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Topic Lost And Found

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im kinda hurt that i didnt make it higher in the seeding but hey im happy to be in and hopefully i can give Sureal a run fo rhis money

Lost And Found..

Opener
Walk Through The Doors, You Feel The Pain..
Only a Retirement Home, But So Much Dismay..
People Dreadfully Ill, Clinging To Spirit..
Laying On Death Beds, Nearly In-Coherent..
Living Day-By-Day, Not Knowing, Could Be Last..
Life Nearly Completed, Goals Been Surpassed..

Nurse
She Helps The Ill Recover Quickly, To Recover Lives..
To The Moment They Depart, From When They Arrive..
Overly Stressed, One Nurse, Let Us Call Her Judy..
Quite Depressed, But She Always Completed Her Duties..
She Had No Family, Nothing To Love, Except For Work..
All Of The Love Incompassed Her, Did Not Help The Hurt..

Thoughts
One Day She Searched Her Soul, For Her Lifes Purpose..
Never Been Strong Willed, Always Weak and Nervous..
She Searched Within Herself All Day, Nothing Found..
She Then Tried To Stand, But Collapsed To The Ground..
Lay There Crying, Inside Slowly Dying, Could Not Move..
Barely Breathing, This Life Detiorating, She Didn't Choose..

Work
The Next Day When She Did Not Show Up For Work..
For 5 Years, Every Shift, Always There, No Quirks..
One Of The Other Nurses, Went To Check Her Home..
Saw Through The Window, On The Floor, Deathly Alone..
Called 9-1-1.. Emergencey Unit, Been Dispatched..
Lying Still, Judy And Life.. Barely Attached..

Hospital
Wakes Up In The Hospital, Alone, "No-Body Cares"..
Many On Their Way , Of That, She Was Not Aware..
Tried Hard To Go Back To Sleep, Feeling Distraught..
Finally After Two Hours, She Slowly Drifted Off..

True Love
She Was Awaken By A Sound, Looked Up To See Above..
All The People From The Home, Now This Was True Love..
Told Her Of Their Worry,That Maybe She Would Not Make-It..
They Told Her How Much They Loved Her, Not Mistaken..
She Had Always Been There For Them, In Times Of Need..
Once Again Looked Around, Saw All The Cards, 'All For Me?'..
Had Never Felt This Much Care In Her Whole Life..
Now Knew Of Greater Love, With No Worry Or Strife..

Lost And Found
You See Just Hours After They Left, Judy Passed On To A Better World..
She Left Smiling, Cuz Love That Was Once Lost, Had Been Found And Unfurled..

^^^very well done sureal,lets wait to see wat a2z has to spit, but ur verse was very very nice and very well done

go on purple haze, if you straighten your neck you might get a couple of inches further up his arse

hahah could not have said it better

Quick Freeposting In My Fucking Thread...

Purple Haze's vote will not count on a d/r...if you have any beefs with that sureal, IM me and we'll talk about it...ill drop in a few

..::Pre- Jane::..

He Wandered The Land Aimlessly, Spirit Trodden And Distraught//
Just Seeking Affection, A Bit Of Love, But It Was All For Naught//
He Sat Alone Watching The News And Belching, Staring At The Goings-On//
Just Three Day Stubble, A Pile Of Beer Cans So Deep the Floor Itself Was Gone//
With No One To Make It Sharp and Tone For, His Lonliness Went To His Head//
And Let His Rock Hard Six Pack Turn From A Chick Magnet Into A Sagging Keg//
His Sharp Mind Was Dulled By Hops And Liquor To The Point That The World Was Distorted//
And Sent Into A Tail Spin Of Depression Asking God Why As A Fetus He Hadn't Been Aborted//
And Left To Die Peacefully Instead Of Living In This Hell Of Hurt, Crying And Hate//
Where Men Couldn't Control Hormones And Instead Of Maturbate They Would Brutally Rape//
His Hair Was A Bush Of Tangles, Why Bother?, He Had No Where Important To Go//
No Mother, No Father, No Family...No One To Make Proud, No Ones FaceTo Glow
And When He Got The Energy To Get Up And Go And Earn Some Honest Cash//
Instead Of Using It To Affect His Life For The Better, He Would Shove It In A Stripper's Pants//
His Life Did Not Matter, He Was Living With No Care, Hope Or Urge//
But His Life Pulled A 180 Degree Turn That Fateful Night That He Met Her//

..::Post-Jane::..

