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09-25-04, 04:27 AM
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banned:to good 4 all da other rappers UNBEATABLE *lyrical madnes*
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IP:
yo step up to da stage i break u nose with 1 punch u didnt c it comin i am to fast i wil get my 1st win on u at last ill hit u hard down to tha floor soon it will be past//
beats u to da ground u got things on u head u got nocked out n thats without a dout i will kill u with a few slices ------- u dead drop to tha ground dont try n frown at last// ill put u tho pain pain ull wanna die ill shot u just to put u tho ur missary from u los uve lossed ill hurt u until u toss u got no chance i got skill that u anit got tha right// ill make diein ur game fuck ur wacko rhymes dont hit me 1 bit they just rebound ur weak so they hit u harder than some shit heads ryhmes ill push u from a sertain hight// just a quick 4 lines holla atta me |
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09-25-04, 04:33 AM
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..G Clique..
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IP:
^^thatz four linez??? thatz like a fuckin paragraph u gotta shortin that shit down man it duzn't even ryhme cuz u made tha linez so long i'm not in tha council but jus sum feedback
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09-25-04, 04:34 AM
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#3
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Whys That?
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IP:
sorry man wasnt really feeling it... If you want you can drop somthing else. But from me it's no ...
.........pz |
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09-25-04, 04:36 AM
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banned:to good 4 all da other rappers UNBEATABLE *lyrical madnes*
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IP:
i alway used to get told to strech my fuckin bars so i did
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09-25-04, 04:40 AM
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#5
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..G Clique..
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IP:
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no don't stretch that shit it makez it not rhyme thatz wut freeway duz an thatz why he suckz left nut cuz his barz r long as hell eva heardah da phrase short an sweet thatz wut u need 2 make it an it needz ta flow so work on that iight good luck man  |
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09-25-04, 04:39 AM
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banned:to good 4 all da other rappers UNBEATABLE *lyrical madnes*
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IP:
ok here it gose if im not in from dis then fuck it
snap ur backs until it gets into my realty// fuck ur face up until u c gravity// fuck this shit if this dotn get me// i will make meself a big 1 ull c// i am only a newb to start but i will turn out// my rhymes our not wack thats without my dout// quick linez u dont like um thats ok if u do holla atta me |
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09-25-04, 04:43 AM
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#7
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banned:to good 4 all da other rappers UNBEATABLE *lyrical madnes*
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IP:
k wot do u think of dem 1s
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09-25-04, 05:06 AM
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#8
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Whys That?
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IP:
still not feeling it. when you elevate man drop another 1. But for now I say no.........
.......pz |
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09-25-04, 05:21 AM
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banned:to good 4 all da other rappers UNBEATABLE *lyrical madnes*
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IP:
fuck ya den ill just do my own crew
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09-25-04, 12:46 PM
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#10
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~Whos Next?~
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IP:
ayo u wanted a link, here it is. keep in mind i have better battles but this one i did KO the guy.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149815
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16 KOs 19 WINS 
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09-25-04, 01:46 PM
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Turbulence Is Nice
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IP:
da vinci said i was in through a pm......one of yall send me the p word.............
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09-25-04, 04:06 PM
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#12
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~Whos Next?~
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IP:
hey let me know... for my other battles just go to search and type in my name. i know i can bring some skill to the council
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16 KOs 19 WINS
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09-26-04, 02:52 AM
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#13
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Whys That?
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IP:
yo big p . you with n.o.k ?
Good luck ...............pz |
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09-26-04, 03:00 AM
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#14
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THE COUNCIL
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IP:
@ talk to Chi bout a sig.
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09-26-04, 03:17 AM
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Whys That?
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IP:
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ok. What do you reckon about ruff thuff thug. personnaly I say no.But it still need's to be discussed. |
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