Aight....

16 lines max....
U go first....

Report in first

Aight i'll make this short

I give you “7 days” to live like the movie “The Ring”, I bet you start to sing, when I beat you like the police beat Rodney King
Your girl got nice lips and nice hips, If we was in “slavery” you would call me “Master 504” cause I hit with “Tight Whips”
You on your “knees” more than a “Muslim family” in deep “Prayer”, flow got your rhymes “skipping” more than a “jump rope” and “Cheap CD player”
Its like I can’t stop, my rhymes are similar to arts of “Taiwan” cause if rhymes were dicks I would “Bang-cock” (Bangkok)
You want more? Cause I got plenty is stock. Your mom nicknamed me “Time” cause I beat your ass “round the clock”
When you eat your girl out, she says, “Bitch clean your plate”, call me a “hot comb” cause I set your “nappy” rhymes “strait”

Don't feed off of my verse. (feed is to try to come back to something that i already said)

Aight

shit i was gonna use that bang-cock line..........

What's wrong with the rap game? This dude's living proof/
They call him Lil Brick cuz he's "small" and "can't shoot"/
He thinks he's a "big man", really he just a "fetus"/
Dude ain't eva had sex before, his slogan is "A.D.I.D.A.S"/
The "hottest" sex he ever had was when he jacked off near a "fire"/
If we was livin in the midieval days, you'd prolly be callin me "sire"/
So take away rope or wire, he might hang himself from a tree AKA KKK/
If not that, take away his gat, he'll spray away his brains like Kurt Cobain/
But I ain't gon' leave u slain, here take a Prozac/
Don't take too many dogg, you might get a heart attack/
Nevermind, forget the pills, only God can rescue you/
It'll cost you too much to afford your prescriptions, you'll have to become a male prostitute/
I'm sure yo moms can teach ya somethin on how to blow a cock/
Just make sure yo moms won't blow your dough on rocks/
They call me coach, cuz I draw up plays with "chalk"/
Don't be surprised if you find cops
drawin lines around your body, buddy youve been lyrically shot/

Holla

Good battle gangsta....


Up the votes

Yo...vote up

Fa sho
I heard this line before
"They call me coach, cuz I draw up plays with "chalk"/
Don't be surprised if you find cops
drawin lines around your body, buddy youve been lyrically shot/"
Not in that same order but the same idea, i dont think you bit it though. Good battle dude.

If we was livin in the midieval days, you'd prolly be callin me "sire"/

^^^^beam that was tha wackest line ive ever seen in my life but tha rest of ur vers was hottness

Your girl got nice lips and nice hips, If we was in “slavery” you would call me “Master 504” cause I hit with “Tight Whips”

jus a small example of lil bricks master wordplay i think he gets my vote but this battle was close that one wack line did u in beam

vote lilbrick

Damn dude, u just hatin on me

And I didnt hear that line before...sorry if I bit it from somebody...my bad....

Good battle gangsta

1-N-Gone hates on me votes...that shit shouldnt count. He always votes against me. But you can decide

ok read it outloud to urself and ul see wat im sayin i didnt say ur verse was bad tha shit was hott but im sayin that one line is all it takes dunny