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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

check, ill drop my first in a few

lol.. check it

your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!

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I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness



haha upping

O shiit. Nice, good match up here. just like i thought.





^this was really just meh. worded well, but just not harsh.

and then there was TO's 1st bar



^this one was holdin a good concept, but i just didn't like it. Maybe it was
the penis shit, or maybe just your set up. But really not that good

This one in my opinion came down to both of your 2nd bars




^this shit was worded nicely, wasn't a bad punch either.


then bob's...




^lmfao, that shit was sick. funny, nicely worded. Not bad



damn this is really fuckin close man, both did a good job. But i guess i'm gon have to go with bob on this one. definately a funnier line, but all together slightly harsher as well. good bout u guys.


v/bob

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last line was cool, indirect but cool
wasn't feeling any other dudes weak punches and indirect
bob had a little stronger


vote bob

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your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!



^^ this was whack, simple and pointless


this kids sex life is ghastly, he’s opted for jumpin old peoples bones
his penis is so pro’grammes it broadcasts in retirement homes

^^ this was the best bar in the whole battle..dope bar Nick

& I consider ya mom my equal, coz we both got guerilla tactical thinking
I plan raids n’ ambushes, her hairy ass climbed the Empire State Building


^ old concept, but worded really well....nothing shocking, but a pretty good bar.


I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness


^^ if this was worded better, it would have been a pretty funny punch, but it wasn't worded correctly to give it, its full potential

Vote: Nick

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^ word son, at least someone knows whats up

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your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!
ok

this kids sex life is ghastly, he’s opted for jumpin old peoples bones
his penis is so pro’grammes it broadcasts in retirement homes
lol ok
& I consider ya mom my equal, coz we both got guerilla tactical thinking
I plan raids n’ ambushes, her hairy ass climbed the Empire State Building
meh, but ok wordplay i guess, i just look at punches for the diss factor

I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness
ok i kinda liked this...

in the end, bob actually threw insults, and nick didnt really, text has always been considered battles because of disses, in a world where text is all about the next best wordplay and cute choices of words, text isn't really battling at all. So know it, Nick

v/ boberric

obviously.. bob's first punch wasn't even put together enough to even say you'd kill yourself. it was a relatively shitty diss, and you combated it by saying he likes to fuck old people. You followed that punch by saying his mom is a gorilla (lol), and then he creatively called u whack

in all this battle was really close, but your hardest diss was claiming that his mom's a monkey, and you could've said that a lot better too. So just let these opinions rummage around your noggin if you can, but you and I both know that you're just gonna call me an idiot because of your text ego.

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your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!
This was pretty lame.
I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness
The concept was cool, but the set up was poor and the follow up was worded poorly.

The Original
this kids sex life is ghastly, he’s opted for jumpin old peoples bones
his penis is so pro’grammes it broadcasts in retirement homes
I laughed, good wordplay.
& I consider ya mom my equal, coz we both got guerilla tactical thinking
I plan raids n’ ambushes, her hairy ass climbed the Empire State Building
Hahaha, lame ass but funny.


Solo's two half assed punches were better than bob's lame punch and cool idea that didn't really work out that well.

Vote: The Original

your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!
wording was off...alright..played..very weak...but has some potential in it if you work on the wording and overall punch...

this kids sex life is ghastly, he’s opted for jumpin old peoples bones
his penis is so pro’grammes it broadcasts in retirement homes
ahha. i like this one...good flip..dope bar.. lol can't say much..
good intro...

& I consider ya mom my equal, coz we both got guerilla tactical thinking
I plan raids n’ ambushes, her hairy ass climbed the Empire State Building
eh..i like it...but something threw me off.. good bar...i liked the first better but this concept is a little old...good flip on it though...


I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness
i liked this one alot..lol good shit..dope bar IMO..could of been worded to hit harder but hit pretty good nonetheless...
good..if your first bar would of been as good this would of been alot closer...

Bob, good shit, need to make both punches hit hard not just the last one...
thats the only reason i'm voted Original because both his concepts and punchs hit fairly well when your first one wasn't as eye catchin as your second bar..

good shit though...
good read..

v/ Original

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your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!
actually, I do see a slight connection between the line... 2nd line wordplay was dope, but the 1st line wasn't that harsh of a setup.

I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness
This was cool...again, good wordplay



this kids sex life is ghastly, he’s opted for jumpin old peoples bones
his penis is so pro’grammes it broadcasts in retirement homes
This was nice...setup was good and flowed from line 1 to line 2

& I consider ya mom my equal, coz we both got guerilla tactical thinking
I plan raids n’ ambushes, her hairy ass climbed the Empire State Building
tho this is a mom joke, its still a great punch... thought of KING KONG as I read this



Vote - The Original

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