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Good Luck & Give A Fuck....

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keyed . no show and im mail bombing you .

face it kid, your a bumb, so bitch that the sites shit to u right?
......but you didn't stop to think...... that your shit to the site !
die crook, a theif - in that case i'll destroy what this guy took
& u can make ya own story.. but u'll still be a bitch in my book
just try rook.. but in the end only my names shouted, fiend
& put on the pressure, but like old trains you run out of steam
about a dream? game is, i cant even tell why this sluts dumb
..... cuz it's too hard to name all the crew u've been cut from...
what, umm.. all u got to say, shits surly
^ sites hopin u make ya career like my last line .. & quit early..

Checcin' in ... I don't no show man ... I'll drop a verse soon ... Maybe 2morrow if not 2nite ... Peace

First off ... I ain't been cut from no crews ... LoL ... 2ndly ... Learn how to spell bum ... And wit that said ... Let the show go on ...

Now Imma start off by keepin' this text personal ... Aight ?
UR not nice ... Ur not dope ... And no ... Ur asshole ain't tight
Spit ur game right ... Before you think 'bout tryna test the kid
Looks like U typed the 1st line of ur post & shitted out the rest of it
Confess 2 it, U've tried eatin' from the knowledge tree But still ain't learnin'
"Life's A Bowl Of Cherries" So why's this nigga still comin' like a virgin?
This kid thinks he's really ill ... Don't tell him the truth let him keep lookin' like an idiot
I bet all the voters will feel ur verse tho ... When Evolve closes this thread 2 get rid of it
& I've got backing, dude. . My crew stays bombin ya commanders
While Phoeb's still runs with Friends like Monica & Chandler

Vote Mentill

Was Feeling Mentill's Verse This Week ... His Drop Was Wittier
Than Feeb's & That Last Line Had Me Smiling... An Alright Battle,
But Mentill Wins

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Yeah I Agree With Evolve...

Mentill Had Better Wordplay And His Wit Made Me Smile... Especially The Last Line...
Feeble Had The Flow But Punches Didn't Seem To Quite Hit Hard Enough
Mentill Had The Harder Hitting Punches And The More Enjoyable Verse...
Therefore...

Vote-MeNTiLL

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
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The Creation

Feeble's Verse

face it kid, your a bumb, so bitch that the sites shit to u right?
......but you didn't stop to think...... that your shit to the site !

Funny

die crook, a theif - in that case i'll destroy what this guy took
& u can make ya own story.. but u'll still be a bitch in my book

Nice

just try rook.. but in the end only my names shouted, fiend
& put on the pressure, but like old trains you run out of steam

Blah

about a dream? game is, i cant even tell why this sluts dumb
..... cuz it's too hard to name all the crew u've been cut from...

Decent

what, umm.. all u got to say, shits surly
^ sites hopin u make ya career like my last line .. & quit early..

LoL, nice

Mentill's Verse

Now Imma start off by keepin' this text personal ... Aight ?
UR not nice ... Ur not dope ... And no ... Ur asshole ain't tight

Okay...wasn't feelin it though. Yes, I got the whole play on his custom text(Just so you don't think I didn't get the punch)

Spit ur game right ... Before you think 'bout tryna test the kid
Looks like U typed the 1st line of ur post & shitted out the rest of it

Been Done

Confess 2 it, U've tried eatin' from the knowledge tree But still ain't learnin'
"Life's A Bowl Of Cherries" So why's this nigga still comin' like a virgin?

Eh..

This kid thinks he's really ill ... Don't tell him the truth let him keep lookin' like an idiot
I bet all the voters will feel ur verse tho ... When Evolve closes this thread 2 get rid of it

Better

& I've got backing, dude. . My crew stays bombin ya commanders
While Phoeb's still runs with Friends like Monica & Chandler

LoL, nice

OVERALL: I have to disagree with Evolve and Token here. I think Feeble took this by quite a bit. Only the last 4 lines of Mentill's verse had anything hard hitting, IMO. The rest was common and blah. Feeble was much more consistent with his verse. Mentill's Closer was definitely the hardest punch thrown in the battle if you ask me. However, I feel Feeble brought a lot more punches to the table and he had a few hard hitting one's in there hisself. Decent battle...

Vote ~ Feeble Minded

mentill..bumb is spelled bumb.. you corrected my spelling of bumb when you're the one who cant spell it... u fucking retard.

Nah ... if it's the word Im thinkin' of ... Bum as in a broke bum ... then it's bum ... Not bumb ... BUt anyway ... Fucc it ... Does it matter ... And if I don't get time to sign into the tag tourney ... Put Me and Jay Pana up in that shit ... Unless it's already full ... Peace

vote Mentill


Feeble did come weak...which is kinda suprising...seeing how he
been coming good lately...but Mentill had the wordplay and
punches....

but...


i will say this..



Mentill:

I bet all the voters will feel ur verse tho ... When Evolve closes this thread 2 get rid of it


u recycled this shit from RhymeVantage against Truly Bless'd in
the league.

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Vote Mentill

I saw that recycling too...

Dont do that...

Makes me wonder if more was recycled...
Still... Mentill takes it with better punches...

meh - i was pissed cuz chrit told me id def be put in middle weight shot and i wasnt..

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