for having the line of the battle that just woke me up on it but he didn't have a consistant verse at all...One or two punches wont win a battle...you have to come out with more shit and hop off the girlfriend jokes and get one something else. I after the Hacky sack line I thought all he needed was one or two more bars to win this but he couldn't pull it out. the DTH didn't come out too amazing n seemed like if he just through some shit together but he was more consistant in his verse giving me something to look foward to. This was a decent battle though.

V/DTH
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