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Old 11-05-09, 11:03 AM   #1
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Oh yeah homie if you need some pointers hit me up. I was trying to be a writer for television show a few years back. Even almost got into cal-arts (California Institute of the Arts.) Ivy League art school but couldn't get the funds to attend . My uncle told me whenever I finish my first draft of my book or idea of a television show with a script, He would introduce me to Mel Gibson in Valencia, Ca. But things happened and now I'm using my skill for writing sermons and bible studies lol. If you need help or want me to check out your work hit me up bro. You just reminded me how much I loved writing stories. I'll msg you the link later to the rough draft I had.



No doubt man...preciate it...I'd aways wanted to write a book...But, every time I started, I lost interest in the story-line and nixed the project. That happened about 3 times. This idea came to me in the form of a dream...I do believe God gave me this vision. So, I read some movie scripts--e.g., Pineapple Express, Beetle Juice, among others--and started writing mine.

Just 2 days in, I already have 20 pages written. It's an interesting process...

But, I will DEF. hit you up if I need more pointers on it...








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Old 11-05-09, 02:45 PM   #2
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Oh yeah homie if you need some pointers hit me up. I was trying to be a writer for television show a few years back. Even almost got into cal-arts (California Institute of the Arts.) Ivy League art school but couldn't get the funds to attend . My uncle told me whenever I finish my first draft of my book or idea of a television show with a script, He would introduce me to Mel Gibson in Valencia, Ca. But things happened and now I'm using my skill for writing sermons and bible studies lol. If you need help or want me to check out your work hit me up bro. You just reminded me how much I loved writing stories. I'll msg you the link later to the rough draft I had.


Hahaha... few days ago you were boasting about making 200k a year and being able to do anything you wanted.

You're such a hack.

Also, I'm not talking shit, I'm just being realistic. Truth hurts.
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Old 11-05-09, 06:52 PM   #3
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Hahaha... few days ago you were boasting about making 200k a year and being able to do anything you wanted.

You're such a hack.

Also, I'm not talking shit, I'm just being realistic. Truth hurts.



After we lost our buisness I went back to college trying to use the skill i already have. Um, yes the truth does hurt. And I wasn't boasting. I simply stated I had that life before, and I'm more happy with the life I have with God more than I ever had with that much money.
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Old 11-05-09, 11:58 AM   #4
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fa sho bro!! Nice 20 pages? thats good man. Yeah writing scripts is way different from writing books lol. It's interesting how the scripts go right? lol. Its fun to free write as you write the story, but for me, it would be 1000x to write a story line first than edit it as you go. Makes it a lot more easier, and you can add anything to the story line later on. Best of luck on that homie
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Old 11-07-09, 09:48 AM   #5
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weren't you going to have a track out with common? And make some album that was going to be the hottest thing to hit the stores? Now suddenly those ideas don't exist anymore and you want to be a screenplay writer and get a film made and put in theaters from the first screenplay you've ever wrote because you got the idea from your subconcious picking up the images of your imagination during the end proccess of your sleep and you decided it was a sign from God?

Umm... ok. Good luck
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Old 11-07-09, 09:20 PM   #6
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Is this gonna be an adaptation of CALI's book?
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Old 11-08-09, 09:05 PM   #7
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^LOL worddd.

and word screenplay writing is the shit. couple scenes away from having a completed pilot episode.
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Old 11-10-09, 12:09 PM   #8
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^LOL worddd.

and word screenplay writing is the shit. couple scenes away from having a completed pilot episode.



nice man...do it up...

It is fun tho...

I find the time flies when I get into the story.

I've been writing mine for less than 7 days and I already have 40 pages.

I plan to go to about 100...


FUnny tho...as I see the story in my head,...I'm actually telling myself I have to speed things along or I will run out of "time"...space, rather









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Old 11-10-09, 02:49 PM   #9
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Yeah shit just flies. I've stopped writing since school started, but i usually beast during breaks.

But word, I've been doing so much shit on the story, that I feel like I know my main characters. Almost like they real people, as corny as that sounds. So you get a sense of what they'd say or do in certain instances.
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Old 11-16-09, 09:51 PM   #10
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Old 11-16-09, 10:27 PM   #11
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P.S. Here's a synopsis:
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Four inner-city high-school youths forge a unique bond with their new

teacher, Mr. Harvis, who forms a mentoring group called The Young Warriors,

based on the teachings from the military classic "The Art of War". After the

four friends enroll in the program, their strength and loyalties will be

tested as each struggle to overcome hardship and personal tragedy.
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Old 11-17-09, 01:58 AM   #12
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my story is about a handful of at-risk teens and the trials and tribulations they face while studying the writing(s) of sun tzu in their teacher mr. h's after school program.

i call it "classroom conans".

*rushes to copyright and trademark his idea before any netcee decides to up and steal it.*





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Old 11-17-09, 01:59 AM   #13
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lmao. im bored.


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Old 11-17-09, 02:16 AM   #14
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Old 11-17-09, 02:30 PM   #15
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Funny...

But, I'm onm page 75 already...will have this done in less than a week...copyrghted...and ready to pimp


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