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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-12-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-14-03

Good Luck & Give A Fuck....

checking in and i intend to give a fuck

Yea... In For The Win...

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This triple LLL aprentice is my nemesis...I'll relish it
You're married to the game... but Too Short to measure it
No sedative in sight... but the elite are all asleep
Your loss to me is like Simpsons... another damn repeat
You're slammed off your feet... can't stand up for yourself
Change ya name all you want... ya still stuck with yaself
Tu-cent is dense... packing fudge like a shop cart
Only four percent of Fifty... and thats the scarred shot part
If you were close to a window... best believe I'd push you through
Coz this fukka tried to make himself the leader of my crew
For leader I was selected... you defected here's the best bit
I looked at the roster... this fools leader... none elected
I suspected you were contrived when I arrived at DM
My punches hit so hard... they don't see Tu... they see ten
So don't frown just smile...keep your pride and have some fun
Coz like its the 11th
I think its fun to run down... Aisle 5 with a gun

Line 2 (married to the game is a Too Short album)
Line 6 (his old name is Tu Cents)

Ridin feebles dick... damn he cant help you... futures lookin gray
Then com enter the battle.. and tripped over the fuckin doorway!
Have this emcee crippled... ill make com give use to this walker...
Yea its true com took me to school... then i shoved him in the lockers!
Who told you theres a win in site... please proceed to clean ur lens
I knew you was weak.. but i didnt kno u was lame enough to diss my name Tu Centz!
Get pointers com.. 40 battles... dont u get it? im better than you
Then i left DM, so did alpha, lethargic.. and the whole heart of the crew!
Keep your hands to yourself.. face it i got this victory on lock bitch
Fuckin Gothic... just look at what ya wearin... the bitch shops at Hot Topic
I'm deliverin painful hits.. tell the cops cuz this shits simply not legal
Evolve told com to work his ass off.. but it already belongs to feeble!
The real leaders here.. now just recognize your place and bow down
And you thought i was scary.. wait till my fuckin stomach growls!
Disown my son... now no longer do i even bother to give a fuck
Call me a positive influence...
Aim my gun up against Coms neck... and tell him to keep his chin up!
Your audios are wack shit... but Com is bound to repeat it
I even downloaded ya MP3.. just to delete it!
Study my lines.. whatever you gotta do to get better.. even read books
And then when I glanced over at Coms verse... it gave me dirty looks!

20... i was bored... vote up.

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aisle 5 took this imo
better punches which were set up nicely..dope opener
com u had a few nice lines but nothing spectacular
the last line was dope..best from you
but aisle 5 hit more consistently
good battle though

1-0 Me... Uppin This.

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Com came pretty nice... as usual, but
Damn, I was impressed with Aisle 5 here
some really dope punches from him

Disown my son... now no longer do i even bother to give a fuck
Call me a positive influence...
Aim my gun up against Coms neck... and tell him to keep his chin up!

Have this emcee crippled... ill make com give use to this walker...
Yea its true com took me to school... then i shoved him in the lockers!

^those and others had me rollin and even though Ailse didn't match
he came consistent through out his whole verse

Vote - Aisle 5

Vote Aisle 5

I Thought His Verse Was Pretty Tight.. Everything Was On Point
Except For A Couple Of Stretched Lines... But Other Than That He
Had Me Chuckling...

COM

This triple LLL aprentice is my nemesis...I'll relish it
You're married to the game... but Too Short to measure it
^^^nice opener^^^

No sedative in sight... but the elite are all asleep
Your loss to me is like Simpsons... another damn repeat
^^^lol, nice punch^^^

You're slammed off your feet... can't stand up for yourself
Change ya name all you want... ya still stuck with yaself
^^^oooooooooohhhhhh nice^^^

Tu-cent is dense... packing fudge like a shop cart
Only four percent of Fifty... and thats the scarred shot part
^^^another nice one^^^

If you were close to a window... best believe I'd push you through
Coz this fukka tried to make himself the leader of my crew
^^^not too good^^^

For leader I was selected... you defected here's the best bit
I looked at the roster... this fools leader... none elected
^^^nice multies^^^

I suspected you were contrived when I arrived at DM
My punches hit so hard... they don't see Tu... they see ten
^^^nice wordplay^^^

So don't frown just smile...keep your pride and have some fun
Coz like its the 11th
I think its fun to run down... Aisle 5 with a gun
^^^aiight^^^

Disown my son... now no longer do i even bother to give a fuck
Call me a positive influence...
Aim my gun up against Coms neck... and tell him to keep his chin up!
^^^aiight^^^

Your audios are wack shit... but Com is bound to repeat it
I even downloaded ya MP3.. just to delete it!
^^^nice^^^



ASILE

Ridin feebles dick... damn he cant help you... futures lookin gray
Then com enter the battle.. and tripped over the fuckin doorway!
^^^not bad^^^

Have this emcee crippled... ill make com give use to this walker...
Yea its true com took me to school... then i shoved him in the lockers!
^^^lol, aiight^^^

Who told you theres a win in site... please proceed to clean ur lens
I knew you was weak.. but i didnt kno u was lame enough to diss my name Tu Centz!
^^^nice^^^

Get pointers com.. 40 battles... dont u get it? im better than you
Then i left DM, so did alpha, lethargic.. and the whole heart of the crew!
^^^lol, nice^^^

Keep your hands to yourself.. face it i got this victory on lock bitch
Fuckin Gothic... just look at what ya wearin... the bitch shops at Hot Topic
^^^lol^^^

I'm deliverin painful hits.. tell the cops cuz this shits simply not legal
Evolve told com to work his ass off.. but it already belongs to feeble!
^^^wow, nice^^^

The real leaders here.. now just recognize your place and bow down
And you thought i was scary.. wait till my fuckin stomach growls!
^^^aiight^^^


Study my lines.. whatever you gotta do to get better.. even read books
And then when I glanced over at Coms verse... it gave me dirty looks!
^^^aiight^^^

opener:Com
closer:Asile 5
wordplay:Tie
structure:Com
punches:Asile 5
overall:Asile 5

com strated off hot and then got weaker, an asile 5 started off weak and then got hotter.

nice battle,
no hate y'all
peace

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Vote Aisle 5

Better verse, Com came nice...nice elevating kid......but Aisle was still better

Best line:

I'm deliverin painful hits.. tell the cops cuz this shits simply not legal
Evolve told com to work his ass off.. but it already belongs to feeble!

COM actually came pretty nice. After reading his verse, I was curious as to what Aisle 5 would have to come back with. Then I read Aisle 5's verse and was definitely impressed. I went back to read COM's verse again just to refresh my memory on his high points, but still reached the same conclusion. Aisle 5 was just a lot wittier in this battle. His punches were much more original/creative and were definitely hitting harder. Structure was about the same for both and flow was on point. Both of you came really nice, but Aisle definitely took it with his punches. Good read...

Vote ~ Aisle 5

oh well... props to aisle 5,, i thought this would have been my second win over you but you proved me wrong....

5-0 Me.. Good Battle COM. Props To You As Well..

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