Was She An Angel From Heaven...She Must Be... There Was No Possibility//
That Someone So Perfect Could Exist In A Place Of Such Death And Hostiltiy//
Even If She Were Just A Human, There Was No Way To Approach Such A Martyr//
Surelly She Was Educated...So Much Wittier, Happier And God Knows Smarter//
But His Mind Told Him: "Whats The Worst Thing That Might Occur?"//
She Says "Go Away", You Turn Around And Never Again Talk To Her//
Thats Not So Bad...After All There Is Much A Scenario Much Worse//
You Dieing All Alone with No Friends, No One To Weep As Exit The Hease//
He Drew A Deep Breath, And With More Confidence Then He Had Thought//
He Walked To The Woman Too Good For This Earth And Just Began To Talk//
"Hi' He Said "My Name is Alex" To Which She Replied With A Smile "My Name Is Jane"//
Jane...Such A Beautiful Name Worthy Of A God...For Something Witty He Wracked His Brain//
But Nothing Came, So He Spat Out Before He Had Time To Think//
"I Think Your Beautful...I'd Be Honored If I could Buy You A Drink//
She Started With Suprise, After All, He Did Have A Pretty Smile And The Eyes Of A Fox//
How Could She Say No? How Should She Say Yes...She Settled with "Tequila On The Rocks"//
They Sat And Talked For Hours About Many Things...About How He Had Been Alone//
She Was Attracted To Her, And Her To Him...Finally She Asked "Would You Like To Come Home?"//
They Didn't Even Bother With The Small Talk, They Made Made Made Love, But The Next Morning There Was A Key//
Laying On The Side Stand With Some Numbers Scribbled On Signed By Jane Saying "Call Me"//
His Heart Swelled Up, But For A Change It Wasn't From Eating Red Meat//
He Had Found The Girl Of His Dreams...He Had Someone TO Impress, A Reason To Be Neat//
A Year Later, Alex And Jane Were In A Suburban Neighborhood Happily Married//
Trying To Raise The Child Fathered By Alex That Jane For Nine Months Had Carried
Thanks To Jane, Alex Had Had A Reason To Turn His Life Around//
And For Both People A Love That Was Once Lost Had Now Been Found


good luck

This Was Really Good...I Enjoyed Both Of Ya'lls Verses....A2Z Good Verse BUT You Didn't Stay On Topic As Well As Sureal Did...Both Had A Good Vocab n An Overall Good Verse...This Was A Good Topical Battle..But Sureal Won This Jus By Lil Cuz He Stayed On Topic Better Than A2Z...Much Respect To Both

Vote - Sureal

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Ok for the 1st seed battling the 16th seed, this was damn close. First of all, Sureal, your verse had a great beginning, but it was predictable and dull. I think that you probably keyed this, and got stuck as to where to go. A2Z, your beginning sucked, but I liked your ending, very well writteb. Beginning nothing much, but I loved the last half.

So I am faced with a decision... I am going to abstain for the time being...I know that sucks, but I'm going to have to think on this one...sorry


EDITED: Ok I thought this over, and it took me a good long time to figure out what made who's verse better. Sureal's was more organised, and wasn't as jumpy. A2Z, I told you about your beginning, the reason I didn't like it was because it jumped from subject to subject in the beginning, and was hard to follow. Sureal's, wasn't jumpy, and followed a good plot, so...

\/ote=Sureal

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Yo I Gotsta Give My Props To A2z... One of Yo' Better Topicals!
Nice Work Son..

Alright, 2-0 so far. lets keep the votes rollin in...

^werd props to A2Z,

This was a good topical both were v.nice verses.
Sureal's had a nice opener, but is kinda the same as most of your stuff, (not a bad thing but is gettin kinda similar). but i agre with mad it does sound like you probably keyed this. but overall a great opener, nice concept and you stayed to topic well.

A2Z your opener wasn't as good but you picked it up, was a nice concept but you didnt really stay on topic and was kinda jumpy,
but was good, the best i've ever seen from you.....

so my vote goes to SUREAL
but props to both, and A2Z just keep gettin better baby,
youve got alot of potential.

-peace