10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No D/R votes
No Hate Votes
No Biting
No Recycling
I spit 1st

Time to teach this young buck a Lesson................




Mortality Get mortally Merked by my lyrical fatalities/1
I aint here to be ya friend so lets skip the formalites/2
This reality, And no I talkin Bout a T.V. show/3 (Reality TV)
Round here Newb shit talkers get merked by R.B.'s pro's/4 (like me)
Especially a lil dip shit like you who's only fifteen years old/5 (Check Profile)
Only 'shit he spits' is lyin over there dyin in his toilet bowl/6
He Beat 7 newbs and all of the sudden he think he Tight/7
Bitch U couldn't be 'tight' even if u was virgin pussy on 'prom night'/8 (LoL)
Fuckin ILLosernists my raps sprayin u like primatine mist/9
While your punches like 'dodo birds', they dont even 'exist'/10(DoDo birds are Extinct)
I bet your pissed, u Look at this and be like.......

Mortality: "Damn, He merkin me"/11
Mortality: "I spit My Dopest Lyric's But them shit's aint workin G"/12

Fuckin Upset wanna Be vet, Mort be a sport and give it rest/13
U can't contest wit RB's Best, Even if ya raps came strapped wit mags & bulletproof vests/14
Surely-u-jest, I suggest U're best bet is to take up pop music wit NSYNC/15
Battlin is just not for U, Like Soldiers who dont know how to think/16
You must be crazy if u think ya 8mile style will work-here/17
Them B-Rabbit fagget lines will only get u MERKED-qweer/18
Its 'Game Over' for this kid no more extra lives/19
His 'Mortality' can Rest in peace, becuz it just died/20

aight
i'll post tomorrow
i'm bout to go to bed

i would of posted before
but i've been makin a crew sig so yea

U got until 5:00 PM 2morrow Or I'm Uppin 4 no show votes
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sorry to freepost but iceberg........that was pretty good i like the first line but that verse was hott well im out tho holla and sorry to freepost

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Huh china.

dawg i wont be able to get on until after 5:00 PM
sorry man
i'll post around 5:30
so yea............................................... .....................

^Bitch Stallin tryna come up wit a good comeback........Its Ok kid U've been Merked, There's nothin U can say that can come back from that no matter how hard ya try.

there was nothing good about his verse....it sucked...i'm just
being honest here....elevate....ur punches is weak...ur wordplay
is wack.....everything about ur verse equals weak and wack....
i'm not hatin...just tryin to help......yall need to be battlin in
frontlines...just cuz ur record shouldn't mean u should battle in
elite.....cuz in now way.....is this an elite battle....ghost

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Blessed wit Skillz

^Shut The Fuck UP

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Son of Bitch Pink Slips that herb So2Speak and all of the sudden he think he a super MC now........................................U still weak as fuck prolly why yo ass didnt wanna battle me..................

sorry. .
but ima have to back 13th on this.....
ya verse wasnt great and i aint tryin to hate. .
also you came in one of my battles and said bitch nobody cares about aim.
well, nobody cares about reality tv either, or the dodo bird wtf was that?

but i understand, u have an excuse, PMS.

LMAO at Feeble Minded, U right I did come in yo battle and said that shit didn't I? LoL U gotta admit though Yo verse was weak as hell on that battle........Only a CPU nerd muh fucka would talk about AIM in a battle......Real Life U got laughed off staged for that lame shit.

EVERYONE STOP FREEPOSTIN UNTIL MORTALITY POSTS, WHEN HE POSTS THEN U CAN DO ALL YOUR CRITIQUES & SHIT.......UNTIL THEN SHUT THE FUCK UP I DONT WANNA HEAR ANYONE ELSES OPINION.

IceBerg420 is gonna get a new asshole ripped!



