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Old 06-18-04, 04:03 AM   #196
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Wow, played "Osama" lines, I'm thoroughly impressed
Does knowin that I'm lightyears ahead of you make you depressed...

You must be "buzzin" to think you can even hold a candle
There ain't no need to "wax" this chump, he's been had by too many vandles...

But you keep on piecin together those shitty lines and thinkin you servin a purpose
Meanwhile, me and the rest of RB.com will keep knowin you're worthless!
 
Old 06-18-04, 06:42 AM   #197
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the bitch has pulled crap, full wack, obviously poetic proff not in it to rap..
the kid just wants a rep... but 6 lines and cant even make syllables match..
lines stretch like spandex, you got nothin on what the band rep..
i demand best quality standards ... your rhyme fails all aspects..
to rap you gotta come hard... and all your hits argueing the wrong things..
if i was the guy 'bove you, i wouldnt give a shit what rb.com thinks..
unlike this bitch my life aint online, .. new emcees aint been real in a long tome, mostly..
been rappin for years, vet at the cyphers, freestyle in real life-but how low my posts-be..
this site aint reality i dont give a fuck bout net respect in retrospect...
who cares bout what unkwown vets think, plus been a while since i seen different shit..
this cypher-thread packs a bread and water of rhymes that gotta be more unique..
look at all the info the 'pute-leaks, all the noobs be conformin like the 30's in munich..
todays been one of the worst days... and to top it off had to cope with what this nerd-layed..
just pissed me off... no idea.. uses speechmarks and thinks hes dope with wordplay..
the worst-haste, rushed verse-placed, with meaningless meta's, u rap but who let ya..
brings letters, like scratches on records, repeating and mixed up like lectors vendettas..
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Old 06-18-04, 10:14 AM   #198
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man look at this female one man band
ill grab some maskin tape n beat till u dead u with one hand
so u been rappin for years punk? then why u still shit?
your like burnt match that aint been lit, little bitch
seriously, y u call yaself a one man band
i know, because your crew involves, you, yourself and your imaginary friend
u should change your name to susan and get bitch slapped
wear a skirt, makeup, n carry ya mans mac
your flows whak, for real punk im fuken outta here
cuz your worse than a hustla thats been out for a year
 
Old 06-18-04, 10:20 AM   #199
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one-man-band needs to learn his place caus he's embarresin the hip hop race
I'm here to teach lesson's expressin my superiority but I need breathing space
The air is polluted by someone's dilluted rhymes, and I ain't got the time to get through to this man
I ain't pointed no fingers, but by the sound of it, it's one-man-band
So I'm just gonna kick it wit em and fucking kick em to the curb
Yah neeed to stop playing around and start conjugatin' some verbs:

I’ll stomp your face in the ground and make you fart out dust-
Roll over you in my ride and leave deep cuttin’ ruts -
Should’ve watched yah back caus you know I’m trouble -
Mop the floor with yah ass and have you burp out bubbles.
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Old 06-18-04, 11:42 AM   #200
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this bitch came here and thought shes a star/
earlier yesterday she had no identity, but now shes rockin my avatar/
id rather die then see a wack femcee succeed with her rhymes/
cause a hard workin nigga like me deserves to shine/
hoops would eat you alive/
throw the bones away, circle back around and stomp you a second time/
im known to destroyin young maidens in they sleep/
before they find they prince charmin, i desolate in they fuckin dreams/
this chick prolly look more manly then me/
cause dirty south femcee bitches are WEAK/(facialy)
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Old 06-18-04, 12:06 PM   #201
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Look like this fake as nigga comin' back for more, like an unpaid whore/
I'll use my fucking verse to knock you down, not one, but several floors/
hoops just clacking keys, ain't really watching what he writin/
He's bouncing like one of them fish, somwhat like a whiting/
This dude's flopier than my C:disk drive/
When I think you can't stoop lower, you motherfuckin dive!/
Your queerer than the dudes who act on the Wiggles /
My response to your “fatal” blows- “HEY THAT TICKLES!”/
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Old 06-18-04, 12:25 PM   #202
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this girl really thinks she got what it takes to match my skill/
i saw no flow, metas, and her punches were weak as hell/
i bet when she hits the stage, she breaks her own leg and a ligement/
id say you was a pussy, but then id just sound ignorant/
ill make you change colors like my verb skills fucked up ya pig-a-ments/(pigments)
you only worth 3 bars of my time, cause ya verse wasent hittin shit....
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Old 06-18-04, 12:43 PM   #203
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weak as hell, you say, but I got legions of demon's on my track/
think you got me beat, but I must say that verse is whack/
If god blessed you man, I'd hate to see him curse you, man!/
You ain't even listed on V.I.P, least of all in "God's Plan"/
The more you keep running your mouth, the more other's see what I'm talking about/
You're destination is failure, why don't you try another route/
I have pussy, yet that's more dick than this crooked boy will ever have/
You a number's man? C'mon, let's do the fucking math/
LOW CLASS + SOMEWHAT LIKE MORASS = YOUR SORRY ASS/
You think you treasure, but yah just another man's trash/
I rhyme hardcore; like Edgar Allen Poe, you'll end up "NEVERMORE"/
I'm the type of shit niggas brace themselves for/
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Old 06-18-04, 12:57 PM   #204
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haha.. this is fun.. im bored as fuck are u ?.. ne way.....

