Yo pay attention ......this shit about to get crunked.........


thinking of the woman always makes me smile,
how they walk, talk, smile and bare a child,
the woman is the backbone of our existence,
though they are irresistent, and very innocent,

until they are scared and their heart is broke,
and POOF! there dreams and hopes go up in smoke,
a woman scorn is like sticking one million thorns,
into your big toe~its torn~yeah fellaz we're wrong,

our woman deserve respect no matter what your race,
we need to honor them wholy in grace give them space,
let them build because they are the first to teach,
our babies their steps how to eat and to speak,

to hit a woman is to hit your own mother,
dont ever mistake abuse as a way to say you love her,
arguments happen~thats love without slapped up,
why she gotta go outside eye patched face wrapped up?

if it happens again i swear to god police will come,
and question her where is it i got the gun,
they only came cause the neighboors complained of gunshots,
but it wont matter cause you'll be dead pop~~~~


inspired by an abusive father at that time.....pz...hollla back

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UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN SLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPEEEEEERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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deep deep track kid......nice flow.....nice stroy.....just all around nice piece....should drop that on audio and it would be mad nice
anyways B EZ
One

awwww that so sweet

thinking of the woman always makes me smile,
how they walk, talk, smile and bare a child,
the woman is the backbone of our existence,
though they are irresistent, and very innocent,

that really did make me smile

nice piece

LOOOOOOOL ^^^^^^^^Aight thanks for the FEEDBACK FAM UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

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This was ILL dunz...
Im Lovin the way yo flipped it in the end..wasn't expecting that...
if this was from real experiences, then im sorry you had to go through that shit..its fucked up..

but this was deep..heartfelt shit..

Lifes Not a bitch..
Its a beatiful lady that you can't understand..
so you just call it a bitch..lol

peace
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Shit was Dope Killer Ending

SAL AND GRYM thanks for the Feedback yo...............This....real shit...forealzzzzzzzzz...........Abusive fuckin PArentssssssss...na'mean

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UPPUNNNNNNNN SLEEPERSSSSSSSSSS

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tis was awesome i liked it alota

^^^^^^^^^THANKS.......................


Uppun............................................. ..............
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nice drop good word play, way to represent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51173

yep good drop here...

first open mic I've seen from Ruth...

hope to see more

also peep Street Prophecies

i feel that this song has lots of passion in it, and i was right cause of what it was inspired by, i am sorry that, shit like that happens, and it shouldn't happen to ppl who can rhyme. so keep wrighing that was very nice!