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10-09-03, 08:54 PM
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[Wk2] Edicius vs Deacon
IP: A9A7 727D
Verses Due: Thursday October 15th Voting Ends: Sunday October 18th Topic: Obedient Mind
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10-10-03, 08:44 PM
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I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
im cha cha checkin in folks.......should be in by thursday but thats when i get back from vacation....if not in thursday forsure friday...
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10-10-03, 08:46 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
In^^
Gluck....
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10-10-03, 09:33 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
im goin 15 prolly
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10-17-03, 02:33 PM
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I Am The Light
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IP: B2C9 B2B1
Alright i just finished a great piece and it was screwed over by an error sign......wow that pisses me off....i didnt save it so im starting over..be done in 15 mins hopefully...
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10-17-03, 02:40 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Thats fucked up ^^ lol
I post 2nite, .. Im off now...
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10-17-03, 05:37 PM
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I Am The Light
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IP: 27B1 49F3
A mirror image of obedience
In the mydst of it all i profess.. paint me with your image, sinlessness animate and recreate my iniquity ways Catapult my innocence to a brighter day Measure my faith in a matter of T.I.M.E a Tiny Interlude Mydst Eternity to shine a consequence which led me to believe my pain preceded me easily, like the salt in sea my body a chapel to council my brothers your word conserves me to reach out to others embody me to acknowledge all truth You are the way, the name, my root use me dearly and as for you the same let death be my last enemy, amen
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next? sacred scriptures record (5-0) Last edited by deacon : 10-18-03 at 04:41 PM. |
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10-17-03, 05:54 PM
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I Am The Light
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IP: 27B1 49F3
blah ahhh got rid of it finally....
haha
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next? sacred scriptures record (5-0) Last edited by deacon : 10-17-03 at 09:21 PM. |
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10-17-03, 06:14 PM
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I Am The Light
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IP: 27B1 49F3
dont even ask me....my comp is being an idiot and it posted it twice....alright delete one of them
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10-17-03, 08:47 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
:.Obedient Minds.:
A confused industrial complex,....tryin to maintain a unprecedented hype, tryin to fit in,fail's so they try harder hidin behind alter ego's of any type. bein obedient,tryin to protect, them selves from a painfull furter hummiliation, Cuz in side their head its just a dubious unaccountable destroyed organisation. :.Maybe its becuz.: Consequently incorporations of... releasin... pain, Resultin in a struggle,flowdin,in every single vain. And its providin,crucial fuel for a symbiotic relation, or are obedient minds just a victem of their own misinterpretation?. Hidin behind, statements, of others,why so afraid to express themselves?, bein obedient,to reactions intstead of lookin inside listenin to their selves. Cant stand the thing called constructive critism, indulgin,.... curious obidient minds their cynism. Seems they are unable to orchastrate,.... plans to avoid the unwanted, gettin exceptionally tense waitin impatiently on a place were wanted. :.I Guess.: That its always gonna stay the way is, ..same as peeps die'in daily from slugs, Like imaginin a future,where the most valuable currency is not cash,gold,drugs.
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10-17-03, 09:16 PM
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IP: 9FD6 DFF7
I just wanted to say nice verses to both...
I would vote but I really dont understand topicals well enough to do so... Sorry... Props to both writers though Good reads from both |
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10-17-03, 09:25 PM
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I Am The Light
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IP: B2C9 B2B1
Thanks alot man...lets get the votes going.....
start your engines. -1-
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10-18-03, 01:40 AM
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-Real Time-
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IP: FDD6 AE15
Short And Simple, To The Point..
Edicus Tried Too Hard.. To Force Rhymes And Make It Seem More Complex Than It Needed To BE But What He Lacked In Experience Deacon Lacked In Length. Deacon Had An Alright Verse, But Was Not As Good As Suicide's... Vote: Suicide Edicus |
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10-18-03, 10:45 AM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Thnx ....Its not forcin tho, ...but thnx for the feedback ,..now i know the aspects i can work on...cuz its nor forced, writin, ..but it looks like that, ..but ill try to work on , ..it so people, ..dont think its forced...^^preciated...
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10-18-03, 11:17 AM
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IP: 8CA6 9951
Edicious's verse did seem more deep
Deacon yours was original and cool I think edicious did take this one I generally preferred reading his verse Also it flowed and raised better aspects of the topic.. Pz Vote-Suicide Edicious ^^ I just love jackin peoples steeze.. lol |
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