well i told you, dirty south bitches are men/
and i guess that verse was tight..... if your ten/
are you serious..... i hate to burst ya bubble, but *POP*/
you think some type foxy brown, when actually....u NOT/
all filler, after reading dat shit i doubt i could be any iller/
go climb the highest piller, you still would be below my skill-girl/
verbally safe, i'll leave you in a murderin state/
you a permenent fake, murmmin snake thats about to be verbally slain/
i'd hate drop the mic, physically abuse this chick/
but i dont think i could take, seeing she said got more dick than this 8==================================D
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Old 06-18-04, 01:11 PM   #205
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Yeah, I'm pretty much bored. You really think I'm whack? *sniffle* lol

Okay, check it-
I don't know where the hell you're from, but you besta learn some manners/
Cus you got some serious flaws, evident in therapthy as well as cat scanners/
The South get crunk, yo, we show you how we throw them bows, yo/
Don't blink man, cus you might end up on the floor, yo/
You couldn't physically abuse me even if I handed you a crow bar/
This dumb fuck would hand it back to me and say, "I don't want to spar."/
Why the long face man? You depressed because I'm an Ace, man?/
While you're lines rust, I stay fresh like I'm in Never Ever Land, man/
I'm stacked, yo, and I know that you wouldn't mind hittin' this from the back/
But sorry, yo, like Petey Paublo, "I ain't drunk enough to do that."
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Old 06-18-04, 01:21 PM   #206
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nah you strait... im tryna elavate sicne i got nothing else to do right now... dont start work for a weak....

from now on, ya nicknames "verbally abused rooky", lyrically confused nooky/
if you ratteld my cage, be the only way that you have "shook" me/
and you wouldnt hear my speech even if in ya ear i said it/
dont call ya raps "connecting", cause like missed calls we dont get-em/
i spit acid like rain, and hit people liek trains/
like a retarded surgeon, dont expect to afterward be the same/
just call my brain a fight club, cause while you on stage ima cut ya mic-plug/
the audience gets a moment of peace, then you pick another mic-up/(lol)
im really pleading, you got my ears bleeding, id hate to hear you on a bad day/
u not succeeding, like a def traffic-leader, you wont hear me knockin you out of my-way/

im use stealth and character, no body will marry her, shes a farry whos will never grant a wish according to fary-tales, its written.
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Old 06-18-04, 01:23 PM   #207
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Old 06-18-04, 07:26 PM   #208
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... whats with the "motha fucka" at the end... last bit was ok but the first half of that was so wack..

and props to hoops for elevating.. been feelin some of your new rhymes
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Old 06-18-04, 11:03 PM   #209
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And the femcee get's ignored? I'm so dissapointed. I might go jump off a buidling now.
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Old 06-18-04, 11:57 PM   #210
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Miss. Lyricist, no beef, but here we go.

14 teen yrs and U still aint grow Up/
I'll make U feel like Ur breast, debating wether or not to show Up/
My rymes enter Ur mind through a course in Ur spine and make Ur thoughts just blow Up/
Cuz I dont battle Femcee, I battle Lyricist/
so choose Ur name wisly, or I'll twist Ur head like in the exercist/
My text messages skip the phone and enter straight through Ur eyelids/
U'll wish there was a form of aspirin to stop the pain of my lyrical violence/
I'll catch U off gaurd, like this was Perl Harbor/
Fuk U till U bleed, then maybe next time U'll come harder.
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