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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-05-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-07-03

Good Luck & Drop Whole Assed....

checkin in, 12?

yeah

Three left the league by my hands...now watch me spurn this kid
Always drops half assed... when he's got a third to give
It sounds absurd to gim... that a do or die vet
Was referred to murder him...
Wants fame and respect... and I've never even heard of him
This weeks only certain win, the fussy vets see your shits dull
Made me the underdog... you seen a pussy pin a pitbull?
Leave dents imbedded in your thick skull... you got a nerve to show your lyrics
This should be do or die... coz the league needs no gimics
Your fatigues reached its limits... you've got no zest for impressing
being raped at christmas by your dad... must have left an impression (avy)

...Yeah Yeah.....

You Suck.

I Didn't Wanna Have To Easily Rip You Like Tissues...But You Know I'm Tempted//
And Your Verse.....Just Make Like Smart Kid's Exams And Exempt It//
Now Feel The Rest, This Kid Must Be Obsessed With Doin Or Dyin//
Only Time Your Thoughts Glisten Is When I Go Upside Ya Mind With Diamonds//
Ha Ha..
It's Time For Primin, Cuz Your Verse Is Lookin Pre-Coated//
And When I Said Scarf Down Some Knowledge, I Didn't Mean Deep Throat It//
You Cheap Broke Bitch.....Take This Win.....You Can Have It All//
Scratch That...This Kid Sucks So Much He Could Suck A Basketball Through A Straw//
Lightin' This Kid's Chest Up....Rest Up..You Know I Made You Caught//
Do I Have To Send Locomotives Through Your Brain So You Won't Lose Your Train Of Thought//

FiNiShEr:.............Dun Dun Dun................
When I Pull My Techs You Scream, I'll Get That Beam Locked On//
To Put Red Circles On Your Forhead So You'll Really Be Dot COM//

It Won't Let Me Edit So....

"Suck A Basketball" Should Be *Slurp A Basketball*

"Made You Caught" Should Be *Made You Cough*.....

So.....Can A Mod Edit That For Me???

Thanx.

gimic aka exodus.. you were aite. you need to come way more original though. when people used to say this to me..id be like..what the fuck? ive never seen that b4.. but.. half ya lines were played.

com came good... i really dont have time to explain...big hurry..good verse... not played... he gets the win.

This battle was shit
not the shit, just shit
Gimic had a fuckin horrible verse
and Com looked like he wasnt tryin

Only decenth quotable I found was from com
Leave dents imbedded in your thick skull... you got a nerve to show your lyrics
This should be do or die... coz the league needs no gimics

Gimic gets my vote for leagues biggest herb with 'dun dun dun', 'haha' and the '//''s

Weak battle, but Com takes it with flo, structure and punches

Vote - Com

^ Fuck You....I Am So Tired Of Peeps Criticizin.......Your In Diamond Minds.....That Says It All.....

if you dont want criticism what the FUCK you doing in the league?

AND BY THE WAY NICE TO CHANGE YOUR AVATAR WHEN ITS MENTIONED IN ONE OF MY LINES. you should be DQ'ed just for that

^^^ yea dawg, you really can't change your shit after someone disses it. But actually you came aight Exodus just need a little bit more fresh concepts n u coulda took this and work on your flow. I got Com takin this cuz he had just a better overall verse.

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

Word......And COM....Dude, I'll Change Whatever The Fuck I Want......Attention Everyone....So U Get The Punch....My Avvy Used To Be An Evil Santa With A Joint In His Mouth........

Happy Now??

And Dude....Just Because Of A League...I'm Not Gonna Keep My Same Avvy If I Don't Want It.....And I Didn't Change It Because Of Your "Personal"....I Didn't Even Really Read Your Verse.

Pz.

This was an aight battle ... But Imma have to go against the grain ... Some of COM's punches I've seen before used against Gim on other sites ... So to me his shit was played ... I admit ... Gim do need to come a lil' more original ... But this is the line that took the battle in my eyes ...

When I Pull My Techs You Scream, I'll Get That Beam Locked On//
To Put Red Circles On Your Forhead So You'll Really Be Dot COM//

That shit had me rollin ... I thought that topped COM's best punch which was ...

It sounds absurd to gim... that a do or die vet
Was referred to murder him...
Wants fame and respect... and I've never even heard of him

Close battle tho ... But my vote goes to Gimics

Gim had quite a few played concepts. Could have come much more original with it. COM's verse wasn't that great either, but he definitely had harder hitting punches. Kinda bleh battle...but

Vote ~ COM