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Old 03-09-09, 08:50 AM   #1
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Week 3: Nick 2-0 .vs one way 2-0

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Old 03-09-09, 11:17 AM   #2
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Old 03-10-09, 12:54 PM   #4
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actually, fuck it. i've got 16 for you.

ok faggot

nobody cares who’ll be coming out strong queer
cuz making a good battles a two way thing – aka your weak shit don’t belong here
ngga, I got name flips to son you.. all of ‘em worthy to quote
& this battle may start as one-nick, but it’ll end with a deep cut across ya throat
shit. I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
beating you is such a cake walk.. I could transition into musical chairs
seriously though.. you do leave dudes waking up torn
if ya don’t think one can break up people, ask his parents about the day he was born
now mom’s is working the corners, a hooker for the turn of the century
had so many foreigners inside her, her vag needs a SWAT team for tactical entry
I’m a sex god though. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text
you’ve been garbage forever.. and time has set its toll
text run’s been such a fade out.. ya next verse could double as a credit roll
dude you’ve lost this, know matter how you attacking me right
call this a hostile takeover, n’ I don’t mean how you get laid on a saturday night

over.

p.s. - you should have one vote at least, bobericc don't like me.
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Old 03-10-09, 08:22 PM   #5
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Ok dip shit...

All you did was complain from the moment you took over the scene
If this league is turning into such a drag…I vote you for the queen
This dude’s lonely and broke, I scheme to make money with my local team
The other day I bought a blank canvas, and flipped it as nicks social scene
Your quick to rudely insult and judge, and you sure are found to bitch
But I don’t see you as the mean guy, I’d place you further down the list
Nick on a date two consecutive days is rare, dining in the stale breeze
But at the end of the night he doesn’t pay for females just pays a male fee
I’ll show you where washed ups belong, when the bait and hook falls
Cause I’ll hit N.F so hard with an L, he’ll quit rap and take up football
You never get a good match up, and when you do, no one agrees it’s bomb
The last time anyone said Nick’s in, all good heads were fighting in Vietnam
Your shit bores quickly, about a quarter is what your life is worth
Your so fucking retarded it took me a long time to write this verse
Your campaign about voting is going no where and I bet it wont last
but things wouldn’t seem so shity if you took your head outa your ass
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Old 03-10-09, 08:27 PM   #6
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ngga, I got name flips to son you.. all of ‘em worthy to quote
& this battle may start as one-nick, but it’ll end with a deep cut across ya throat
shit. I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
beating you is such a cake walk.. I could transition into musical chairs
seriously though.. you do leave dudes waking up torn
if ya don’t think one can break up people, ask his parents about the day he was born
I’m a sex god though. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text

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Your quick to rudely insult and judge, and you sure are found to bitch
But I don’t see you as the mean guy, I’d place you further down the list
You never get a good match up, and when you do, no one agrees it’s bomb
The last time anyone said Nick’s in, all good heads were fighting in Vietnam

Vote - Nick Fletcher

That false positive/decent at text line beat One Way's whole verse.
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Old 03-11-09, 01:56 PM   #7
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I’m a sex god though. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text
& this battle may start as one-nick, but it’ll end with a deep cut across ya throat
shit. I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
beating you is such a cake walk.. I could transition into musical chairs



.vs


Quote:
All you did was complain from the moment you took over the scene
If this league is turning into such a drag…I vote you for the queen
Your quick to rudely insult and judge, and you sure are found to bitch
But I don’t see you as the mean guy, I’d place you further down the list
I’ll show you where washed ups belong, when the bait and hook falls
Cause I’ll hit N.F so hard with an L, he’ll quit rap and take up football





this was a pretty descent battle. Both had 3 quoteables in my opinion.
One way i think you started out pretty strong man, i liked most of the
beginning of your verse, but towards the end. you fell off drastically dog.
Like you went from ok punches...to statements...to just blah. For example
i thought your opener was cool. funny, and nicely worded...then like ya last
4 were just wack dog.


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Your shit bores quickly, about a quarter is what your life is worth
Your so fucking retarded it took me a long time to write this verse



^THAT was fuckin retarded lol.


Anyways, like i said i got 3 good quotes for each of you. so really this
comes down to who i think had the strongest punch...and thats one ways
opener...against nicks false positive punch...and nick took it. I thought that
shit was clever as fuck. never seen that concept before. Where as one way
you had alot of played shit in ya verse....like that closer, i've seen YOU use
that concept like every week for the past month.


anyways good battle v/nick
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Old 03-11-09, 05:44 PM   #8
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yo that false/positive line is FUCKING CLASSICK!!!!! danm that shit was funny and hard hitting...
ur whole verse was indeed impressive nick i can see why the 90 plus wins alot of punches connected hard and was very creative..... 10/10 on point hotness....

one, you had a good verse i was also impressive i thought u came pretty good and the drag/ vote for the queen shit was also funny as shit and connected good nice flow, nick verse just ova power you man but good battle both of you..... 7/10

vote nick.... ( i would love to battle u 10 bars of heat ) but this aint the place or time....
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Old 03-11-09, 05:57 PM   #9
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cool. The "ngga" did it for me tho.
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Old 03-11-09, 08:42 PM   #10
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^ lmao, word.
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Old 03-12-09, 12:02 AM   #11
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ngga, I got name flips to son you.. all of ‘em worthy to quote
& this battle may start as one-nick, but it’ll end with a deep cut across ya throat
shit. I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
beating you is such a cake walk.. I could transition into musical chairs
I’m a sex god though. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text

vs

Your quick to rudely insult and judge, and you sure are found to bitch
But I don’t see you as the mean guy, I’d place you further down the list


Oneway had a few decent attempts in this one, and that mean line was fresh.

But...

Nick had a more consistent verse and some very nice quotables.

Vote - Nick
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Old 03-13-09, 10:18 PM   #12
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nobody cares who’ll be coming out strong queer
cuz making a good battles a two way thing – aka your weak shit don’t belong here
dope opener
ngga, I got name flips to son you.. all of ‘em worthy to quote
& this battle may start as one-nick, but it’ll end with a deep cut across ya throat
lmao nice
shit. I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
beating you is such a cake walk.. I could transition into musical chairs
nice again
-pretty much all nicks bars could be quoted

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All you did was complain from the moment you took over the scene
If this league is turning into such a drag…I vote you for the queen
-decent

You never get a good match up, and when you do, no one agrees it’s bomb
The last time anyone said Nick’s in, all good heads were fighting in Vietnam
liked this bar also

you had a couple other personals one but nothing compared to nick this tie around personals consistency and a little harder punches this was a good battle

vote nick fletcher
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Old 03-14-09, 12:50 AM   #13
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I see a lot of old re-written concepts in this battle lol.
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Old 03-14-09, 10:25 AM   #14
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If you can flip old shit dope, it's fine. It's when you flip old concepts poorly that people question.
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Old 03-14-09, 08:49 PM   #15
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Lol @ that false positive line. that shit was dope.
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