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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-19-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-21-03

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Loser Is Out For Good.....


Good Luck & Give A Fuck Or I Will Fuck You Up!!!!!!!!

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Lets do 10 lines.
Pm me back.

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I Stone Fags & Merk Herbs..& I Do Be Smokin' Crack Pipes..
Not Another N00b Verse.? I'm Dope..Hes The Token Whack Guy!!
He Got No Chance To Win..1st Token Then Enhance..Who Write Ya Rhymes.?
Fag^ Could Chill With Horny Cainines And Still Not Have Dawgs By His Side!!!
Kid Cant Defeat Me..Puns Be Weak..Ya Hurtin Soft Im Wreckin Fables..
Got Proof He's Queer..His Avy Looks Like Hes Jerkin' Cock And Gettin' Anal!!
Drop 5 Puns On You..Ahh x2..So I Burn Then Leave You Fry-Ten'd-Fool..
Kid Got Merked Last Week..By A Bulb!!I Know I Don't Need To N LitEn You!?!
Slap This Kid..Witness The Merking In Reverse..Cunt You Suck..
Fag..Comes Half Assed Then Lays Down..So 'Volve Can Fuck Him Up!!
Fuckin Wit' phiX..It's Like Throwing Pussies To Lions..Bitch's Maimed..
Match-Up Left Enhance..I Mean Token..Uh? Tryna Dodge Battlin' By Switchin' Names!!

Sorry About Pm's N Shit Got Fucked Up...
But I Had Time To Key Up Shit..
Peace & Goodluck...
Match Me..

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Uppin For The Kids Verse,.....
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In for the win.

You should've taken your own advice when you said Run Nucca Run
PhiXion couldn't spit hard punches with rocks attatched to his tongue
Your lines have no flow.. like guys with urinary infections
Get the boxing network for a chance to have punching connections
The vision of phixions stay is getting smaller, like dialated lenses
If your visualizing a win, then your missing your pupil senses
We told you to get courageous.. and you jumped off a bridge
Your verse was the cause.. for that smiley in my sig
It's do or die.. So take The Ends advice and go post at the best site
Whos taking you serious when your idea of whats hot is made by little tikes
You must not be seeing the right W.. like people on blind dates
And as a token of my appreciation
...I made you a new avy...
But for some reason it stopped at elevate

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Can We Get Some Votes.

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VOTE

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<----was forbidden to vote on this battle by token, lol

and phix has already used 3 of his 2 uppings, lmao

^Lol, I know you'll vote fair reguardless of beef so go ahead... Please break it down though.

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Stone Fags & Merk Herbs..& I Do Be Smokin' Crack Pipes..
Not Another N00b Verse.? I'm Dope..Hes The Token Whack Guy!!
^^quite a nice punch with wordplay

He Got No Chance To Win..1st Token Then Enhance..Who Write Ya Rhymes.?
Fag^ Could Chill With Horny Cainines And Still Not Have Dawgs By His Side!!!
^^ok wordplay

Kid Cant Defeat Me..Puns Be Weak..Ya Hurtin Soft Im Wreckin Fables..
Got Proof He's Queer..His Avy Looks Like Hes Jerkin' Cock And Gettin' Anal!!
^^blah.....

Drop 5 Puns On You..Ahh x2..So I Burn Then Leave You Fry-Ten'd-Fool..
Kid Got Merked Last Week..By A Bulb!!I Know I Don't Need To N LitEn You!?!
^ok setup but weak punch

Slap This Kid..Witness The Merking In Reverse..Cunt You Suck..
Fag..Comes Half Assed Then Lays Down..So 'Volve Can Fuck Him Up!!
^better punch

Fuckin Wit' phiX..It's Like Throwing Pussies To Lions..Bitch's Maimed..
Match-Up Left Enhance..I Mean Token..Uh? Tryna Dodge Battlin' By Switchin' Names!!
^average finisher

6/10


You should've taken your own advice when you said Run Nucca Run
PhiXion couldn't spit hard punches with rocks attatched to his tongue
^nice opener

Your lines have no flow.. like guys with urinary infections
Get the boxing network for a chance to have punching connections
^ very average punch

