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Your topic: How I died

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checkinn

How many lines?

16>?

16? sure.. when do you want to post by Mic? tonight?

fate never showed me favoritism beforehand but happyness still dangled
But now dasterdly masachists with manacle mechanisms damage and mangle
up, down, obtuse & right angles, it seems every direction heeds new labels
i lack the legs to walk to success, thats why its so difficult to turn the tables
tales of peace are fables, even in cease-fire times these snakes'll flank you
took ages to realize, but now i see the world is 2-faced, through & through
even when you win you lose, to the victors go the spoils..yeah, thats true
i wasnt told that the sweet taste of victory cake, is now merely spoiled food
so out falls the sweet tooth.. im left with nothing but bitterness to chew on
seems im trying to see my dreams through a blind eye..with an eyepatch on
two rights make a wrong, this is an assholes world..nice guys finish last
nothing but problems on top of problems, new and old conflicts overlap
at my shortcomings i try to laugh, but the sound never seems to escape
so im left holding it all inside.. jaw open..dumbfounded look upon my face


i once loved humans, but this is no longer the case...

and you wonder, will the Son ever rise?..

no..im turning my back on you all, this is your fate...


for this is the suicide note of Jesus.. you all wrote it with your own actions..

killing me more and more inside...


the title of this abomination?


How I Died

match w/e i posted..

i dont wanna count those lines ill do 22 i think u did that many



checkin

verse due this friday..em i rite???

so igot three dayz stil...
if not let me no ill do it now..if not then ill wait for the pressure

you said that you wrre done on AIM and that you were gopnna post when you were unbanned...

you told me youd post later on the same night that i did hoe...wheres your verse?

7:23 am.

wake up to the sounds of bullets shatterin my window..
whos shootin at me this time as i grab my mac from under my pillow..
an fire back at these nugs hopin my wife dont turn out a widow..
im quick to release my clip,wuteva it take to stress my fact..
that its to eaRLY for me to go so i grab titly to my strap..
let no man contest me or even try to attempt me..
ill thro on the vest an leave him dead in envy..
since elementry theres been bullys an nerds..
but now rb has its own class full of herbs..
so how can one of these kids kill me.better prepare to die.
cuz i aint gunna leave u out my site an let my nine put up the fite..
u no wuts comin to u .it really is that time.
for u to leave an me to rise.but i fuked up The cops sentence me
to life in hte pen cuz i had no choice but to kill my enimies..
so i say to that thug state of mind to let go..
cuz all it brought to me was death row..
a quick glimpse of cash an hoes cuz of my spits..
but fuk, i didnt no i wud end of paying for it.
i have things to accomplish lifes too far..
away from me cuz im starin at steel bars..
droppin raw takin out jaws, in suspensity soon to be dead..
now i got a million bolts of electicity in my head..
the only way for me to succeed an rise to the fullest.
is if i dont die in the mits of drive bys an loose bullets





Blah..i have no time....an you are compalining..wuteva...i didnt edit..or nathen..jsut think of it how u want

strong battle..........

I think Dezyr won this, but not by much.....Dezzy'z wordplay was sick and diffeerent angle was taken, explainin the situation first and then Explainin how he's demise came about.........

Narc.......came strong but it was all wham bam bam...action, action action....didn't explain surroundings in that much depth etc


VOTE: DEZ

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

good battle from both spitters, two diffrent styles two diffrent ways to put out the topic

dez- wordplay - dope
narc- structure - dope

but i felt dez's more

vote - Dezyir

waiting for more battles to get done...


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