well this is a collab we did for fun na mean lol

we did this shit pretty quick but its good ahaha so dont front

ok

Spiritz go first

in the hook first and me then him back andd forth

then 2nd verse its me

then hook again

Wanna Be Like Us-Lo Fi

Wanna Be Like Us-hi Fi

there we go


Uppin


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p.s some peeps cant play soundclick so i uploaded it on dmusic aight

http://skillz.dmusic.com/ its the only track there

spritz needs emotion and a better rhyme scheme both flows were choppy and the chorus should be better. I don't know you said you were gonna do it over so that what I say you should do

thanx for replyin

yo yo this was coo, both had nice flow 4rill
lemme hear sumthin else

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www.soundclick.com/skillzdarapgod


go there and u can peeps some of my battles and stuff

iight dawg imma peep

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1st verse i wasnt feelin. the flow was too choppy. second verse was pretty nice. The 2nd half of the chorus was Really off beat. but anyways keep it up. return the favor ya'll please. Peep God's Breath.

Mind Theory - God's Breath: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35586

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

It sounds like you could use a new mic too

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

which one it was 2 people

thanx for the replys

first verse = first person

second person = second person

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lol

Mind Theory.. From St. Pete? Hmmmm... Do I Possibly Know You?

anyway i replied at R-S..

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Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

durrr

KEEP IT UP YALL... I AINT A HATER BUT KNOW WANTS TO B LIKE YALL... THEY WANNA BE LIKE ME.... GET AT ME!

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