WOW,another newb,seeing you in cypher is like no hornet in charelut
calll yaself the pistol but only thing ya bust is ya pops nut
why ya postin all those lines in cypher,no body reads em
i don't think I would if I desperately need to feed of em
Ya suck,the only thing probably good about ur verse,is the coast
Right at the side,where it labels you newb, "THIS IS MY FIRST POST!"

u couldnt prove ur skill with the highest amount of hope,
ur face peels like paint bein washed with soap,
aitz is here and im rippin ur soul,
aitz smells fear and im killin this mole.
u wanna grip a mic like a kids wish list,
i'll find u in the middle of the night, and make u eat a fist bitch


~p'z

__________________

this hoe woulda been hot but its lack of baking
you'll never get a clap cos u SUCK & ur verse is flo breakin
stick ur shit to the 1-1-1 cos u'll never exceed ur RV lim-it
with 9 strokes proovin ur wack u still dont wanna admit-it?
its like u goin thru Immune V conflict dats y u rap like u bit from "GAYZ"
no wonder u couldnt be more creative than to call urself "AITZ"*
the next time u wanna entertain just make it ezier n press "SPACE"
cos with this lyricall state u've gained,son u just ur fams big "DISGRACE"

__________________

you whack,thinking Capitalizing the last words make-you-dope
i want you gone too,so here baby girl,go-head,take-the-rope
and hang urself in the house,so you hanging down like a chandelier
i know this verse defines you completley,as things are to appear
why you hating on the other guy for?,cause ya can't get through his pants?
LAscia stare?Well,problem is,when you there,nobody gives you a glane

Pressence, Light Weight, Hell nah fuck that,
Every one can feel ya presence cuz ya too damn fat,
Lil wack ass rhymes, Got no muthafucking flow,
Million Hyphines in ya lines,...... Lil fucking HO!,
That type a shit don't make you muthafucking dope,
So don't hate Yvonne cuz her style is better,
If she ever put a record out... make more cheddar,
1 minute rhymes, Sucks!, But it's still better,
Than that stupid shit ya wrote

this guys flows shaky.... like he's a bar jerker
the only good thing i know is he's gotta be a hard worker
and thats not racist lets face it he's tasteless
got him sweating like poker playaz wit million dollar raises
he's aces in a game where the ace is the lowest
THATS FUCKED UP! is the only way to explain how his flow is
i hope he notes this and knows to rap while im chucklin
better come on back like dog style fuckin

__________________
THIS RIGHT HERE HAS BEEN CERTIFIED FOR YEARS......BONAFIDE

good thing this is only text,cause you'd put us all to sleep
you know he's a hard worker cause you both under the sheets
your rhmes were whack,seems you dropped it when touchin ya bells
talking about racism and poker bitch?,well lemme pass you some shells
only time i can see you landing with some applause is when ya say bye
and that last bar,hmm,dog style?
.....................................don't tell us about your fantasies with mexican guy!

Natural!...Yeah maybe like a Jheru Curl on Fat Joe.
Killa?...(who you foolin!)......Yeah,Kill'n my ears wit yer wack flow.
Your skill on tha real is still at bit borin....
Even if you had a grill you still couldnt hit hard like George Foreman!

Yep..I can spit a wack line an still merk this clown.
An own U like house's on tha sub-burb'n side of ah town!



Who's really rating this shit anyways?...

Your last statment is right who here is rating your shit
Like Mr Fifty Cent all you do is spend time faking your hits
Claiming the things you have do now youve done me wrong
From Memphis Tennessee Shouldnt you do country songs?
Getting owned by you are you kidding you must be stoned
Thats like saying that Lindsay lohans muscley and toned

__________________

Lockdown?

You must be new ta tha game..against me!..you pale in comparison.
Whatcha tryin ta prove wit that name?...That Jail is embarrasin?
That Bitches get raped with duck tape'd broom sticks...
An Have ur cunt ripped open......Leavin ur womb split?
Or that being in cells could leave you with very nasty scars..
You aint a classy broad..."lockdown"prolly meant"Jail Food"..cuz of ur Trashy bars!

^^^okay...

lol tight cold...

no matter how hot he comes he still bring cold
he wishes to be like the bove cos he just aint bold
i dont really need to paint a picture of ya cos its done
you cant entertain you shootin like an aimless gun
bitches like u eat cheap rap from fools like lil'kim
a pin got ur punch busted d fuck u do with dat unda ur chin?
i forbid waistin words on a wacko i'd better keep my knees nodding
and as i re-read ya shit i just keep sayin "over my dead body"

...ahh fuck

__________________

Keep ur knees noddin?....hah!..."Give Head?"
All I can say is"Please keep Bobbin...Stop!..I've Been mislead!"
Your mouth is filthy...an you got sores on ur lip!
Seen ur pics tho'...I think this board gonna flip!

^^^Hah!....
Im juss trippin right now...But give me a moment!
I murder lil girls,trample over an woman...Leave quick,Make sense.............WONT it!


Hah!

Juss havin a lil Fun Dear!

but you can "Get Own'd!!"

Talk about head this guys a fukin pro
no dick in ya pants? he's stoppin ya at tha do'(door)
this dude love tha dick, but eat pussy he jus might
and im sure he's half settle for a herephadite
from memphis, step in my city get ya as beat fa real
it a give u a chance 2 taste my cold steel

__________________

*corrections*

Talk about head this guys a fukin pro
no dick in ya pants? he's stoppin ya at tha do'(door)
this dude loves tha dick, but eat pussy he jus might
and im sure he's half settle for a hermephadite
from memphis, step in my city get ya as beat fa real
it'll give u a chance 2 taste MY cold steel

__________________