Is this all life is? A continous daily regimine of absolutely NOTHING....


im not to ambitious, sleeping on hopes and wishes
dreaming of fictious bitches & enormous riches
this list cuts deep, slices that require stiches
i miss much sleep, life is just nerves & twiches
gone in the blink of an eye, lids open wide
try to see what i missed, ignorance is my guide
pissed, still can't figure out why im alive
must have enless lives, inside i die all the time
my life is a line & it ends at every sentence
im not who im suppose to be, its pretend for the senses
skin & expressions are just apolstery
concealing the real me and all my guesses
hard headed, forget it and dispose of all the lessons
even though i know the answers before the questions
what should i do? im accepting any suggestions
i cant live this life any more, bored w/ routine
headed nowhere fast and im picking up steam
a one man banned, played out loud in this dream
there's no I in team, and it seems im the outcast
so sure of myself but real quick to doubt fast
only Rich by name, i know nothing about cash
no flash of the stash, just change for the bus
i dont believe Myself, how the fuck can i Trust?
headed for Dust To Dust, just to get swept away
cant make sense of my life, yet i continue to pay
how can tommorow be brighter when its always today??


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I'm really felin' this... pretty deep shit.. flow was good all the way thru, vocab was pretty good.. yea yea, fo-real shit...

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I liked this drop also..I like it better than the collab you got wit Mentill..but anyways..Nice Drop..Good flow..you maintained the flow all the way threw..Drop was pretty deep..Me and you outta do a collab sometime..i got a topic already

No Doubt.... Rtikulate we will get a Collab going soon... PEace

i know what ya saying bout the monotony of life. Im lookin for a job but every day is exactly the same i just float through doin nuttin but drinkin and smokin. Anyway the piece was nice nice flow aight vocab and good content. i cant really think of many criticisms bout the piece. 8/10 return the favour cuz and check mine shinobi life

It had and excellent flow and use of multies.....



^^^ nice ending

This was dope. I liked this right here and I'm feeling the concept alot cuz I feel like that sometime. Your flow was fundamental not really flashy which is good for getting across your point, if it were any longer it would have been easy to lose interest in the drop because of that. But thats the only thing, tight shit.

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im not to ambitious, sleeping on hopes and wishes
dreaming of fictious bitches & enormous riches

why do you dream of that? nice opener for this.

this list cuts deep, slices that require stiches
i miss much sleep, life is just nerves & twiches

i dont know what the list is. nice rhyme pattern though.

gone in the blink of an eye, lids open wide
try to see what i missed, ignorance is my guide

very nice. i like this one.

pissed, still can't figure out why im alive
must have enless lives, inside i die all the time

brilliant. really fuckin nice!

my life is a line & it ends at every sentence
im not who im suppose to be, its pretend for the senses

sort of fell off the level of those last 2 bars.

skin & expressions are just apolstery
concealing the real me and all my guesses

falling off.

hard headed, forget it and dispose of all the lessons
even though i know the answers before the questions

picking it up again. nice rhyme pattern.

what should i do? im accepting any suggestions
i cant live this life any more, bored w/ routine
headed nowhere fast and im picking up steam
a one man banned, played out loud in this dream

yes you got it again. fucking nice!

there's no I in team, and it seems im the outcast
so sure of myself but real quick to doubt fast
only Rich by name, i know nothing about cash

ohh! i love this shit right here^

no flash of the stash, just change for the bus
i dont believe Myself, how the fuck can i Trust?
headed for Dust To Dust, just to get swept away
cant make sense of my life, yet i continue to pay
how can tommorow be brighter when its always today

EXCELLENT ENDING! really nice!

nice job Rich. This verse may have fell off a little bit but it kicked it self up like a son of a bitch. very nice. im hoping to see more stuff like this in the future.

ps.

peep . the disease . if you happen to have time. thanks man. very good.


9.7-10

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dope drop.

excellent topic.. and you breezed through it lovely.

vocab was on point... some decent effective word-play here and there.... the multis were the highlight of this piece overall.

dopeness.

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