yo im up for TRY OUTS kiddo put me up in there

im ghetto pushing hondas no need for a lexus my records create a bigger buzz then beez in texas/ jus free ya necklace/ im spendin bigger checks find me in every hood like newprt ciggerates /not to figure yet u be a sore lover i got bitches in bikinis like ashantas source cover/ im a raw brother wit a sceamin team when ya only jump off is a trampaline/ hands is clean but i got grams of weed when im smokin wit my boys we got family trees...... ok thats enough holla at me PM me or IM me at LDUABGREP71 if im in ~UNO~

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ok my thoughts first the style is simple and the name is wack your a raper? second the whole paragraph thing i didn't like. thrid you got a wack ass record of 0-1.

i say no but it ain't up to me

as for other catz on here um like drag-on you simple too and your name is taken but the record is ok so i say elevated and you might be in

ill bing aka U.G i personally liked it and i didn't read all the post so u might be in already.

Golden shellz i didn't like it and the guy in you sig is ugly.

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golden shellz: elevate more i wouldnt alow you to come but trigga the masta so welcome...
lil bing : elevate
lyrikal: elevate too you ok though juss come bak
betarap or w/e the fuk you are: structer ya shit and no you fuking suck elevate more

all yall elevate and learn to structure ya lines
stop with the shitty selfglory usernames

lol
juss elevate

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

here im gonna spit this shit is hot plus my name is the lryicial virus brotherpara well her this is a true story well its not a story realy but its all true i am gettin better and better heres my verse i want in this shit!!!

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/
and how about i say it with a (shout)/ (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some hoe's/
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/
ill be one of the best not sayin im am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people who said i couldent do it with a threat/

im gonna be in audio soon so yea

holla back at me peace

check my shit out

^no...and the last 5 people that tryed out NO.....elevate and come back....and when my crew says NO...then go elevate and get some wins...this is not a newbie crew....uppin for more tryoutz

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word we will acpet dope n00bs but you guys...fucking elevate then come back

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

yo i want in this shit

heres my verse

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/.
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/.
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/.
and how about i say it with a (shout)/. (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some pretty nice hoe's/.
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/.
ill be one of the best not sayin, i am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people that said i couldent do it with a threat/

you neeed a lil elevation try joining out side crew

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!