The Lines You spit have 0 "Progression" Can't Hit Me Cuz They Got No "Connection", I'll Kill You With My Ruthless "Agreesion" See This A New Merking "Session"//
I'm Beatin You Even Tho I Got "Writers Block" IceBerg Bite So Many Lines Even "Biters Shocked", This Bitch Gettin "Rocked" Walkin In Battle Dome Wit My Gun "Cocked"//
Battlin Me Bitch You'll Get "Annihilated" Battlin You Makes My Time "Violated", My Punches Makin You "Dilapidated" Battlin Me I'll Make Ya Whole Body Be "Amputated"//
This Fuckin Faggit Prolly Likes To Wear "LipStick" Fuck IceBerg his name should be "DipStick", Against Me His Lines Gettin "Ripped Quick" His Lines Would Never Be "This Slick"//

Against Me This Bitch Will Get "Dropped" 1 Punch To the stomach and his "Belly Flopped", My Punchlines Connect So Hard They Can't Be "Stopped" My Vocab So High It Can't Be "Topped"//
Trust Me Bitch You Can't "Spit" Ya Lines Suck Ass and Smell Like "Shit", IceBerg Is A TeenAger Still Suckin His Moms "Tit" Dawg You Can't Rap So Juss "Quit"//
This Is Another Loss For you To Add To The "Pile" Steppin All Ova Ya Ass Like You Was A Floor "Tile", Ur Bitch Ass Doesn't Come Close to this ILL "Juvenile" You Called Me Out For A Battle When Ya Rhymes Aren't Even Worth My "While"//
Defeating Yo Punk Ass Is "Simple" I'll Pop Yo Ass Away like A "Pimple", Ya Rhymes Got Bigger Holes Than A "Dimple" My Lines Are Twice As Good As Yours Matter Afact They "Triple"//

Look You Can't "Rap" Ya Ja Rule Quoted Lines Are "Crap", Callin Me Out Is Like Callin For A "Death Trap" Call Me Kurt Angle Cuz I'll Make you "Tap"//(WWE)
You Winnin This Battle Is Being "Declined" Your Rhymes Are Wack You Need to "Resign", You Need To Learn ILL Lines So Read "My Rhymes" You Wont Win This Battle..This Shit is "Mine"//
You Wack As Fuck Give It A "Rest" Ya Style is Garbage "None To Less", Battlin Me I'll Put Bullets In Your "Chest" Next Time Ya Step To me You Best Be Wearin A "Bullet Proof Vest"//
You Callin Me Out That's "Senseless" Cuz My Punches Are "Preventless", You Wanted A Battle While You Was "Careless" Next Time You Battle Someone Make Sure It's "Fairness"//

Your Rhymes Are Extremely "Wack" Talent Is Obviously What You "Lack", Callin Me Out You Must Be On "Crack" Cuz My Lines Leave You Confused They Simply Throw You Off "Track"//
My Flows Constantly Be "Sick" Maybe Urs Would Be Like That If You Stopped "Suckin Dick", Your No Competition For Me "Trick" I Could Easly Merk Your Ass "Real Quick"//
You Prolly Had Pre-Writtin Lines All You Had To Do Was "Copy-And-Paste" For Me To Battle You My Time is "Such-A-Waste", You Are The Wackest Guy I've Eva Had To "Face" I'll Fuck Up Ya Face So Much People Will Think You Tripped Ova Ya "Shoe Lace"//
My Lines Killin You With Awsome "Graffic" Ya Verse Seems Held up Like It got Caught In "Traffic", Battlin You Is An Easy Win For Me Aint That "Fantastic" Wait I Think You Beat Me....To Bad I'm Bein "Sarcastic"//

Only Gat You Could Pull Out Would Be A "Cap Gun" How You Gone Battle Me When Ya Verses Have No "Action", I'll Merk You Easly Quote My Words In "Closed Caption" I'm Killin You Your Rhymes Have No "Attraction"//
IceBerg Beatin Me Or YoungWhiteThug19 "Bitch Please" Only Way This Bitch Could Fight Is If He Was In Iraq "Over Seas", IceBerg's Only Way To Gets Pleasure Is When He's "On His Knee's" Got Found Suckin Another Mans Dick And His BoyFriend Said Juss "Be Honest Please"//
Look Kid It Would Of Been Easier On You If You "Ducked" Against Me In A Battle Yo Punk Ass Is "Fucked", Those Wack Lines You Got Put You Out Of "Luck" Only Way You Could Hit Harder Than Me Is If You Hit Me With A "Truck"//
Fuck It Bitch This One Sided Battle Is "Done" There Was Absolutly No Chance That You Would Have "Won", This Battle Was Heated Dont Try To Say It Was Juss For "Fun" Voters Check This Shit Cuz This Battle Has Juss been "Spun"//

Aight
UPPIN(#1)
IceBerg You talk to much shit
13th and Feeble Would Fuck yo ass up easly
Kinda like i did