Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will
word
Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"
no
Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500
wooord
Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?
damn...concept stealer..but its dope
You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"
no
Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch
noooooooooo
.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself
dope.....but you tried to hard to have good structure, wtf?
He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode
get deeper for dopeness...this way=whack

You gotta stop trying so hard to have good structure. Try having relevant set-up's. Look at more supa-dupa-vet battles and find out whats played.

After that you will be unstoppable.

And BTW it's funny to give tips to someone who KO'd me =/

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Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will
not bad i liked the personal about the avy... 7/10
Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"
not bad okay wordplay 7.3/10
Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500
hahah funny personal and okay multi...7.5/10
Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?
OMG this had me cracking up...9/10
You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"
eh not that good 5/10
Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch
OMG anotha killa 9/10
.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself
eh coulda been a good line but the set up wasnt great 6/10
He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode
not a bad finisher8/10

all in all i would say not a bad verse... keep dropin shit man

soc you hoe....

I'm sorry I don't dr Triple. -_-

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And BTW this is my thread.

NOT yours.

So don't judge in here.

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umm i never said anyone DR's in here

but you used to DR me back in the day

when i ghosted for you

You hoe cake... I rule you

You ghosted for me?
LMFAO

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yes i did twice

You killin me kid.
You never had anything to do with my verses.
Please don't try and score brownie points and start beef.
We're in the same crew on RB after all.
=/

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oh yeah thats right... but that is RB this is RV lol

and i did... even if you didnt know it

^^wordizzle nizzle

*Pisses on this whole forum*

and mike u didnt win cuz revokes vote is gettin Dq

Blah comin back bitches

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Ok so anyways, I was bored, I took out the 4 lines from my battle ya didn't like, and keyed up 4 others, what do you think now???

Troop rocks women's braclets, he's a homosexual for sure
Rv's first ever transvestite, so I guess he really is a troop'her'!
Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy
*troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money!
Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling
he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and
...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading!
Troops got a slow brain, what's up with only 8 lines?
Guess the "**" around his name represent the quality of his rhymes!

Aight, keystyle rate ho

Troop rocks women's braclets, he's a homosexual for sure
Rv's first ever transvestite, so I guess he really is a troop'her'!
forced to death..wack
Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy
*troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money!
lol
Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling
he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and
...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading!
lmao...type stretched though
Troops got a slow brain, what's up with only 8 lines?
Guess the "**" around his name represent the quality of his rhymes!
ehh...

Don't use an opener like that ever again...other lines were iight tho.

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