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Old 04-05-03, 05:38 PM   #1
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"7 Deadly Rap"

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Sloth, Lust, Greed, Envy/
Pride, Wrath, and Gluttony/
These are the seven things that can destroy a rapper's soul/
trust me, I already know/
cuz Im.........

Im.......


Im the most gluttonous muthafucka you've eva seen/
always ea-ting, but never once ever hun-ga-ry/
glut-to-ny's, got me/
de-vour-ing/
ev-er-y thing I see/
filled with greed/
and avarice, Panda-ris/
Box was locked/ (Pandora's Box, changed to rhyme with avarice)
til I wanted more/
and exposed it to the whole fuckin world/
you could give me earth, and it still wouldnt work/
could give me the universe, and it still isnt worth/
what I really want/
which is what this other guy's already got/
cuz even tho Im greedy, Im more envy-ous/
try as I might, the grass will always be greener on the other side/
born of absolute desire and green eyes/
but no ambition cuz Im the most indolent prick you've never met/
"fix the fence?" shit I cant even pitch a tent/
here u can have my fuck/
cuz Im too lazy to give it, so Im givin' it up/
more sloth then the animal if it was passed out and drunk/
and since I dont have it any more, I can honestly say
"I dont give a fuck"

7 ways to lie, 7 ways to find, 7 ways are mine/
here just let me have a try/
7 ways to rhyme, 7 ways to cry, 7 ways to live/
and 7 ways to die/

Im back with an inordinate craving for pleasure/
my horniness is off the charts...can't be measured/
attracted to shit that's not the norm/
beatin' off to bizare, hairy, fat, chink porn/
always humpin and fuckin and rubbin one out/
never humpin or fuckin, but Im cummin out loud/
walkin around with a permanent erection/
cryin out "OW", with this permanent infection/
Im a wannabe porn star, u dont even have to pay me/
cuz Ima still be lustin even when Im eighty/
Ill be cummin on teens like Arthur Fonzarelli/
no one but time can tell me/
how good Im gonna be/
shit right now I see myself as the baddest emcee/
already better then Pac, Slim Shady/
B.I.G., Nas and Talib Kweli/ (I dont really, just to show Pride)
not gonna even try blah, blah, bla-blee/
this goes beyond words, goes beyond rap/
cuz God dont know the wrath/
of a foresaken emcee/
I butcher double-crossers in life and in their dreams/
a vindictive vengeful muthafucka killin in tha streets/
rage with absolute passion/
look at me wrong, bitch u just askin/ for

7 ways to lie, 7 ways to find, 7 ways are mine/
here just let me have a try/
7 ways to rhyme, 7 ways to cry, 7 ways to live/
and 7 ways to die/


.....and thats how we live and end our life,
.....7 ways....Hooligan X...520.....peace....
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Old 04-05-03, 09:53 PM   #2
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damn why niggas be sleeping n shit, this was sum nice shit dogg
hook was co0, lyrics was on point liked the second verse
u should tryna put this in audio
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Old 04-05-03, 10:01 PM   #3
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thx a lot for uppin
ur right fuckas sleep like a bitch in here
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Old 04-05-03, 10:25 PM   #4
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returnin tha favor

nice topical verse homie.Real diff subject and its good to be original.Switched it up a lil to tell bout 5 different stories @ once but it came out real hot.Stay ^
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Old 04-05-03, 10:42 PM   #5
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thx for uppin
everyone else that is sleepin
WAKE UP!!!
I posted on a bunch of threads
so please return the favor
thx
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Old 04-05-03, 10:44 PM   #6
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this was nice, had great vocab and it didnt sound forced, i like the whole thing, but the 2nd verse was better the start of the first verse kind of threw me off.
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Old 04-06-03, 01:08 PM   #7
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thx for uppin
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Old 04-06-03, 01:56 PM   #8
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i thought that shit was good, and the verse was hella tight too
i agree w/ d.l.w. i think u should think about recordin that in an audio, thx 4 writin 2 me , peace

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Old 04-06-03, 02:01 PM   #9
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thx a lot man
and I will keep peepin ur shit
everyone else c'mon I need some fuckin feedback
Im just lookin for one or two more responses
thats it, Iwill peep ur shit in return if I already havent
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Old 04-06-03, 02:03 PM   #10
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yeah nice piece man
same reasons as given above^^^^
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Old 04-06-03, 02:37 PM   #11
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if i knew a lot more on the seven deadly sins and what they meant the rhyme probably would made a whole lot more sense to me....but everything flowed perfectly....i liked it.....

mad uppins
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Old 04-06-03, 03:23 PM   #12
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thx for uppin
lookin for one more
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Old 04-06-03, 04:41 PM   #13
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great choice of words...def one of tha best i read all day! it had alot of meanin..i liked it..
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Old 04-06-03, 05:57 PM   #14
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thx for uppin
go vote on my battle against 512
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Old 04-06-03, 06:00 PM   #15
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its tight cuz its original....but i cant go off like the rest of the katz in here bout how great its written....jus got boring
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