The vision of phixions stay is getting smaller, like dialated lenses
If your visualizing a win, then your missing your pupil senses
...nice vocab but weak punch

We told you to get courageous.. and you jumped off a bridge
Your verse was the cause.. for that smiley in my sig
^average punch

It's do or die.. So take The Ends advice and go post at the best site
Whos taking you serious when your idea of whats hot is made by little tikes
^very weak bar

You must not be seeing the right W.. like people on blind dates
And as a token of my appreciation
...I made you a new avy...
But for some reason it stopped at elevate
^blah ok finisher

5/10


phixion takes it by a hair, but both verses were weaker than what i expect from both of you,, token expecially, i seen some dope shit from him before but he fell a bit short this time,, phixion is good too but dropped a suprisingly average verse

^^i disagree....

this was a close battle....Phix had some good wordplay and Token had some good wordplay...but both of u used played lines that many have seen before.....for punches i have to give to Token he had harder punches and harder personals....Phix had some tight lines....but some of his punches seemed to have forced rhymes.....but that's my opinion....here's a couple of lines of y i think Token got it....

^^that was a hard personal...seeing as u provided a link in ur verse....nice work Tok....

also the avy line was tight too....which is y i think Token got this...he had harder personals and punches...nice read from u both though.....no hate...just a vote...

Vote - Token

peace
4:20

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I Stone Fags & Merk Herbs..& I Do Be Smokin' Crack Pipes..
Not Another N00b Verse.? I'm Dope..Hes The Token Whack Guy!!

^Eh...okay...not a good opener though.

He Got No Chance To Win..1st Token Then Enhance..Who Write Ya Rhymes.?
Fag^ Could Chill With Horny Cainines And Still Not Have Dawgs By His Side!!!

^Anything having to do with Canines and biting/your dogs...anything of that sort...is played to hell and back.

Kid Cant Defeat Me..Puns Be Weak..Ya Hurtin Soft Im Wreckin Fables..
Got Proof He's Queer..His Avy Looks Like Hes Jerkin' Cock And Gettin' Anal!!

^Good flow...Not very hard hitting though.

Drop 5 Puns On You..Ahh x2..So I Burn Then Leave You Fry-Ten'd-Fool..
Kid Got Merked Last Week..By A Bulb!!I Know I Don't Need To N LitEn You!?!

^First line's extremely forced, second was okay.

Slap This Kid..Witness The Merking In Reverse..Cunt You Suck..
Fag..Comes Half Assed Then Lays Down..So 'Volve Can Fuck Him Up!!

^1st line, bleh....2nd line was funny.

Fuckin Wit' phiX..It's Like Throwing Pussies To Lions..Bitch's Maimed..
Match-Up Left Enhance..I Mean Token..Uh? Tryna Dodge Battlin' By Switchin' Names!!

^Bad closer.

You should've taken your own advice when you said Run Nucca Run
PhiXion couldn't spit hard punches with rocks attatched to his tongue

^Weak opener...

Your lines have no flow.. like guys with urinary infections
Get the boxing network for a chance to have punching
connections

^No...played to death.

The vision of phixions stay is getting smaller, like dialated lenses
If your visualizing a win, then your missing your pupil senses

^Weak...

We told you to get courageous.. and you jumped off a bridge
Your verse was the cause.. for that smiley in my sig

^Okay..a little bleh though.

It's do or die.. So take The Ends advice and go post at the best site
Whos taking you serious when your idea of whats hot is made by little tikes

^*sigh*

You must not be seeing the right W.. like people on blind dates
And as a token of my appreciation
...I made you a new avy...
But for some reason it stopped at elevate

^No, forced closer. You had to create a whole new avy...just to make that punch work. That's weak. That's like Hi My Name Is... sending me two bars through PM's 1 minute before he posted his verse just to make a punch in his verse valid.

Overall: I'm very disappointed. I KNOW Token can come a lot better than this. That alone pisses me off cuz that makes it seem like you didn't try at all. I don't know much about Phixion...but there wasn't anything too impressive about his verse. Blah battle

Vote - Phixion for less retarded punches.

No Beef, just facts. Get serious about this shit. I know it's just online, but stupid verses like those take all the fun out of it.

Vote - Neither in LLL.