u know the deal you drop first alright goodluck

ok..i'll check in....this should be a joke tho...this nigga is stupid ass~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ill keep the blood rushin to ya head, wit violent concushions\
uprupting dreams that are obscene after you spit at me\
you cant see me lyrically , let alone physically\
and spiritaully who ever you worship cant even defeat me\
yo lemme get this dick straight, and pound this cake\
commin at me , its lyrical death , enjoy ya fate\
sayin you fired up , shit lemme douse that fire\
cripple ya style and then make you retire\
the way im spittin make these niggas sick\
got them snappin at me , plus they on my dick\
cant feel me, cuz they pussies to big\
heres a shovel , theirs a lot , and a grave to dig\
my metaphores are off the hook , and are considered vicoius\
so stop pissen shit without lyricall precision\
cause listen ill leave your body stained in red crimson\
physically im beyond your intellect\
my shit hits direct wit styles that are in-ept\
what kinda name is maximus lemme explain\
its represents the geniods in your brain that makes you insane\
stands for termanology beyond your game\
maximus stand for the EPITIMY of putting you to shame\
so pay the piper peter and pack ya shit and leave\
and watch a true lyricist make these cats greive\

this nigga's got two aliases, and he called himself out
someone check bitch slapped and see what I'm talkn about
a stupid ass nigga who's gonna post a pre-written
and if that weren't bad enough, this mother fucker's rhyme is still bitten
at least try to beat me, please give me a real battle
cause i'm beating you, like I got you girl in the saddle
ha ha faggot, watching me fuck her gives you a "hard on"
i'm fuckn playn your girl like a million dollar Don Juan
fuck you and your rhyme, this decision isn't a "hard-one"
the hard part will be getting this viewed by some-one
I don't need 15 fuckn lines to tear you to lyrical pieces
it's a waste of time and rhyme, "you suck" is my thesis

ok......uppin (1)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~

hard one i thought took this battle, it was longer, had better wordplay, and had a bit better rhymes than poetic

um yea so poetic tenenceez (my bad on the spellin) took this... that shit had to be pre-written cause you threw no personals what so ever not to mention you didn't use any of the obvious things to get him on.... oh well.... so the fact he called you on it gives him the win in my opinion plus he had personals...which you should learn about and punches..that made you look like a herb..plus he didn't even use all his lines..vote- not that i can but poetic got this

whoops hit that up with ya thoughts thanx for taking the time later...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2093#post992093

^ best line in the battle
everything was pretty much even on this
punches/ wordplay/ flow/ personals,
but PT made me chuckle with those 2 barz
vote = PT
cant poll my vote cause i dont know how,
but i will 2marrow

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the one that watches the watchmen:

opener poetic
closer poetic
punches poetic
personal poetic
wordplay poetic
vocab poetic
overal poetic

hit this up honestly please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99109

Opener : Poe
Closer : Poe
Wordplay: Poe
Flow : Poe
Punches: Poe
Need i say more? .

ye i agree with everyone else poe grabed every catagory with no doubt about it.

my vote poe

vote on this battle...its bein slept on.......................


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97818

yo ima ahve to go wit poetic on this one for the reason that he had a punch lol.
personals and punches usually win battles and the other guy didnt have any.

return the favor with a vhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=99005ote on this

my bad it fucked up..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99005