ite man this is it

8-10 lines
no hate
no crew
no dickride
no unexplained
no nonsense
no feeding
no freeposting

ill spit 1st and you drop 10 minuits after me.

Voting rules as follow:

Either breakdown of each bar format

OR

opener-
closer-
punches-
personals-
wordplay-
creativity-
originality-
vocab-
overall-


gd luck pz.

ite check in................................................ .................................................. ..................pz

ite check it,

Herbal man im like a bully, cause ill pick at you, ill start with your name,
nearlly as bad as ROOKIE, take the last two letters of and it describes your game,
i steel battles like your virginity, but unlike you im not a raper,
your raps got no lines, so i guess your simular to plain paper,
im sorry on your win list, you wont be able to add O_D,
so suprised you lost, when you open the thread to read 5-0 to me,
(h)es (e)asily (r)ejected (b)y (a)ll (l)adies, its driveing him crazy,
knowing he will never have babies, dont get effended when i tell you theres no place for gays in the navy,
ill admit it your godd but i love beating you with no real doubts,
cause maths in school tomarrows the only way this bitch is getting counts.

......................pz

ite man drop in 10 mins.n its mena say good not godd.............................................. .................................................. ............pz

ure first line said to take the last two letters of it and describes my game AL???




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ill start keying in a lil bit peace

take them of = herb...........................................cmo n man drop.............................................. ....pz

Im Known for copious accounts of odious attacks
Lady D. has more testosterone then you do in your sack
You're wack its a fact you hated me even made a thread
You a "still born" battler shit even ya sig says you dead
I'll Unite all the mods in saying this "King is dumb"
a loser you're more lonely than christmass to bums
only way ure spit come hard is if you crash landed drooling
i guess im O_D's teacher cuz i just delivered a schooling
This dude is a rhyming "mutt"...clearly im the pedigree
You keyed a verse to me,...but i just scripted your elegy

uppin for votes #1





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yo nice battle.............

opener-herbal
closer-herbal
punches-herbal
personal-oli
wordplay-tie
multi's-oli
complexity-herbal
enjoyment-herbal
overall-HERBAL


both had aight verses...some lines kinda fell off for both but herbal has nice nice nice closer.....very nice.....sicc...no hate

U TLKING BOUT LAZY B?LOL.FUCK IT UPPIN(1).......................................... .................................................. ................PZ

competitive battle

flow=herbal
creativity=herbal
structure=tie
wordplay=herbal.............od u had some ok wordplay as well
punches=herbal
personals=herbal

my vote=herbal...........this was not as bad as it seems....herbal just took this

herbal had some nice punches an' flow was pretty good... but i didn't like how he copied the ummm... i forget what it's called with ethe (B)ig(i)diot(g)irl... ya know... that shit, i didn't like how he used that too, and oli-also had some cool punches... so my vote 4 oli.. 1

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^wtf b i g?oh wel thx man yo herb man get ur pll 2 poll.^.............thx............................ ....................pz

multies=oli
mettas=tie
punches=oli(more personals)
overall= oli took dis one
peace
explicit aka EcLipZ

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