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Old 11-18-03, 09:35 AM   #1
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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-19-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-21-03

Mentill... You Need To Step In Up Man.. Make This Good!!


Good Luck & Give A Fuck Or I Will Fuck You Up!!!!!!!!
 
Old 11-18-03, 11:22 AM   #2
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in 12?
 
Old 11-18-03, 05:51 PM   #3
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Yea ... I'll go 10 or 12 ... In ... Peace
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Old 11-20-03, 01:27 PM   #4
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A.I. scared to crew battle, got a Bonafide score to settle
Evolve told you to step it up... but there's no door on my level
Bring more honour for the medal... you're a goner
Can't move me...
I catch and torture A.I. ... like they did in the movie
Your shabby short score's are like the side of a mullet
Your avy sports claws... but when you try, you can't cut it
Observe the tall flow's, I ain't used to small foes
I'm gonna call you a pimp... coz ya crew's all hoes
Think you're Mentill? beat me?...
Yeah I guess you are insane...
I land... more blows than porn filmed on a plane
I take your verse and straight jack it... all the darts you throw are blunt
A.I. might be back...
but Bonafide's at the front



blah... I went over... match me
 
Old 11-20-03, 07:58 PM   #5
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Blah ... I'll key this up real quick ... Im goin' 10 ...

COM's hot, seriously flamin' ... Damn my enemy's sweet
Take Bonafide 4 more than a game?
How? Wasn't he in NBA Streets?
Got the .'s and all ... Dawg U ain't got the right to copy
This cat got everything ass backwards, Why he tryin' to MOC me?
Ur style's choppy, He only blows when he's ridin' shotgun
"Life's a bitch" That's the reason this faggot ain't got one
There was only one problem wit ur verse ... Nuthin' was catchy
And he knew his shit wasn't fire ... Look
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Originally posted by COM
blah... I went over... match me

And Im takin' this battle easily, No need to saddle my shlong
Cuz tha only place this cat is noticed is in rapbattles.com

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Old 11-20-03, 08:00 PM   #6
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Blah ... I ain't gonna edit my verse so it won't cause no suspicious shit ... But on the 8th line ... It's 'posed to say "wasn't fire" ... Peace

I Edited It... So Nothing Is Fishy

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Old 11-21-03, 10:19 PM   #7
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mentill

this whole battle says mentill all over it

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Ur style's choppy, He only blows when he's ridin' shotgun
"Life's a bitch" That's the reason this faggot ain't got one

that was hott

he came with wittier lyrics basically.

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Old 11-21-03, 10:26 PM   #8
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^ Agreed...
Mentill just plain outwitted COM and connected his wit with punches.

Harder landing punches wittier verse.

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Com i know you can come better that that. Coms was some what weak.
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Old 11-21-03, 11:49 PM   #9
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Blah...

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Better verse overall.....

Com needs to step up a bit
 
Old 11-22-03, 12:36 AM   #10
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That's one of the better verses I've seen mentill drop. Surprised me. He definitely took this battle though. Good verse to both...not a bad read...but

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Old 11-22-03, 03:32 AM   #11
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follow the fucking leader once again,,, no quotes, no reasons, just 'wow i need to vote on 5 battles i'll copy what the above said' this league is turning into frontlines
 
Old 11-22-03, 08:54 PM   #12
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I'm gettin real sic of sein people bitchin... LOOK THIS IS THE LEAGUE... most people in the league KNOW how to vote. Most are vets. So if one person thinks you loss for one reason chances are THATS WHY. THUS, it seems like follow the leader but its because you really did lose for that reason. And if thats the truth then why should people go to lengths to define why you loss when you obviously see why. This is the one place where the votes are real. If you loss because of a REAL reason everybody will notice and more than likely it's A REAL REASON. Not like Front Lines where you can battle herbs n shit ur way into wins over your buddies with AIM.
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Old 11-22-03, 08:56 PM   #13
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Com. your punches werent saying much they were weak.
Mentill was just better,,..


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Old 11-23-03, 06:56 AM   #14
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Hmmm...COM You Had Few Ok Lines, Nothin Really Stood Out..

Mentill Had Nice Punches, And Wittier Punches...Good Flow Aswell...His Verse Just Topped Yours In Every Aspect..

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That ass-backwards punchline is what caught my eye.

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